In the Mysterious World, I Started Practicing Daozang

I just read the latest chapter. So far, the author has some ideas, but there is room for improvement in terms of character relationships, psychology, and dialogue processing. The description of the fight scenes is very average.

It's very well written. I'll definitely order it if I keep writing.

Personally, I think the design of the previous book was quite good and it was pretty to read, but this book, on the contrary, is too cliché and ordinary.

To be honest, the title of the book is not as attractive as the previous one.

All I can say about this book is that there is no foreshadowing at all, nothing is explained clearly, and I didn't see how the protagonist's master was injured. Many plots are completely unconstrained.

Is the author really an innocent little virgin? All the women are "shy" and "hehe"... So imaginative

So many monthly tickets are all in vain, eunuch

This is the Jade Emperor. If you write it down, it will only explode beyond the limit.

His grandma's legs need to be cut off again?

The same God rewards hard work, the same extended characteristics. And the early stage resources are exactly the same as your routine. Did you copy it?

I also read the previous book, Goldfinger was good and creative, but it seemed too draggy and I didn't finish reading it. The points the protagonist gave me in the previous book seemed to be cheating, but I didn't find any way to unlock them. It was stuck on resources, talents, and even skills (although the protagonist optimized the ground level himself, he didn't see the advantages of the ground level at all, and it felt quite ordinary). I haven't read this one yet. I'll check it out later.

Generally, rewrites don't last long, so this is another sign of death.

This book is like "Immortal Life Begins with the Sword of Ignorance"

Thinking of the twelve tones of Yujing Tianlou

I feel that the author has nothing new, he is just writing a stupid, dark and rough book. Once you take action, you will be faster and harder. Whoever is stronger will be awesome. The martial arts competition is like a bullfight, with no skills at all. This is also a common problem in today's fantasy. I suggest the author take a good look at how famous martial arts masters wrote in the past. I especially recommend Sima Ling. Huang Yi learned his style.