Otto: What Happened to My Old Man Jia Qiang Yidian?

Just like Tiga. He is a dark warrior himself. But the big drum is light. It becomes light.

None of the main characters and supporting characters are normal. It reminds me of the fantasy of middle school and high school kids.

Almost all the characters are stereotyped, especially the protagonist.

Now Cheng Ze and now Da Gu, it makes my head hurt to watch! Does the author have a weak sense of distance? What does it mean to repel dozens of meters... Also, don't use symbols in your words!

Don't add a bookshelf, I'm going to screw some screws. See you in the next Ultraman!

I am shamelessly asking for a follow-up reading. I know that my writing is not good. There are many poisonous points. The huge poisonous point of going to the Kingdom of Light has been changed. Some people think this book is ridiculous, but there is nothing I can do about it. I have talked to many big guys and read a lot of information about the Internet. The writing is good, but the character design is still not established, and the sense of immersion is also very poor. The plots are all copied from the original work. Maybe this is a common problem for newcomers, but it will be changed, and there will be updates. I will resume the 4,000-word update today, and if I catch up, I will update it four times. Of course, if the writing is not good, you can spray it, but don't spray it too harshly, in which case I will set a transparent sticker. (Jpj) [A young author who is still learning.