Douluo: the Original Martial Spirit, I Punched Deliberately

Three huge flaws. 1. The name of the school is Zuan College, which is not as catchy as Notting College. The name is really ugly. 2. Soul bones are called blood river treasures in Dou Yi, let alone ten thousand years old, and there is no soul bone that Dou Yi cannot absorb. As long as it is a soul bone, an individual can absorb it. Dou Ercai made messy changes again. As long as a normal person gets the ten-thousand-year soul bone, he will use it as soon as possible. I didn't see Ning Rongrong's eyes widening when he saw the ten-thousand-year soul bone in the original work. 3. What you said about Zaun Academy using ten thousand year old soul bones to recruit the protagonist, I'm sorry, I just want to say that if you don't change the age of your book, you will drive away 60% of the readers.

I can only say that it is not a good review, not a rant. I want to make one point. The protagonist is at level 10. He is not going to get the soul ring. He is going to get the soul ring at level 20, just to make the first ring last longer. Let's not talk about other things. Can the speed of cultivation before getting the soul ring be the same as the speed of your cultivation after getting the soul ring? Picking up sesame seeds and throwing away watermelons. Secondly, you are wasting time just for the hundreds of years in the early stage. And you have no big background. The first ring is a thousand years. You really are not afraid of death. Oh no, do you really want to die?

{"NickName":"God Level Douluo","UserId":474174031} Author. Let the protagonist cultivate his qi and blood and create a qi and blood martial arts to refine his body.

Abuse Qian Renxue? It's really rarer than the giant panda. Among the 100 Dou Yiren books, can one of them beat up Qian Renxue? I taste the saltiness high and low.

It is unreasonable for Zu'an College to give away ten thousand year soul bones. You must know that ten thousand year soul bones are treasures of the blood river. They can change the foundation of a soul master family and can be passed down from generation to generation. Almost a hundred years

Are ten thousand year soul bones so common in Douyi? A little-known dean has it 😰

Zuan, is there such a school? Why does it sound like an alliance? It's neither three nor four.

The author would like to ask what the position of this book is among the original protagonists? Is it a good relationship? Is it an enemy? Or a passerby? Comic version? Novel version? Or the fusion version Sorry author

There are so many inexplicable original heroines, can you watch this?

Come up and take a bite first. Do you like to level up? Little Huo doesn't have enough to eat and gets beaten every day, but his soul power is low. You can lift hundreds of kilograms of stuff on horseback. What's wrong with his nature?

I only read the introduction, not the content, but shouldn't the main martial soul be more about choosing to strengthen the main body's soul skills? Why do I see so many attack skills? I don't feel that there are so many attack skills. As the saying goes, one move can be used all over the world. I feel that the protagonist's early skills are more important in the amplification type. You shouldn't choose so many attack skills. As long as your body is strong enough, what attack soul skills are needed? If you punch them all, they will die. Take my ordinary punch. If you don't die, give me a serious punch.

I worked hard to write a review of more than 300 to 400 words, and not one of them criticized the author. They were all good expectations for the work and personal opinions of a bookworm for more than ten years. As a result, the author directly deleted the review. I don't know why it was wrong. I had a hunch that my investment was going to be wasted 🪖

There are so many originals that I don't want to read them. Why did you write such a pair of original characters when you've already written fanfics?

I think this book is okay. If I don't skip the follow-up, I will keep reading it.

At the beginning, he was persuaded to quit. He had a top-level martial soul. He had been nourished since he was a child and had great strength. Then he was given three levels of innate soul power. You give your lower self understanding and leave room for a second awakening. But why is the protagonist the protagonist? You are innately full of soul power, so what if you awaken the god-level martial soul for the second time? Can readers complain more than the innate third-level soul?

Will Qian Renxue be beaten? Not accepting Qian Renxue? Who are the heroines?

I felt a little disgusted when I invited Salina. I felt that this was a bit licked. Just invite her once. Although she helped Li Nana, she would have suffered if you didn't show up. It can be said that you also saved her. The kindness has been repaid. She If you want to add it, add it if you don't. If you don't, you can reject it. You are still waiting for her to agree. How come you are so worthless? I don't want to read this section directly. I still hope that the author can change it. The previous article is quite good. But when it comes to Salina, I haven't introduced it a bit.

I quite like it. Bibi Dong from the previous book is loyal × gentle and considerate. It's not like I'm going astray. Wai's favorite is Bo Saixi. Believing and loyal, I feel like one of the few normal people. She is also a beautiful woman {"NickName":"God-level Douluo","UserId":474174031}

Author, in fact, I have probably guessed your next plot. With the current situation of this academy, it is impossible to get first place, so you have to help the team members improve their strength later. So what is the best way to improve their strength? That is jelly grass. After giving jelly grass to the team members, you will be at a huge loss. This is definitely not a good feeling. After all, you came to this academy for the soul bones. In the end, you paid more, so it will be a shame. So how do you solve this problem. The present person said that it doesn't seem to be a good idea to get soul bones now. After all, the places are limited, and it doesn't seem necessary if they are not older than 60,000 years old.

What about the protagonist's top laner Wan Hao, jungler Chu Yuxun, auxiliary Qin Nu, as well as the mid laner and AD?

I feel like the data after the original plot is too bad, it's like a eunuch.

It looks ok now, can there be more updates?