1950S: Starting with a Storage Ring

I have read the latest chapter, and the writing style of the novel is not bad. It is quite comfortable to read. It is considered to be a good writing style among period novels. However, visual inspection shows that the subsequent lack of energy may lead to boring eating. The following are the flaws that I analyzed: 1. Lack of main line and core content. The main focus of the novel should be life dramas. The relevant events that have occurred, such as studying, working, getting married, and the so-called major elements of life have basically been written in these one hundred chapters. I don't know what else to write next. Graduating from college like a reading prodigy skipping a grade is no longer a part of plot construction; his work is reflected in music writing plots, education plots, People's Soldiers plots, and cultural relic appraisal plots. For now, the novel has chosen education, but it has not deepened and refined education. It seems very complicated and messy. In fact, multiple identities are okay, but you have to grow up. Now you have written the People's Soldiers plot and cultural relics appraisal plot to yourself. This The two pieces should not be the main plot of the follow-up, so only the two growing identities of music composer and education system boss are left. However, if there is not a good transition chapter, I think the readability of subsequent chapters of the novel will also decrease. Of course, you can also change the map later, which will lead to an inseparable and outline-like situation; 2. The protagonist travels through time + the beginning with the golden hand. What role does the golden finger play in the novel? I think it will become an obstacle in the subsequent plot. What role does it play in your life in that era? To help you identify cultural relics, to help you analyze spies, to help you discover hidden treasures? Waiting for the help you have already stated, I think your novel can still be written without this golden finger. I even think that you can write more chapters to promote the development of the plot because there is no golden finger. 3. The character description is rough. Take your core characters as an example, your family of three, not to mention the protagonist, the character portraits of the sister and the protagonist's wife are not satisfactory, and the sister's personality changes are particularly rough, the protagonist's daughter-in-law is even missing. Her character portrait is just hard-written and does not match the plot, let alone the other supporting characters Summary I personally think you wrote the entire book in a hundred chapters! ! !

The name is not good enough, but the content is very exciting. It can be called a historical documentary. It has a deep understanding and explanation of the international situation of that era, war analysis, economic development and the layout of international relations of many era background technologies. Some readers may think that there is more content in hydrology and popular science, but readers like me still like it because they can draw on analogies and draw from a wide range of sources. Looking at the starting point to gain knowledge is more rewarding than other websites, not just the emotional value. The author is very knowledgeable and has done a lot of homework. Whether it is the sea charts and islands at that time or some weapons and technology, the life of the times, and the political officialdom, he has a high level of knowledge and has searched for a lot of pictures to support it. Thanks for your hard work! I read it for three consecutive days before catching up here. This is the first full-text subscription in the past three years. Be sure to finish the book and don't stop updating it!

Is this baptism consecrated by a great eminent monk? 😁, the consecration can cure infertility

You have the same idea as me. The last two days of this month will be doubled. I am saving up my monthly tickets. I will start doubling my monthly tickets today

In the comment area, a lot of people search Baidu and AI and then think that they are so smart after checking the information. It's really hard to break down.

Is this author a female? I won't watch it!

What is this written about? ? ? What did you write? ? ?

The more I watch it lately, the more boring it becomes. The protagonist feels like a soldier every day. It's been five or six years, and there are so many cheats. I still feel embarrassed to get something to eat, and I don't seem to have much money. I don't ask for much, but you can't even eat some meat, and you can still eat some food in rations. That's outrageous.

I have just read over a hundred chapters. The protagonist's sister keeps getting into trouble and causing trouble for the protagonist. Has she changed it later? Or is she still getting into trouble and the protagonist keeps tolerating her and licking her butt?

A 12-year-old boy brought back 200 kilograms of fish in a bucket. I was really worried.

I thought that many things could be changed when I was reborn in the 1950s. Even the thought of meeting the teacher made me burst into tears. I didn't expect that it was all just flies and dogs.

Stealing the drawings of the 160 aircraft is worse than stealing the aircraft blueprints and engine blueprints. Reverse engineering is very troublesome and we did not have the industrial capabilities and materials technology to manufacture them at that time, so the drawings are not as useful.

