Simultaneous Time Travel: I Rely on Myself to Become Stronger

I feel like I'm about to jump in. I've opened dungeons of four worlds for about 50 chapters. At present, I don't have much memory of the protagonists in each world. It's not without reason that I started with the Dead Sea of ​​Flowing Fire. Three long protagonists will be easier to remember.

One person can make movies and so on, and gain traffic fans (religion)

The writing is so good. The world changes at every critical moment, and six flies up. I really hate that so many people are watching it. Luo Tianjiao is about to be played, and he is about to watch the protagonist show off, but he changed it! Li Shimin returned with victory and was about to watch the crushing of Wagang Village. Changed! Besieged and exhausted, let the demon clan rescue him by the way. It depends on how to arrange it. Change it!

You must have a main body, with a few popular and long-running animations as the main body, interspersed with other worlds as auxiliary bodies. If the reading volume of other worlds is high, write more, if the reading volume is not high, write less, and pass it by in one stroke. In this way, almost every world is similar, and the perspective changes quickly, which will make readers have no desire to read.

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The author is really big-hearted. What's the use of creating so many worlds in the first place? From the beginning, the author did not introduce Goldfinger clearly, and then created other world communities. He also did not explain the shared space clearly. He just said that he was in contact, shared, and then shared what? Comprehension? Kung Fu? It seems like everything is actually blurry. The male protagonists in these three worlds have not yet talked about what their golden fingers are, what they can do, and how they will develop. Then I wrote a few chapters of one-person plots and started adding people. It's like before. What does the male protagonist in each world know, golden finger, at what point, how to develop, and the emphasis is not explained clearly. It directly switches to the Sui and Tang Dynasties, and then switches to another scene when the climax is reached. What did the author want to write? I want to write about a world with high martial arts value, but I also want to write about a world with low martial arts value in a balanced way. Then you are writing, why don't you describe the world of heroes? Jackie Chan's world is not written either, don't you understand it's first come, first served? Can you write about so many worlds at once? It's a mess, and I can't control the rhythm. What the author needs to do now is to sort out the future development routes of the male protagonists in each world, focusing on one world as the main line. There are clear arrangements for the development of the male protagonists in each world. For example, if the male protagonist plays the role of Erlang Shen in one person, how to arrange it. Practice skills, collect beliefs, how to combine the inheritance of other worlds to understand the path that suits you, and use these as the basis to arrange the appropriate time points to join the plot of one person, instead of not knowing how to take your own path, and mindlessly participating in the original plot, people only know that the male protagonist is strong, but where is the strength? What a strong method.

Assassin Wu Liuqi hasn't passed yet? One is that it is too long, and the other is that there is no core point in the same story. The shared abilities must be unique. I can't find the ability sharing in the world of Wu Liu Qi.

Let me give you some advice. You need to know why you are doing it? If you are doing it as a hobby. It's okay to write whatever you want. For the sake of money, you'd better consider the audience. You have to know that not everyone has read the works you wrote and so on. For example, the fox demon... I haven't seen it, and I'm not interested in it, so I definitely won't decide. For example, if you were to write about Journey to the West, hey, I've read it, and even if it's crappy at the end, I'd definitely read the first few chapters. If you don't read it, how would you know it's crappy? (If it's good, wouldn't there be motivation to continue?)

What I look at in the same passage is the cheating of combining the powers after the same passage. You didn't explain whether you can open a new world by joining forces, and it feels boring to still be at the bottom after joining forces.

The situation of each protagonist is unclear and cannot be connected.

At present, there is no one who can play with one person without being disappointed.

One person... Now the Tongchuan of the One Person Dragon Clan doesn't really want to read it. There are too many restrictions and too few good ones.

As mentioned in the title, I used power that did not belong to me to create two pictures of Fengsha Yan. In addition to AI, I even used P pictures.

After watching a little bit, I feel that the world I chose is not good. Let's not talk about the audience problem, but a weak plot and no long-term main line will be very harmful. And the world switching is not good. I have read a lot of novels, and there are very few that can grasp the world switching and length well.

It can be seen that the author really wanted to write well. But if you really don't have the strength and talent, you can still learn it. The writing style of his book "The Painted Skin of the Netherworld" is very good, and it is more suitable for learning to write online articles. I don't talk about the content, just the writing style. His book is very comfortable to read, and yours is just a pile of so-called adjectives, and the various descriptions in the novel cannot provide any useful key plot content. There is no plot at all after one chapter. There are also tape methods like your tape settings, such as cleverly designing the dialogue between two people, and letting a third person explain it instead of your own narration. Otherwise, it will appear that the protagonist is a duality between a retarded person and a genius, and the viewer will be very disconnected. Anyway, I don't think this kind of novice author can write such a genius protagonist, but you don't want to write a retarded character. No one with a retarded character will want to read it. Unless you have the writing skills of Daogui Medical Fairy, as well as plot design, and his protagonist is not that mentally retarded, right?

Collect follow-up maps, currently confirmed to be Under One Man, Journey to the West, Assassin Wu Liuqi, Heroes, Fox Demon, The Adventures of Jackie Chan, Super God, and The Great Desolation. (The order is not determined) Want to write: Jianlai, Xiuliao, Spirit Cage

Don't write the original plot of Under One Person, come up with something of your own.

I don't think the world chosen by the author is very interesting.

Why are you talking like that to Charles Logan? Fuck him, it's so annoying!

Just like the title, it's uncomfortable to watch. If you encounter any poisonous points, just say it and I will do my best to correct it.