Hogwarts: This Harry Potter Is Not Innocent

An arrogant protagonist who uses crude bravado and doesn't think much. Weakness and ignorance are not obstacles to survival, arrogance is.

I saw in the latest chapter that the author actually wanted to pair Draco and Ginny. This is the most daring author I have ever seen in an HP novel. All I can say is 🐮🍺

I feel like the content is okay, but the introduction is really bad. When I first saw the introduction, I didn't want to click on it.

I don't know why some people like Malfoy. If it were just because movie actors are handsome, then I would have it in this life.

Hermione's sense of presence is too high. She has all the runes and Norwegian Ridgebacks raised. How can she have such a high talent for magical animals? The Rune Snake would only feel better if it listened to Harry. Hagrid wouldn't give it to Hermione just after it hatched. Hermione is not that thick-skinned. Hermione is really involved too much and is not lovable.

Snape was too weak. Would the Savior give his eyes to a Death Eater? Interesting. Snape dared to give Harry a hard time, but the media didn't dare to give Snape a hard time?

The author wants to create a Harry who is decisive and decisive in killing and has an online IQ. The characters of each character are still within the framework. It is a pity that the author's writing is weaker and the detailed description is a bit boring to read, but the plot is novel and interesting.

The introduction is a bit strange, and I don't quite understand what Lily's sealed Horcrux is. But the article is quite good. The idea of ​​Harry being influenced by Horcruxes is a good idea. At the same time, the writing style is not like the classic xx Returns. Instead, it gives me a feeling of the original in many places. For example, Harry felt like he had been hit by a motorcycle. Just like this style of writing. The author is also very familiar with the original work. When I saw the twins on the train saying that Li got a big bag spider, I remembered the time I watched Ha 1 at home twenty years ago.

Wow, this is the least procrastinating book I have ever read. Chapter 35 is the end of first grade.

This is a romance novel disguised as HP.

How can I put it, the idea is very good, I actually like it, but the writing style may still be a bit immature, and I feel that time passes too fast, and a lot of things passed without writing. Come on, come on.

It's well written. There are some minor flaws, but it's well written. There are quite a lot of jelly grass in Qidian lately.

The photos are good, but there are too few.

Vice Mar is boring. All you can see in fandom is to either time travel and become Vice Mar or become an enemy. There is no possibility of becoming friends.

I came in based on the title of the book but didn't read the introduction. I read Chapter 4 and had no idea what the rest of the story would be like. Those who have watched Harry Potter will find it strange. As the author of the protagonist Harry, you have to give him a certain position. If you have already written a fanfic, don't be pretentious. For the plot, just change the background of all the characters to China. At that time, Britain wanted to be famous just like it does now. Being famous is beneficial. The plot development is too deliberate. Author, you can add restrictions to the protagonist. Only when there are dangers can you kill the plot in advance. . . .

Is it still Harry Potter without the Iron Triangle? I'm really speechless

The writing is very good, and the plot is quite original and not rigidly based on the original work. The author himself has a deep understanding of the original work and will take the initiative to look up information. Xiancao

I'm curious if their child will have red-haired genes or platinum-blond hair genes!

Harry is not innocent in the first place. The main reason is that the author wants the protagonist to decipher the secrets with the readers, so Harry cannot know things that the readers don't know. It seems that Harry has no information.