Hong Kong Films: I Start by Taking on the Heist King Solo!

The beginning was good, and the story progressed reasonably well, but the climax was a bit bland. Also, the power-ups were too cumbersome, creating unnecessary emotional spikes that were jarring. For example, the scene where they slapped the handsome Kun felt completely out of place; it felt like a plot point in a climax was being pulled in by that. The power-ups should be simpler: enhanced physical abilities, increased melee and ranged weapon capabilities.

Why is the Deputy Commissioner a member of the Senior Inspectorate? What is the rank of the Deputy Commissioner? Chapter 21 also mentions that he is a Senior Inspector.

The tomato flavor is way too strong! O(╥╥)o...

With such a cool description, does it kill foreigners?

I saw it today and read it all in one go. It was pretty good 😄. Keep it up! I hope you write better and better!

This makes absolutely no sense. How do you explain the trajectory of your AK during the post-mortem analysis? I'm speechless. Or better yet, don't include the alarm; there aren't that many rules and regulations in the "Young and Dangerous" genre.

Another short and weak update? Or is it a two-in-one?

I followed the whole thing from beginning to end, and it stopped on October 31st? No way!

Too many flaws. There are some right at the beginning. 😤

Hmm, there's a sense of familiarity to it, like I've seen it several times before.