The Martial Saint Starts by Stacking the Passive

Come on, author, please update more

Less intrigue, less plots where you don't want to go but you have to go, and not ruthless enough. Don't you understand why people from the same sect dare to mess with you? So many people say you are a waste, so I crippled all those who are not strong and have low status. Comparing others with the protagonist, I feel that I am too powerful. If you want to be less troublesome, you should kill the chicken once to scare the monkeys. Since the release of the sect, the little poisonous points have continued to flow out of the plot. Life has been arranged, and I will not give up because I am more interested in this kind of subject. It will be more comfortable to watch if the protagonist's personality is slightly changed to be more like Fang Yuan. After the root bone is upgraded, I will ask Xu Qingshan and the female elder for two life savers and go out to get them or grab resources to develop quickly. Don't write the plot too deliberately. I hope the author can get better and better.

No, I'm very surprised. Why do others have special moves? The protagonist can only hit 18 times. Isn't this a talent of the system? What's your special move?

The reborn are written as if they were aborigines

Really, it's better not to write down your data. After a long time, the main character reached the 13th level of the real-life realm and only had one meal of strength. When you were iron-clad, you already weighed 800 kilograms, and you didn't gain strength even if you practiced bone training and internal organs. The earth bear who has reached the real-life realm is also funny. The strength data is similar to that of an ordinary bear? The explosion is quite random. It can be 20 times or 200 times. The result is loneliness.

I have read several books of this type, and yours is okay. Most of them were written by you yourself, drawing on the Martial Saints of the Ten Directions. The other one was a few years ago on the new book list, and it completely reproduced the Martial Saints of the Ten Directions, stories, techniques, and plots one-to-one.

Can the author set up the strength and relationship of these forces in the story? The three top sects in a big state and the military forces are playing a competition to select young leaders. As a result, the mountain sects of the three sects were beaten by the Demon Sect. There is also the Youjia, who is a local snake but has nothing to do with the other major sects and families. The one who was falsely accused actually told others that he was a remnant of the Demon Sect but has corrected himself. Is this kind of thing allowed to be admitted? Shouldn't you admit it without substantial evidence? I don't believe that he refuses to recognize a local snake, and the three major sects can be destroyed directly.

It's well written before entering the sect, but you can't read it with your brain after entering the sect. The villain's IQ is about the same as that of a 14-year-old child.

Is anti-theft so powerful now? The browser can't even see it.

The setting is good, but there are too many flaws, and I can't watch it without even thinking about it.

Will the transfer of skills and loyalty branding be too poisonous, and I can't stand it anymore?

It's a pity for this book. Ever since I left Novice Village and since it was put on the shelves, the plot has been so poorly written. The villain has no brains at all. It's much worse than the book before it was put on the shelves. Is it because I didn't write a good outline or maybe I changed the character?

It was okay before entering the sect, but after entering the sect, it was like a different person, and his writing was a mess.

Many plots of this martial arts theme are just like that. They just changed the title of the book. The writing is okay and readable. The author takes special care of the arrangement of the protagonist's sister and parents. Looking at the protagonist's fellow disciples, the fisherman Zhao and his son, as well as gang leader Li, the protagonist's master and others, they are dead and useless. In contrast, the protagonist has a very hard life.

Based on a simple evaluation, I think it is watchable but has a lot of minor issues. First of all, the clichéd system and proficiency settings are almost non-existent. There is still a slight sense of existence in the early mortal stage (before entering Jin), but it will just serve as a background board later on. Then let's look back at the title of our book, stacked passive, right? Although they appear frequently, such as Battle Body, Pupil of Something, etc., If you really write them as skills, everything you learn is integrated into them, and you can't tell where the passive is at all. If you don't write it down in detail, there will be nothing particularly outstanding. The core output method of the main character is called: "Dozens of times a hit". I was wondering if there could be a nicer name. If you change it to Tianqing, it would be awesome. As for the plot, I really see that in the middle period, when I go to a new place, my sect has a mentally retarded villain. How about doing some other plot drivers? First, there is no resource tilt, and second, there is no technical training. A family that relies on resources, technology? Hitting everything with one punch. The most helpful thing is the pills given to you by the original sect master after you went to Wanxiang Sect. Of course it is actually helpful, but the way you write it doesn't sound like it is. Basically, the protagonist takes medicine to level up, gets into fights, and continues to take medicine to level up. In the latest chapter, the sect leader is also very popular. What does it mean that the protagonist runs away to save the day? Can you write some plots with normal people in the novel? I would like to ask if people can be a little more responsible. Why do you have to write something that is not like human beings? Keep up the good work.

The more I watched, the less I could stand it. I lost my mind and couldn't stand it anymore. It felt uncomfortable to watch, so I gave up.

How many words have it been and the protagonist's parents haven't been found yet?

. . . I feel like it was a waste to buy some volumes to read this book. The proficiency mentioned is written in a mess, and I can't understand how the proficiency is related to the realm of the protagonist. The 1/200 has not been touched, but suddenly I broke through. Then I don't know what the precious medicine and the meat of the alien beasts have improved. I was short of vitality and blood, but I can break through. I forgot to write about proficiency. Normal proficiency should not be an internal skill or some kind of pile skill that improves the realm, and its proficiency is the key to the protagonist's improvement. You can brush its proficiency, but it becomes slower as the realm improves. You need to take precious medicine and exotic animal meat to speed up the progress. This is the correct operation of proficiency, right? This book is the worst one I have ever seen written on proficiency!

In fact, the book is not bad, but it is too routine. Moreover, the advantages of this trick are not reflected at all. I think the best writing is about how to transform when you first learn, but when you get to the real person, it completely becomes the practice of competing for resources. The author has already written the routines, but he should learn more about how to write things that go against the routines.

The author writes well, please update more 😁