My sister was only a few years old, and when she quarreled with her brother, in those days, everyone could tell her to find a sister-in-law. It's best if the brother and sister interact less, it's really uncomfortable to watch.

Rebirth, spatial ability is abnormal, god of learning, power king, background and background (barely counted), and then become the king of children, what do you think?

It's inexplicable that your subordinates accepted it. In that era, you still lived in a compound and spent 50 oceans a month to hire a subordinate. After a little investigation by the organization, they knew that you were a big problem. Where did you get the money? You are a child. What do you want to do by spending 50 oceans a month to hire a subordinate?

The author has carefully researched the excellent works in the chronology.

After so many chapters, the protagonist seems to have nothing to do, no goals, what's the point of just daily life.

I heard that most people who criticize foreign countries without thinking are those who have never been abroad. Is it true?

I'll put it here. If the protagonist doesn't go abroad, the book will be sealed.

In Chapter 1376 of this article, no matter how it is said that the Japanese people are an independent Yamato nation after the ancient Chinese colonized Japan, it will bring them closer! But the Japanese Wagua committed regicide in modern times. Since the Sino-Japanese War of Sino-Japanese War, how many massacres have been committed against China! 1 Massacre in Lushun, 1 massacre in Pingdingshan, 1 massacre in Nanjing, 1 massacre in Suzhou, 100,000 massacres in Shanxi coal mines,... Burning, killing and looting, 731 Black/Sun, what water supply and epidemic prevention troops,!! No matter how you wash it, Japan's sins can't be washed away! Let alone unrepentant, visiting the war criminals shrine!! Seriously hurt the feelings of the Chinese people, and provoke China.

The author wrote it very well, I read it all in one night. The sense of immersion is very strong. Just a little regretful. If I traveled through time and had this kind of super power, I would definitely go to resist the U. S. And aid Korea. It would be worth the sacrifices of my ancestors, and my trip to that era would not be in vain.

I hope the author will not give up and keep writing until 2012, when the protagonist is taken down for violating discipline and corruption. This closes the logic loop.

The protagonist studies early childhood education? English? Get the space ring 💍 to rob the gangster, nb, and give the time traveler a face

I really have no idea about money, fifty oceans a month? ? ? ? A cart puller

It's okay to keep developing outside. The more we develop, the farther away we become. What's the benefit to the country if there's a forest to the east and an island to the west? Why do you spend so much time abroad when you know your roots are in China?

What kind of mountains are you asking the soldiers to attack? The protagonist should just walk around the enemy and collect them all! Your golden finger is so bad! ! !

I took a look and found that although there is not much information, the textbook is indeed not cheap. But nothing too outrageous. Whether before the Anti-Japanese War or after the Anti-Japanese War, a certain set of textbooks for each course cost between about 1 yuan and 5 yuan. Of course, if you buy textbooks for all subjects for an entire academic period at once, it will indeed be more expensive. From the following price lists of textbooks in the Republic of China, I have only found one price list after the Anti-Japanese War

No matter how this article says that the Japanese people are an independent Yamato nation after the ancient Chinese colonized Japan, it brings us closer! But Japan has committed regicide in modern times. Since the Sino-Japanese War, it has committed many massacres against China! Lushun Massacre, Pingdingshan Massacre, Nanjing Massacre, Suzhou Massacre, Shanxi Coal Mine, 100,000 people,... Burning, killing and looting, 7'31 Black/Sun, what water supply and epidemic prevention troops,! ! ! No amount of washing can wash away Japan's sins! Not to mention refusing to repent and visit the war criminals shrine! ! ! Seriously hurt the feelings of the Chinese people and provoke China

Just these first few dozen chapters are so touching! ! !

Really, I've read more than 400 chapters. I've read dozens of chapters at a time. The first three chapters are golden, OK! After reading dozens of chapters, I skipped and read, it was too bland! Abandoned! I accidentally searched for books and saw "... Storage ring"! I realized that I had read it once, and I endured the discomfort. After reading Chapter 195, I felt that a different author could catch the reader's attention! Ha, I almost missed a wonderful book! It is recommended that the author abbreviate the previous 193 chapters: I will definitely become a great master with this article.