Two Worlds: Blasting a Female Demon with a Gas Canister Cannon from the Start

Why doesn't the protagonist directly contact the official? He is the only one in the whole world who can go to that game world. Is he still afraid that someone will compete with you? You can make a lot of money from ordinary resources like gold alone, but you can't get enough from other fairy items. What weapon can't you ask for? Enter the dungeon and directly clear the RPG to quickly pass the early stage. Now that you have become stronger, what can the official armed forces do to you?

Suddenly seeing such ancient writing style, I almost didn't recover.

Not bad, the plot is not cliché and very interesting. It's just that the protagonist at the beginning is too out of the ordinary. He is in his twenties, not a teenager. It feels a bit silly to go crazy without any strength. It might be better to modify it

Rather than using chemical fertilizers, I think it would be safer to just use modern animals and plants. . . Not talking about hybrid rice, potatoes and corn, let me talk about the eggplant seedlings that my dad spent two yuan to buy at the Agricultural Science Center in town two years ago. Planted in a very barren mountainous area, it grows more than one meter high. The canopy spreads out to about two square meters. The eggplants grow really densely. There are still dozens of them of different sizes, but they don't grow fast enough after picking them! When winter came, I returned home during the Chinese New Year and there were still eggplant trees on it, although it was already the last crop. . . But, after the Lantern Festival, it bloomed again, and then started to grow again! . . . Let's talk about animals. Let's not talk about white-feathered chickens. Let's just say that modern pigs have a litter of twenty. Even if they will degenerate in a few generations, they can probably reach ten. . . Besides, it would take a season to promote chemical fertilizers in ancient times before others would believe it. If you go over and name the animals and plants, it will be easily promoted to the whole world, and then the whole world will know that you brought it. . . Of course, you may also want to start industrializing the world by building fertilizer plants, but it is better to deal with animals and plants first and then promote it more effectively. . .

There is no logic, no main line, just write whatever comes to mind

1⃣️The author does not handle enough details. For example, at the beginning, the protagonist runs out alone to find immortality. The question is, in this world of cultivating immortals, why does the protagonist think that he will not encounter monsters, or other things such as robbery on the road, and the desire to make money? Without these descriptions, the novel lacks authenticity and logic. 2⃣️The language description is a bit like an ancient novel, very out of the ordinary 3⃣️As for cultivation, it is neither in the game, which adds experience, nor in the realm of reality, which draws spiritual energy. In general, it is okay, but considering the lack of details and the past of the author's eunuch, it is suspected that there is insufficient stamina.

By the way, author, what about the plot in which you blast the banshee with a gas tank at the beginning?

Ignoring the real world is still Mao's two realms.

The day when the fourth natural disaster strikes is when the plot collapses.

He must have run away. This is the only bad thing about the new book. The author will run away at any time.