Immortality Cultivation: Start by Making Talisman

The first ten or so chapters are okay. Although they are cliché, the protagonist is alive and interesting. The story later changed when it started to revolve around the protagonist, the little Karami 🙂 He is just the protagonist of your book. With his qualifications, the golden finger can only be used for hiding, and you wrote him as if he was the child of destiny, and he would have a hand in everything 😐

It's not like a fairy tale, more like a costume drama

The update quality of the work these days is not very high. The protagonist's ancestors left too much behind for the protagonist, directly controlling a golden elixir, which is completely different from the first half of the book (more than 40 chapters). Originally, the protagonist relied on the Golden Finger (Moonlight Vase) to make talismans and cultivate, but now he has become a golden elixir maid. The change is huge.

I can recommend some books to you. A good book with a soul. Your reading will rise to a new level after reading it. The path of Xuanchen. Records of mountains and seas.

Now it is really a dead end for the indigenous people.

Hey Aboriginal, there are very few people writing about Aboriginal literature nowadays.

Who else will read novels written by natives and losers these days? Brother, you have to keep up with the market demand!

Why write about indigenous people? Don't you know that only a master could write this?

I have revised a lot of the previous content. I was warned about the chapter numbers due to frequent revisions. I dare not change them again today. If they are inappropriate, I will change them tomorrow. There is nothing I can do about it. The previous points are too poisonous. If I don't change them, I will have to cut the book. After thinking about it, it would be better to change it, so that I can finish writing this book with peace of mind.

Aboriginal, but 🌟angery, hehe, if you are interested, it's not bad to take a look 🙂

It's pretty smooth. It's okay. I can see it.

Tuesday is very important. I hope you can help me catch up. There will be updates at 6 am and 12 noon.

Is it because I didn't sign a contract that I didn't have any recommendations?

It looks pretty good so far, more to come