
The Beginning of Douluo Awakens the Holy Lord, and the Golden Eyes Destroy the World
斗罗之开局觉醒圣主,金瞳灭世
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- Completed
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- 657k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The beginning is indeed quite poisonous. Even if you are dissatisfied, can you speak out? At this time, if you say that others will only think that you have a problem with your thinking and that you are cold-hearted, it is just stupid👇
Today's introduction, after reading a few chapters, it turns out that the poison resistance is not enough. The protagonist goes to school at the age of six and lives in a seven-person apartment. There are already two people living there. It is not the kind with an independent bathroom. He goes to the toilet in the middle of the night and watches Hu Liena taking a shower. 1. You don't have to lock the door when taking a shower in a multi-person apartment, 2. You don't turn on the light when taking a shower in the middle of the night, right, 3. The protagonist is deaf and can't hear the sound, right. Such a plot at the age of 6 is really about falling in love with the mainland and it doesn't follow logic.
Too much psychological drama
As soon as I traveled through time, I was worried about this and that. I was worried about things that would happen decades later. I couldn't even say a few words about what would happen next. As soon as I crossed over, I looked like the sky was falling. I asked my grandfather whether I was more important or loyalty and Wuhun Palace. He said openly and secretly that there was something wrong with Bibi Dong, but in the end he didn't say much because he remembered that he was only six years old? Brother, after you asked for two chapters, you acted as if you were afraid that others would not know that you had a problem. If you had a world view that was too pretentious, you would have been arrested and sent to have your mind refined. As soon as he finished speaking, grandpa helped you, a piece of trash who had just awakened a martial soul without a single link, to get a 30,000-year-old soul bone. Domineering responded that he didn't want it. The reason was that he didn't like Waijia and didn't want to work hard for this favor? ? ? I'm confused. This behavior is not like an adult or a child. It's like an outsider reading a book.
In the first three chapters, I only saw a very stupid protagonist. As soon as he awakened his martial soul, he said that he wanted to rebel, but he still wanted to create a rebellion in the peak martial soul hall. Let's not talk about the enshrinement hall, just Bibi Dong can kill you. The entire family was enjoying the resources of Wuhun Palace, and then they rebelled against each other. This was fucking worse than Tang San.
Chapter 2 directly persuades him to quit. Is the tone of chatting with grandpa that of a grandson? No, that's the master! The funniest thing is that he still remembers that he is only six years old. He did not treat himself as a child when he was talking.
No one has read your novel, it's so poorly written
The more I watch, the more frustrated I become! Can we just kill the protagonist, Grandpa Shabi? Also, the author was so firm in saying that he would not accept Hu Liena, but later on he directly arranged an annoying plot to take a bath, look at the body, and spank? Did hatred turn into love later on? If you don't want to accept it, don't write this kind of plot that makes people feel uncomfortable after watching it... I'm also impressed by that grandpa. My poison resistance is low, so I retreated. My martial soul and soul skill settings are good, and the plot is a mess! 😰😰
It's highly toxic, I wonder if it was written by a primary school student.
In short, four words sum up the female channel novel
I don't even want to complain about the plot, but the second one is very problematic. Six years old, six years old, talking to your own grandfather like this, you can also say the word foolish and loyal. The protagonist has just traveled through time, does he have no brains?
Why black people?
Where is Bibi Dong so stupid? She is so beautiful, so what is wrong with her? Who did Hu Liena offend? Why did everyone call her a traitor? What's wrong with Qian Renxue? Why doesn't everyone like her. Also, Tang San's attempt to resurrect Xiao Wu was so touching. Why are you scolding him? He is sick. Yu Xiaogang just wants to prove himself, no matter who he offends!
I can't bear it after just two pages. If I don't go hunting for souls and talk about thousands of words, do you love me or him? 😰
Read, poison
Poison in setting, poison in plot, all kinds of poison
How to put it? It's true that the protagonist hates Bibi Dong, but I think it's too early to say it directly. It's a bit funny to see someone in the comments saying something like ungratefulness. For a time traveler, what if he betrays her when he already knows that there will be no good end for her? Even if he is said to be ungrateful, it's just half a catty. She Bibi Dong is an ungrateful white-eyed wolf. I don't know why so many people like the character Bibi Dong. Bibi Dong was trained by the Wuhun Palace with all their efforts, but she betrayed the Wuhun Palace for the so-called love. This is a typical example of picking up the bowl to eat, putting down the bowl and scolding the mother. Everyone talks about Qianxunji. I think Qianxunji is still soft-hearted. He can kill Bibi Dong after she gives birth to Qian Renxue. In this way, all problems are solved. There is an heir, and there is no need to worry about the betrayal of one's own genius. It can only be said that Douluo's villains are bad and not completely bad. The moral bottom line is still too high. Instead, the soul power Bibi Dong, who has no lower limit, can be abolished and directly turned into a fertility machine to continuously produce geniuses for Wuhun Palace 🤓🤓🤓
Fan poisonous points
Remember everyone, anyone who is awesome and coaxes the martial soul and sets the innate low level is a piece of shit. They will let you know that it is a counterattack. Later, it will be seen that there is gold in the shit. If the writing is not good, I will give you a try! There are also some people who travel back and forth just to be the grandsons of plot characters, and they don't know how to use resources. Their writing skills should be good too!
Author, why didn't the soul bones explode after killing a soul beast that was over 100,000 years old?
You might as well just tell your grandfather that you are reborn. Magically change what happens in the future. And told him about the effect of whale gum. Then use family power to plan opportunities. And knowing how miserable the family is. Your grandpa will know what to do. Because family is definitely more important than Wuhun Palace. Crystal Blood Dragon Ginseng and Earth Dragon Pumpkin can make him become a Super Douluo in a short time. He's not an idiot. Moreover, if a person does not serve himself, he will be punished by heaven and earth. Not to mention the major fairy grass and the best medicinal herbs. The light was the dragon's energy escaping from Liangyi's eyes. It is the paradise for dragon soul masters. Dragon energy paired with the best herbs. It is estimated that there will be a few more bans. It is even possible to upgrade the family's inherited martial spirit into a white-armored holy dragon. This is the foundation of eternity
Just change the settings, do you think you understand it better than the original?
In the original book, Xie Yue was promoted to the Soul Sect at the age of 16 only after having the Mimic Repair Field. However, in your case, he was promoted to the Soul Sect at the age of 14 two years earlier. Is it interesting that some minor supporting characters were strengthened without any thought?
I'm chasing, who will be the heroine?
Let me start with some beautiful pictures. Guess who they are
The author's writing is too rough, the context often conflicts, the logic is a bit unclear, the protagonist's personality changes back and forth, and the plot is blunt.
Shennong
First of all, this book is a piece of cake. Secondly, I don't understand how the author got his LV5 level. He has written eleven books, only two of which are over one million, and the others are all about eunuchs.
The author, Douluo 1, has no knowledge of soul skills that are more than 200,000 years old. He only has knowledge of soul rings that are 100,000 years old.
8 Eunuchs... I dare not read them
The more I look at it, the more something is wrong. Bibi Dong is so talented.
I have never seen a Douluo fan portrait like this before, it's really confusing.
Thoughts after viewing: The big one quickly retreated, the wind was blowing hard
There were no more than twenty cards. Hell Wen could not bear it anymore and quickly withdrew. Plug-ins are OK, but plot points are negative.
The beginning persuades you to quit, ah, I have become a different person, ah, I have traveled through time
It's good to watch, it's so good, it's a must-read Douluo fan, everyone go and watch it