
Uchiha Madara Is the First Hokage
宇智波斑是初代目火影大人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 188k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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49Chapters
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It's the first time I've seen such a good Uchiha Madara
It writes that Uchiha Madara has become a celebrity's portable grandfather, and he is also a good old man who was innocently manipulated after knowing that Uchiha was exterminated.
Too boring and indecisive, you should write a female channel. What you wrote is unconvincing.
Read a few chapters
It was just Madara's fantasy before she was stabbed to death by a Hasi hot mom's thick breasts😏
Shennong
It is really weakened too much. Although I think rationally that the performance of Uchiha Madara in the book is almost reasonable, I still feel uncomfortable reading. The strength performance is just like a larger Uchiha Itachi, which is indeed a bit disappointing. The battle involving Uchiha Madara is rarely protracted, and there is no sense of oppression like when Uchiha Madara first appeared in the original work. It is lacking in excitement. I don't mention the logic of the story, but only the logical performance of the characters. Basically, there is no big problem.
The writing is good and the subject matter is good, but I always feel that Ben's character design is wrong and he doesn't have the charisma of an Uchiha.
Open a new book, welcome your critical comments
The speed and update time of the code words during the recovery period are not stable You can scold me if you think it is poisonous, although I will delete it, but this also proves that your critical comments have been seen by me, and running in both directions is probably a good thing The Hokage just read it once, and flipped through the formula book every now and then. If there are any mistakes, I welcome corrections After all, I am a fan, and there will still be more or less my own nonsense, so be it ()
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The writing is really good. I have saved it and will continue to read it. I wish the novels will sell well. By the way, I would like to use Guibao to promote my own novel, "People are pirates, but they are cannon fodder in the reincarnation space" Infinite flow, main world, pirate world, copy world, Naruto world, Bleach world, Dragon Ball, and other worlds. After the protagonist Goldfinger is killed, he will plunder the opponent's attribute points. Samsaras and dungeon natives can all plunder them.
Are you writing about Madara Uchiha?
Momojijiji, the water will be better.
Take a seat
Taking advantage of the fact that there are few people now, take up a comment position.
Very good subject matter, but there are too few, I will save some first 🙂
The writing is okay. There are no obvious problems with the character design in Chapter 7, at least I didn't find any.