Red Mansion: Watching Jin Chai While Drunk

Don't write it. It's really embarrassing. Whether someone smashes the jade or not has nothing to do with you. In the first chapter, it was too embarrassing to force things. It's not so obvious that you have no dignity at all.

The plot progresses very slowly, and a lot of words are written about the characters' dynamics, actions, psychology and appearance, and the writing is hazy.

It's too slow. It's a rare good article, but it's too slow and too little. There is a threshold for reading. This is the starting point. What you write is a fan.

In order to create conflicts, the author has gone crazy

I have an inexplicable feeling. I don't know where this idiot comes from. He is an enemy. It seems that everyone in the world is a bad person. This idiot is not a human being.

I read halfway through and then looked at the chapter titles and couldn't stand it anymore, it's so slow

Good writing is rare, for those with a slow pace

It's revealed that Sister Lin is his sweetheart, but he's still single as the heroine?

There are too many adjectives used at the beginning, and a few occasionally are enough. Various adjectives are constantly used in the first few chapters, which are standard examples of rhetoric. The characters of the previous characters have all changed drastically. Jia Lian cannot do such a thing as coercing his distant brother who just died of his father in the mourning hall. Jia Lian, as the son of the Jia family, although he is lecherous but relatively tactful and can do some practical things, he is turned into a brainless playboy. Wang Xifeng also couldn't do such a thing as seeing a sideline child who had both parents dead for the first time, bragging about the hero and belittling Jia Baoyu in front of Jia's mother, and why did Wang Xifeng give jade to the hero? Would a money-grubbing person like her give such a valuable thing to the shabby male protagonist she met for the first time? Or do you think you got aroused when you saw the handsome male protagonist?