Starting from the Huntian Baoding to Create the Supreme Immortal Clan

A major failure of this book is that the author just created something based on what he felt the protagonist needed at the moment. He completely forgot the initial setting or did not reread his novel carefully. He started to make trouble with the county magistrate at the ninth level of Qi training, but he could hide himself and treat himself as a mortal. Now he forgot the initial setting and suddenly wanted to use the Breath Condensation Technique, so he changed it to the Breath Condensation Technique... Then I really don't want to read this about Zhu Erzi's master. He joined the demon-slaying team after practicing the fourth level of Four Spiritual Roots for twenty-six years! It's still the fourth level of Qi training, and then Zhu Erzi, as long as he takes pills for two years, he can reach the fourth level of Qi training. This is not cheating. This is what the captain of the ninth-level Qi training and demon-slaying team said. The author writes the novel casually, not a little bit poisonous, and does not consider logic at all. This is completely because the author wants you to become a cheat even if you are building a foundation tomorrow. This is not interesting!

If you don't have two pounds of shit in your head, you won't say that you are a demon sect in public. Are you serious about naming the sect you created "Tiangang Tiger Demon Sect"?

This kind of early stage takes a lot of time, but the protagonists of most novels rise quickly and will conflict. Most novels of this type basically have eunuchs.

A very mediocre family novel, worth reading if you haven't read it. Evaluate based on what you have seen. It's all about family, and I wouldn't even copy it from Hong Kong family dramas. The fierce competition in cultivating immortals is so similar that I am speechless.

Chapter 17 The extremely poisonous loophole is unreasonable. Zhu Jiawu entered the martial arts a year later than the head of the Zhu Kaishan family. The protagonist entered the martial arts after he was one-third of the martial arts master. Why did he enter the martial arts before the protagonist? It is unreasonable. The martial arts qualifications and martial arts are not as good as his father! Even if you have blood spirit rice, it won't work. Practicing martial arts doesn't mean you can practice more and more as time goes by. There are limits.

Write about the Immortal Clan, and then you cannot take concubines. Write about the crowds of wives and concubines in the city. Just everyone eating, you eating shit next to you, the main contrast is elegance, right?

This novel has more poisonous points. Firstly, the main character has doubled his cultivation and his son has made a breakthrough. The main character has doubled his breakthrough, but it is still slower than his son's breakthrough. The author's reason is that he has to farm. Your family can't afford tens of thousands of taels of silver to hire a few farmers. Besides, even if you want to farm with blood rice, it should be faster than your son and daughter. Can thousands of acres of land be cultivated by your protagonist alone? The writing is mentally retarded. Secondly, everyone in the village knows that you farm gold. Meters, and the soil fertility has not been lost. The only difference in your family is the excrement collected. You also hired 10 dung collectors. Are these long-term dung collectors curious about what you collected? Did you spread the dung on 1,000 acres of land by yourself? Is it because the author deliberately ignored these places because of his poor writing skills? I will not mention more poisonous points. It is also a great irony that official cultivation can be equivalent to a person in the late stage of Qi refining without practicing.

The protagonist is a bit stupid. He knows how to use the hook. It will take ten years to start the game. He just leaves a little reserve and uses all the remaining money to hire long-term workers to cultivate the fields. The Juling Rice Tank can be cultivated at least five or six years in advance, not to mention eight or nine years in advance.

Why do you always worry about planting that broken ground? Stop practicing Qi and spinning around.

The Ren family's mother and daughter were too abstract. If you are not a relative, you are too weak to say anything and regret it.

100 After thinking about it, I can't stand it anymore. The author's understanding of cultivation knowledge is too one-sided, and he uses mortal things to solve cultivation problems. The character of the protagonist is also childish and changing, sometimes he is ignorant, sometimes he is deep, and sometimes he is mentally retarded. I don't want to complain about the rest.

Prices are very low. Thousands of taels were robbed from the village chief's house. Afterwards, he is as rich as before. There is no reality at all. There are many conflicts and it is very blunt.

It's hard to swallow. As a family with four warriors in troubled times, why do you want to contribute the secrets of your farming? Don't be too poisonous. Your cooking skills have contributed to golden rice. It can't be as lowly as ordinary rice. Golden rice is grown all over the world. Are there still poor people? You are playing these things in a world of cultivating immortals. I'm afraid you won't be disgusted and die too slowly.

So far, I have no shortage of money, but I have only bought a Tiger Fist. You don't need a knife or a sword to fight, just your fists~~

Can you successfully give birth to a baby weighing ten pounds in ancient times?

I plan to read all the books, but there are too few chapters. I don't like Manchu and Eight-legged essays, which is very harmful. Also, why doesn't the protagonist learn Wu Mai's martial arts skills? Either learn them directly or buy them again. Does he have to stick to a tiger fist to leave a weakness? I don't know how to use weapons either.

The protagonist is a bit too old. Do you think in modern times, in ancient times, a 35-year-old could be a grandfather?

Brother, you can't write hundreds of pages like this to cultivate immortality. The pace is too slow.

One chapter a day, this is becoming a eunuch

I saw at the beginning that the protagonist and his wife secretly ate spiritual rice at home. Their son had been practicing martial arts for 7 months and had not achieved any results. Then he realized something was wrong and he practiced martial arts. He secretly ate spiritual rice at home and also secretly gave some to his wife, but he refused to give it to his son who had been practicing martial arts for seven months. Is it worth the money?