
The Journey to the Imperial Examination Begins with Accompanying Students
科举之路从伴读书童开始
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- Ongoing
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- 375k Words
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- Historical
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- Male
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- Alternate History
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- 11mo ago
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- Qidian
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Author, why don't you search what kinds of things book boys did in ancient times?
Brother, the book boy is a slave and has no power to take the imperial examination.
The protagonist has passed the imperial examination and shouldn't have to be a book boy anymore. Why is he still called young master? The protagonist probably doesn't have any special hobbies or quirks, or maybe he's just grateful. I don't understand. Personally, I feel like the protagonist is servile, and it's very uncomfortable to watch.
When you mention the matter of apprenticeship in Goulan, aren't you giving people eye drops? Also, since the protagonist's family is doing well, why does he want to be a book boy? Or be a bookboy for the bastards...
If the writing is not smooth, just write in vernacular. Don't fix those miscellaneous things.
After reading two chapters, I don't see any good or bad results. It's just that the writing is not smooth. Every time I read a paragraph, you get stuck. Your writing skills are not good.
Writing is not good
The writing is sometimes blank and sometimes blank, as if the author always has a flash of inspiration and comes up with one or two good words and sentences, and uses them without considering the context; the turning point of the text often makes no sense, whether it turns or goes smoothly; the character creation is not coherent enough, the protagonist is aggressive, conservative, and aloof. It's mediocre at times; the rhythm of the story is not well grasped, and there is no main line after more than ten chapters. The imperial examination is not done properly, the apprenticeship is not done properly, the pretense is half-way, and the money is not done to improve the living situation. It is pulled by various plots, but each plot has no clear meaning.
The father of the protagonist is like no other. He makes food for himself and does not let his family eat it, and he accepts it even if he insists on eating it by others.
The writing is quite good, not much worse than Sanjie's new book. The flow of new authors in the historical area is still not enough.
As a scholar, you are not even qualified to take part in the imperial examination.
One question is, can't we first find a way to break away from being a schoolboy and become a white body before taking the scientific examination?
If you continue reading, you should be able to meet the requirements for listing.