In the Red Age of the World, the Refrigerator Is Refreshed Every Day

The writing is okay, but the lyricism is a bit too much. Supposedly, I have written several books, and it feels a bit superficial. If you just casually lament that the word count is slim, you can still read it.

Please reply from the author. Is the book finished?

It has the characteristics of the times, all 28 votes support it!

The green tea I have been licking for a long time has gone to the countryside. My brothers and sisters have gone to the countryside, my childhood has gone to the countryside, and many of my classmates have gone to the countryside. Then I write about a female neighbor who is unwilling to go to the countryside. The description is particularly miserable, as if she is going to be arrested and shot. What kind of capitalist little princess is she?

If you are not a Shanghainese, please leave voluntarily. The whole article is in Shanghainese. I don't know whether it is for self-entertainment or because the author thinks he is superior to others.

Did these two little boys save the author's life? The cautious and cautious persona established for the protagonist in so many previous chapters was completely forgotten when it came time to write the little plot. The two gatherings were all about meat. The first time was for homeless people who brought all kinds of braised meats and whole chickens. The second time they were not paid and brought whole chickens, whole geese, and braised meats. How can you feel so comfortable eating this since you were a child? Even lame excuses can get away with? Didn't see it. It's ironic that when I bring some peanut oil, rice noodles and so on, I have to write such a serious note when I eat and drink so much when I'm young. Looking at the whole story, these two little guys have no effect on advancing the current plot. They still have to eat something good?

A bunch of dialects discourage readers from the beginning. . .

I saw a deputy director of the factory asking him to go to work in the factory to prepare cadres, but when he left the house, he told a classmate who was an apprentice that he could just go home and tell his parents. The whole yard knew about it, and one of them seemed to dislike the protagonist 🙂

If the facts are not confirmed yet, if you publicize them widely, others will report you for using the back door, or even fabricate charges to frame you. By the time they find out that you are fine, your job will be gone. . Especially in that era, which only ended 10 years ago, reporting was common in that era. Sons were even required to report their fathers, and wives were required to report their husbands. The reporting culture...

The author didn't intend for outsiders to read it. It's all in dialect. You have to think about the meaning in context while reading it. It's so damn tiring. Forget it, you locals, just read it for yourselves.

With the stingy characteristics unique to some old Shanghainese, it looks uncomfortable.

The reading experience is very low, only three sentences are in dialect, and it is not suitable for ordinary people to read. Poison

The writing style is very good, and I can only read it, but it is a pity that there is no common sense at all, and it has a refreshing literary taste. Before I even get the job, I am howling everywhere. I have no idea what the sinister nature of the human heart is. It feels like the urban dragon king is calling an army of 100,000 to build a kennel.

I skipped through Chapter 199 It was generally okay. Tell me about the problem. The author is relatively poor and pays attention to details You can talk about one thing and drag on for many chapters. When we read books, what we read is the plot The final result is a normal story with 30-90 chapters, and the author wrote 260+ chapters Basically there are very few book clubs that subscribe to all of them The second problem is that I hope the author will take care of people from other provinces and not show up too many local dialects in Shanghai. Back to the previous question, if you are not so procrastinating, readers can skip the first world and watch the second world. Leave readers behind In summary, the author has good writing skills. Have an outline. But if you haven't planned it before writing, please remove the details and keep the cool points so that readers can enjoy it. For example, in my first world, there would never be so many classmates, so let's condense them. My younger son, if you don't get fooled by green tea and go to the countryside, you can either write about Green Tea or don't go to the countryside, then find a job, share a house, and make a lot of money. You have to write what common people like to read, so that readers will pay for it.

As a Shanghainese, I can't stand your Shanghainese. . . . Are you chasing readers away? . .

After finding a job, I showed off for dozens of chapters before even joining the job.

I don't object to you speaking Shanghai dialect, but can you translate it into Mandarin without adding a () at the end? I can even understand Hong Kong dialect. Your Shanghai dialect is so amazing.

I showed it to Master Hu. The dialect in it is incomprehensible, so outsiders don't need to read it.

I should have knocked the pig's trotters high and low to the neighbors. They were all changed beyond recognition, and I was stunned to see if they were reported. My ex-girlfriend also let the pig's trotters go easily. Where did the food for my classmate's uncle come from? At that time, I had access to places that were comparable to five-star hotels, but countless classmates and uncles didn't know how to eat them? My classmates are going to the countryside, so bringing food will make them remember it for the rest of their lives. Is this a good thing? Pig's Feet knows who these people are, but his mentality has not changed after going to the countryside and experiencing what he experienced? What's the use of checking the information in detail if you lie one after another. The golden finger only has a refrigerator space, and the initial supplies are just the things in the refrigerator. What do you think of infinite refresh?

It's totally unreasonable for your book to be popular just because of your dialect.

The setting is good, but the writing is really hard to describe. Writing in so many dialects is understandable to anyone, but do you think the novel you wrote can be read as an article? Just have a drink and they'll give you a job? There is a job that everyone has not reported for yet?

The butt is crooked, and as soon as it is put on the shelves, private goods begin to be included. Master Hu is awesome and he doesn't even carry any hidden items.

To put it bluntly, it is not on the shelves now, so you can still read these few words in each chapter. If it is on the shelves, there will be a fee, and there will only be these few words in one chapter, so end it as soon as possible and change the line.

There are only 75 book friends now. Just keep writing in your dialect. I feel like you've seen too many flowers, so why don't you just speak plainly? 😥 If it weren't true that there is no good writing style in period writing, why would we keep talking about the author?

I'm still stuck on the bad things about his eldest sister and mother-in-law's family, so I'm stuck there. I feel like it's boring if I want to skip it.

It's very good-looking, and all the cool points about period stories are covered. And the scale of writing is just right and logical.

The Shanghainese dialect is used at the beginning to screen readers. I bite the bullet and read on. It's all dialect. It's hard to read. It's okay. Country people don't deserve to read it. I'm leaving.

There are too many adjectives, which affects the reading experience.

I think of you again, why haven't I opened a new book and written about the following plot worlds?

I worked overtime for more than ten days and read all the chapters. It was well written. Come on ✊✊✊