
Please Call Me Daluo Jinxian
请叫我大罗金仙
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 127k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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33Chapters
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Book title and content positioning are inaccurate
The name and introduction are in line with the golden principle and can attract readers at a glance. This is also the reason why your book collection is very high. You successfully retained readers at the beginning, but after you click in and start reading, the content and introduction title are seriously separated. Your book title and introduction can make readers think of the invincible posture of the protagonist Da Luo Jinxian, but the actual protagonist is a weakling and cannot be reflected at all. The title and introduction of the book are not very interesting even after several chapters. It can only be said that the title and introduction of your book attract readers who like the invincible flow, but the content is a regular upgrade flow, and even a bit bland. This creates a strong sense of separation between the book and the readers. The target customer group positioning of this book is not accurate, and the poor results are expected.
The article is not on topic
I have read dozens of chapters, and the ability shown is that of Taiyi in the introduction (still incomplete), which is not even the slightest difference from Da Luo. Just change the name and call it: Taiyi Immortal who works hard to revive!
All time and space are eternal and free, everywhere in time is Daluo, all worlds are included, the only infinite world is him and me, projections are everywhere, immortal and immortal Golden Immortal, Daluo Golden Immortal, what are you?
Take a look at the Fruit of the Path Across the Starry Sky and see how others write it.
The early stage can only be said to be foundation building. The most critical concept behind it is people, not monsters who control power. Let's put it this way. After developing the body, we forgot about the most important spine to maintain the humanoid structure. The most important thing is the balance of upper and lower body strength supported by the spine.
Strictly speaking, only those in the realm of Taiyi are immortal immortals, shrinking the past and future, transcending time and space, standing in chaos, and gaining energy from the chaos between existence and non-being. Because if an isolated system has no external income, the system will inevitably lead to disorder and destruction.
You can refer to the fact that there was a temple in the past, which was similar to yours, except that it directly ate people for life in the middle period, and replaced that person. You can't be beaten to death. As long as you don't jump out of the water, you can't change its shape. It has changed from three dimensions to four dimensions. It exists anywhere. As long as you think in your heart, it can be stored in your memory and even rewrite your cognition.
Essentially pretentious and slap-in-the-face articles, I feel like Qidian has no shortage of them, it's outdated.
What the hell, he's just a sewing monster, the kind who can't understand sewing. Rubbish
Read the first three chapters
The Great Qi Practicing Monk is powerful in foundation building With every gesture, he can command the world and be so terrifying In fact, he can't even step on the floor ten meters with one step A lot of words have been used to describe the momentum of the realm, but it is not as realistic as saying that the two of them fought, and the aftermath shattered the surrounding houses. Half of the content in Chapter 3 is almost redundant. I don't remember the realm setting. There are too many awesome words to describe the realm.
Who chants my name😰
Since it is a new method, the old cultivation level is not suitable for the new method. The book is called Daluo Jinxian, and the new method can continue to use the classical cultivation level.
I can only say that I am not a novice, and my writing style is quite good, but it is indeed a mindless and enjoyable article.
You can still read the introduction after cutting it, right?
Updated three days ago. Did you enter the palace?