My Doomsday Train Can Transform

Author, I have just read a few books about Doomsday Train. I would like to make a suggestion: 1. Don't be depressed. Name and criticize the most popular book at the moment, Accident One After Another. Even if the writing is good, you won't want to read it after reading two. 2. Don't portray yourself as a clown, because people in the apocalypse will be destroyed for their own sake. If you want to be bad, don't be stupid. He can't count on the protagonist's back trick, but don't be too smart or arrogant. 3. Enjoy it if you can. This plug-in is here to keep away from other people's living environment. Save up a big move and enjoy it for a while. Don't deliberately suppress the protagonist, which will disgust readers. I think the author's profile is very interesting and interesting, and it ultimately helps the author's new book become popular.

I feel that the level of superpowers is too outrageous. The two monsters I encountered at the beginning were both E-level. One was able to compete head-on with a train mecha with 750 times increased power, and the other had already started to play ghost wall-attacking. However, generally ghost-type wall-attacking uses illusions or mental interference abilities. Trains can also attack walls on the track. Most of them involve space capabilities. E-level has such powerful abilities, which is a bit over the standard. Oh my god, it won't happen in the later stage.

In the plot at the beginning of the book, the background of the zombie outbreak is in the fictitious Corel franchise country (overseas), because this kind of unrest cannot occur in the country. It is difficult to explain what the military and police are doing when the zombies break out. No matter how you write it, it will always be a high-risk 404. Everyone should understand this. But in order to make it as convenient for readers as possible, I designed Blue Star to be in a unified state. There is a Blue Star Federation that is higher than all the participating countries. It is currently led by China, and its culture radiates around the world, and its products are exported to the world. As a result, even if the protagonist group is abroad, they can speak Chinese unimpeded. They encounter domestic equipment and may encounter Chinese people anytime and anywhere. It is almost the same as domestic ones, but the ones who do nothing are definitely foreign military police. You can simply understand it as Blue Star = the great Eastern country in the parallel world. In the middle and late stages of the apocalypse, the concept of country will also be diluted and referred to as the Blue Star Federation.

You will know everything after reading the first three chapters. The same goes for the back. Only the fire can be seen.

Why are all the female characters in this type of book?

Why doesn't the protagonist go to the airport to find a plane, use his own ability to fly back to the country, and then take a picture of it in Xu Xu? Do we have to take the high-speed train there and fight with the enemy?

When did you start writing? If I hadn't had the habit of reading my own comments, I would have forgotten you 😅

It feels like I'm watching Ultraman as a kid. Can't hold on to Chapter 3

It's not hundreds of tons. Those monsters in the early stage were constantly fighting for strength. They had dozens of tons of power.

This introduction makes people have no desire. Is it true that some people think that starting a mecha invincible flow in a post-apocalyptic novel is better?