
Father, There Is Something Wrong with Your Faith
神父,你的信仰太不对劲
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 224k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternative Fantasy
- Updated
- 12mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The emperor's sacred number in Warhammer is 13, the way to judge whether a person is human is the skull, and the purpose of belief is for humans. Also added the self-character setting in Pinocchio's lie. The author is a bit complicated!
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Although the results may not be very good to others, as a newcomer, I am very happy to have such results. I have seen everyone's comments, but after all, it is a new book, so I am worried about affecting collection and reading, so some of them are set to be transparent. While ensuring that the quality and quantity of updates do not decrease, I will try my best to modify some loose parts and contextual connections and perspective changes that may be a bit confusing to read. Finally, and more importantly, because I am a college student, I have no financial pressure or employment pressure, so I will never cut books unless a major accident occurs. (After all, I think the characters in the book are also waiting for their own endings) But I still hope that everyone will read it more, please, please (。・ω・。) I hope you will be happy every day!
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The line of asking the gods could be better. This is what it looks like when the god next door invites Tiga. The sky is clear and the earth is full of spirits. Please sincerely invite Ultraman; Namo Tiga Light Buddha is left to be incarnated in front of the altar. Become an incarnation, beget an incarnation. The seven-layer transformation is infinitely wonderful. The divine soldiers are as urgent as the law! According to what he said, he changed it according to the serious prayer spell. It doesn't mean that it has to be as good as his. At least it doesn't look like the national destiny. It's embarrassing to look at.
Personally, I think the plot looks messy. Why? Because of many inexplicable reversals. Good guy? Bad guy? Spy? Either good or evil? Many characters appeared suddenly without any foreshadowing, and then suddenly reversed, and then reversed again, with no foreshadowing or foreshadowing. The previous ones could all be acting or illusions... I finished reading the first copy, and even though I read it through Crimson Eyes, I couldn't understand why the protagonist believed that the villain was not pretending to surrender but had actually cut off justice? Also, gray characters can be charming, but they can also be disgusting. I only saw Capricorn appear, and I felt that all the members of the Secret Service were evil. Only Onii-chan and Viper were not disgusting.
I feel like I need to think about the plot carefully.
Otherwise, the whole book will easily die halfway through.
In this kind of world, it's okay to find Mr. Qi. After all, he has the innate power to love.
Why don't you seek Yuan Shen? So stupid🙂
It's a bit messy, too out of the ordinary, here and there and then there
My imagination is okay,
But the outline and 🐛 were not very well done. You should be able to sign a contract, provided you write an outline first.
Things will get a little better after Chapter 38
It can be seen that Hudson Castle wanted to deliberately create a sense of chaos, but it was written too hastily and a lot of it was not laid out, so it seemed a bit messy. But after Chapter 38, going to hell begins, the writing is a little more fluent than before, and some specific details are added. (I feel like I'm starting to make an outline seriously) Don't be too eager to tell the story. It's better to perfect the details and framework of the story. Come on.
Introduction to laughter analysis
The English word for priest is father, and the English word for godfather is godfather.
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Some of my opinions
The writing is a bit choppy, the transitions are a bit stiff, and then the writing is too hasty. The characters appear too quickly and not profoundly. I hope the author can write better in the future.
It's still quite useful, I don't know if I can keep it later, so I'll save it first.
Heaven and Earth Useless Series Zhengmu Tiandi
How about recruiting the male protagonist of a series called Tiandi Wuwu, with the power of Tiandi, and then planting a sacred tree that can turn into a spaceship?
When reading this book, please be aware that you may feel a little insane.
A good family is more important. Respect and love each other. Treat your family as human beings. This kind of family is very, very important. Don't wait until you are old to figure out many things.