The First Heretic Under the Virgin

As of Chapter 19, we don't think we know any direct evidence that the protagonist may be a time traveler. The protagonist is a poor man who was extracted from the sludge with the ability to read minds. The last protagonist who gave me the same feeling was an "idiot" (especially in the main line state) The author's writing style is sophisticated, the vocabulary is complex, and he uses the most traditional immersive writing method. If you can read it without haste, it will be a fairy tale.

Open it, take a look at two pages, and take a look at the writing Which old man is this reincarnation of?

The author's writing skills are amazing, allowing me to read it all in one go in a Western fantasy setting. There is no invincible plug-in + a leap in strength, but it makes me happy to write about daily life The overall style is similar to that of Kingdom of Nations, a serious Western fantasy style, but the protagonist has a lower background and stronger extraordinary power in the world, so a mind-reading plug-in is given to allow the protagonist to survive in this malicious world The gods are supreme and the nobles are extremely arrogant. They all feel that the other is a worm of the country, and thus begins a series of overt and secret struggles In this context, the character currently displayed is an arrogant conspirator. She somehow knows the specialness of the protagonist, and it is like making the protagonist his own tool, making it difficult for the protagonist to survive only by himself The saint helped the protagonist and let him escape from the slums and come to the Church College-Servant Camp, but she also secretly wanted to drag the protagonist into the abyss and make the protagonist surrender to her wholeheartedly The protagonist came to the servant camp to obtain extraordinary training, and at the same time faced the overt and secret struggles between priests and nobles, relying on mind reading, using his own strategies and conflicts between the two parties to survive, and then become stronger

I feel like there will be a lot of hype about Saint in the future, but I don't know whether Saint will strike first or the protagonist.

It may be my personal opinion, but in an extraordinary world, you have so many chapters, and the protagonist has no fighting power except for Goldfinger.

It is a novel with fairy grass. The author's writing is excellent. The protagonist is brave and strategic. He should be cowardly or courageous. The combat power is also controlled very well. There is no system. But the disadvantage is that the protagonist does not upgrade very much. The saint girl as a gimmick has little plot. When Shinichi takes action, the protagonist has no countermeasures. At the same time, the protagonist's purpose is not clear, he just wants to stay alive Just looking at the title, you might think it's a tug-of-war between a sinister saint and a mind-reading protagonist, but in fact, due to the huge gap in strength and status, the protagonist has no ability to resist And we don't know what the saint wants, nor what the protagonist can do It can only be said that the author wants to write a long novel, but he doesn't have the ability to plan an outline, nor the patience. Even the title and introduction are in the short video and fast-paced style Compared with other works, another shortcoming of this work is that the character description is very good, but the character design is not likeable, and there are no special enough characters.

This is a male channel that keeps writing about palace fights. It's normal.

The author is very capable. The intrigues are well written. There is nothing wrong with the world view. The writing style is the biggest advantage But the problem is that there are too many intrigues and there is no clear main line. Simple palace fights really make people uninterested. Your writing method may be OK on female channels, but it cannot support a book on male channels.

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I stopped reading after about 30 chapters. I jumped to watch it again A palace fight in a superpower world? What do you think? That's not to say that it can't be done, it must be done with a purpose. The protagonist is passively involved. As of more than 40 chapters, the protagonist has no personality charm and cannot resonate with readers. Also, the writing style is quite good, but it just misses the point. The description of the environment should be related to the plot. If you write it all at once, you will not be able to feel the atmosphere of the plot, which is meaningless. Also, I don't even know what the main plot of this book is. What purpose those magic sticks fight to achieve, and what changes will occur when the protagonist participates are all vague.

Okay, it was cut after only 120,000 words, which is disappointing.

If Sabi didn't even write the book, why would he push it over?

The writing is very good and the writing is very fluent. Are you opening a trumpet or are you here to preach? 😃😃😃

The first chapter is very vivid and three-dimensional, and the concept of the protagonist being a person is well grasped. People have seven emotions and six desires, greed, anger, stupidity, suspicion, and seven virtues. Don't worry about things that are not your own, and take advantage of the situation to do what is right and wise.

Big brother. Can the Saint have more scenes? It's for the saint.

The writing is good, but the story is too old and I have no motivation to follow it.

🌿How can I get on the daily guide after all this?

Love purification agreement, the evil god selects some girls as his chosen ones, and gives them the powerful ability of modifiers to do whatever they want (hypnosis, ntr, transparent world) And the protagonist must rely on the power of love to make them voluntarily give up their modifier abilities (urban daily life, superpowers, love) Similar places: interacting with the saint character (strong, flawed) The protagonist has to face a powerful divine choice (saint). There is no chance of victory in a head-on fight, but the protagonist has an intelligence advantage (mind reading) and can fight from the side The saints also have their own shortcomings, but the protagonist can rely on his own operation to pull the saint. No matter how strong the saint is, she should have her weaknesses (stupidity, parents, ability limit) And after the saint has gone crazy, the author will also write some of the saint's advantages to complete the character image Other character portrayals: They should be more likable and write some friends of the protagonist to lighten the atmosphere. Because the saint is too strong, the protagonist must get help At the same time, there should be a clear goal at each stage, such as: when they first meet, the goal is to gain a good impression. Understand deeply and discover the shortcomings of the saint - and find ways to solve the problems caused by this shortcoming. Finally, solve the shortcomings of the saint and improve the relationship between the two parties Cool points and jokes: You can't just deal with the dilemma without thinking, you should have some fun after solving the dilemma The most classic one is that the saint doesn't want to see the protagonist, and then the protagonist manipulates the protagonist to gain favor, and the saint likes the protagonist. The saint tormented the protagonist, and after the protagonist figured out a solution, the protagonist found a way to restrain the saint (called a parent) The plot and character description of this book were good, but the character design and character interaction were too poor. Of course, if the author says that the Saint is just a gimmick, and only wants to write about conspiracy, fight monsters and level up, then treat it as if I didn't say that

There are too many rhetorical techniques and environmental descriptions, coupled with the psychological description of the characters like a magician. It's both good and bad. I felt very tired after reading Chapter 28 and had no desire to continue reading. I'll give you a few recommendation votes and cheers for the author.

Don't understand the logic of how this world works? How to produce food and clothing daily necessities?

Are you serious about weighing 48?

It feels like I used to watch Pangu Chaos' Demon King Nanny. Unfortunately, no one has watched this plot now. Very good book, what a pity

As the title states, the author writes well, but the delay in introducing the extraordinary system makes me a little bored, and the two early villains have too much writing to support. If the author is preparing for the next part, it is best to flexibly throw out the basic world view settings and early plots, and bury some long-term or short-term introductions, such as the protagonist learning to grow. Type ability, people look forward to or are destined to meet certain people again, but are temporarily separated due to reasons such as class status, etc., Or there are key explosive points in the development of some important events. At least people have several things to look forward to, and there is a certain guarantee in following up. I still hope that the author can continue to write books. After all, there are not many books that meet my appetite.