Paper Man's Road to Immortality

I don't know what's good about it. Even though he knew someone was dealing with him, he was still waiting there and just watching the fun. This kind of typical protagonist who can't run away was written Fa ten years ago.

Author, you don't realize that you have written more than thirty chapters, and only a few days have passed in the novel. You need to extend the time line and give it time to develop. Don't want one thing to be solved and the next thing to appear immediately.

I don't know how the author will write the protagonist. I think there are several categories that can be referenced: First, a pure villain like Fang Yuan, a pure tyrant, who can abandon everything for his own interests. People who like it are like seeing gods, and people who don't like it are like seeing enemies The second is Old Demon Han, who has various controversies but no matter what, he still has his own bottom line, and the most people can accept it The third is to be a good ghost. It is difficult for the ghosts of all calamities to become saints. It is not bad to become a priest with the help of the incense in the world or to control part of the authority of the underworld The fourth is to break away from human thinking, view the relationship with humans and monsters as a part of all things, and be self-centered No matter how you write, you can't get around the underworld, unless there is no underworld in the novel world. Since there is an underworld, there must not be too many ghosts in the world, otherwise there will not be many living people in the world. Humans and ghosts are contradictory bodies, one ebbs and flows, the other ebbs and flows.

It's a bit like the Netherworld Painted Scroll. The protagonists are not living people, they are all paper-covered people in their true form.

1 I still feel that Lao Yan's Taoist chanter is good-looking, but it's a pity that there is no follow-up! It was so good at the time, but later I didn't write the chapter on the upper realm like ordinary people. I always feel that it's a pity that Lao Yan, a Taoist chanter, didn't write the chapter on the upper realm in the end!

Congratulations to Lao Yan for publishing a new book😁

The first one or twenty chapters were good, but the book ended up being the highlight of the book. The world view is too narrow, the characters are unclear, the plot is arranged too hastily, and the tense and weird atmosphere of the first chapter is lost. Without the weird atmosphere, this novel is equivalent to a dish without salt.

Open a new book quickly! In panic 😁

Since we plan to reopen, let's end this book as soon as possible!

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Lao Yan is very good at writing books and talking about things. I have followed the first two books. I originally wanted to read this one carefully when it is on the shelves. But I watched it at the beginning. After watching it, I felt that Lao Yan was wrong in setting up the protagonist, paper man! A paper man without a body is not the same kind and cannot resonate! So it was wrong from the beginning. If the protagonist is wrongly set, of course no one will watch it! Reading a book can make people feel immersed in it, resonate with it, and only then can people have the desire to read on. A paper man! Do you want to be a disembodied paper man? I don't think many people in this world want to be such a paper man!

I hope it will surpass the book Taoist Sutra Chanter. I have no tickets. Please support it next month.

It's very interesting. Good luck to the author.

This book is very creative, and returning Yang is the main plot in the early stage.

Does the paper man have Jiji? ?

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The requirements have changed, and I have written several books on the same worldview, which is really a bit too much. If that doesn't work, just write about the mortal stream. It will be better than what you are doing now. It has a lot of traffic and your writing skills are good, so you should be able to get results

I just found out that a new book has been published. I support it as always.

There seem to be very few people and not many tickets.

Lao Yan, if you want to cut it, cut it quickly, and if you cut it, open a new book! I'm out of books to read, I'm just waiting for you!

Such a good novel, I am so speechless! !

Why do some books have a profit after completion, while some books have no profit after completion?

In fact, the writing is quite good. Although it is finished, I am looking forward to the next book.