Curse Return: the Sixth Oldest in the System, with the Soil Template at the Beginning

It's this disgusting pattern of cheating on the protagonist and forcibly suppressing the protagonist. Disgusting, shit!

I have just read three or four chapters, and I don't know what the follow-up will be. Since there are not many chapters, I would like to make a small suggestion. If you only focus on this world (curse return), just arrange an Obito panel. It is really enough! If it involves (traveling, changing maps) other worlds, you can arrange other templates. Don't think about having both! We have to consider the actual situation. The world view of Curse is only so big. If you create an Obito panel, you can't just kill people indiscriminately, but you can still kill them indiscriminately! If other templates are added, such as Hashirama, Madara, Otsutsuki, and the like, it would be an exaggeration to say that a cannon can kill mosquitoes, and it is also cumbersome. Except for satisfying a small number of readers who have a collecting habit, there will be no other advantages. To give an exaggerated metaphor: It's like you traveled to the Demon Slayer World and awakened the Link Panel. You were already invincible, but then you awakened some Saiyan Panel ~ Super Saiyan Panel ~ All-King Panel ~ and so on. Do you think this book will be good to read?

What the hell is a flower protector? Using urban templates in light novels? Innovation is not such a creative method. I can say that the author has amazing wisdom.

The writing is outrageous. First of all, the original heroine is meaningless. I wonder why you wrote about Deer Island when you wrote about Wild Rose, which is somewhat interesting to the protagonist? Are you asking her to transfer to Tokyo? Killing the knotweed in front of Fushihei is the worst of the worst. When the knotweed starts to swallow Su Nuo's finger, he will find an excuse to go away and wait for the knotweed to swallow the finger before coming back. Now, can't he find an excuse to save Wild Rose and wait for the knotweed to go berserk and become Su Nuo before killing the knotweed? It can also be said that the knotweed was killed as a last resort after it could not recover.

Those who were deceived into entering and then exited after being deceived by the introduction... Brother, if you don't know how to write invincible articles, don't make the introduction look like an invincible article. This will lead to a discrepancy between the attracted readers and your actual audience

😅😅 I was really speechless. In the tiger-killing battle, you can secretly form a clone technique in advance to create two shadow clones, and then one uses the transformation technique to use fire escape, and the other becomes a weapon. When the two work together, they can easily kill the tiger warrior in front of the protagonist. The protagonist actually ends up on his own. Is this also called a ninja? Anyone who has played some ninja games will not be so stupid. Don't tell me that the Obito template doesn't affect regular ninjutsu like the Clone Transformation Technique, the Substitution Technique, and similar camouflage invisibility techniques. Or let the shadow clone fight directly and cooperate with one using earth escape to steal the tiger stick, and the other behind him to use ninjutsu. The protagonist has Obito's template, but he doesn't look like a ninja at all. There's no way the author hasn't watched Naruto. 😄

There are two questions in the second chapter. There is no mention of Obito in which period. Gojo Satoru has no lower limit in physical skills. It is impossible to hit him in pain.

I can barely read it, but I don't recommend it. There are serious omissions and typos, and I often make mistakes and ramble. For example, Maki becomes Zhenyi the next second, and the protagonist's name becomes Charlotte the next second. It's so outrageous, even if you look at pirated books, it's not that outrageous

The ability to return to the cursed space is not difficult, but rare is healing and time retrieval.

Emmm, you can choose a better partner for your confession. There are quite a few female characters in Juhui. Those who can fight and have outstanding personalities will give you a punch if there is no need. Even if you make confession a habit after the mission is completed, at least you can highlight a shameless character and show affection when in danger.

It's a bit baffling. Meeting Gojo Satoru is inappropriate in the examination room.

In the first chapter, he feeds the big guy and shamelessly goes to confess to the school beauty every day.

It's still very beautiful. I've given you the monthly pass. Come on.

Didn't Obito become the Ten-Tails Jinchuuriki? Why is 100% strength not the six-path mode? Eighty percent of them have the Ten-Tailed Psychic Beast, but the result is 100% not in the Six Paths mode.

Six Paths Obito is too difficult to defeat

The plot is such a mess. I may only think of this book when I take a shit someday. The author

It's so fateful to brush it while I'm pooping. Maybe I'll forget about this book after flushing the toilet.

I want to say something, the farmer beat him to death with three punches at the fw stall