
Spirit Cage: Summon the Emperor's Armor at the Beginning! ! !
灵笼:开局召唤帝皇铠甲!!!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 121k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
0Monthly votes
961Recommends
21Fans
56Chapters
Tags
Synopsis
Reader comments
Readers also read
My Girlfriend Is a Sheltered Object
I'm Wearing a Love Brain, I'm Going Crazy on the Female Channel
Yu-Gi-Oh!: the BOSS Is Actually Me
The System Made a Mistake, She Is Not My Dog!
Ultra: the Cub of Light's Journey to the Heavens
Lu Mingfei, Go and End Mana Ecology
Pirates: a Mixed-Race Ninja on the Straw Hat Ship
Marvel: Opposite the Double Door Is the Devouring Starry Sky
Warhammer 40,000: Doom
Marvel: Draw Atomic Breath at the Beginning
Infinite: My Girlfriend Comes from All Heavens and All Realms
Cyberpunk: Night City's Cosmic Corporations
See the problems found in the latest chapter
1. Names are often spelled incorrectly. Shanda is written as Dashan, and Xia Dou is written as Xiado 2. Rewards and pricing in the mall. A Megalodon is only rewarded 10,000, while a snake dog is rewarded 100. What size of Megalodon is equivalent to 100 snakes and dogs? There is also a floor purifier that sells for 10,000 yuan. It can only purify 10 square meters of land. Do you know how big 10 square meters is? If you grow peanuts, the normal harvest will yield only 3-6 pounds of oil, which is 1.5-3 Liters. (The giant toothed two-jawed beast: the one that chased Mark in the anime and was finally controlled by Bai Yuekui before escaping) 3. There is also folding farmland in Dragon Bone Village, which proves that Dragon Bone Village has land for planting. I don't believe that Dragon Bone Village can't even brew soy sauce, let alone salt 4. System responsibilities The task is just to stop 4068 and save Mark, but that doesn't mean you can't save him first and get the reward, then tie him up and take the initiative to fuse the spine with Mark (if you're afraid the plot will change). Don't say something as embarrassing as "I am the protagonist". Saying it once is enough, don't keep emphasizing it. I'll add more later if I find any problems.
The protagonist's speech is so awkward, he is already an old man at 24 years old 😭
Saving Mark is somewhat of a saintly act, but Mark doesn't actually need to be saved.
To be honest, the summoner is useless.
Every time the protagonist takes out the summoner, it reminds me of Xiaogang's three lost summoners. What's more, the Five Elements Armor Summoner is a communication satellite that emits the energy of the Five Elements Stone to complete the integration. It is better to directly give the protagonist the summoning authority. The summoner becomes a decoration to confuse others. Others worked so hard to steal the summoner and found it useless 😁 I haven't finished it yet, so I'm going to complain about the chapter I finished.
New book sets sail!
I beg all you readers to collect it! Please read it! Please comment! This is important for new books! There is no motivation to code alone! ! ! Beg! Beg! Beg! ! !
Opinion · Idea House
If you have any comments or good ideas, you can leave them downstairs!