I Prove My Immortality in the Mortal World

The Golden Finger Black Demon Diagram has now become a storage space. The real function of devouring ghosts and evil spirits and improving spiritual power has been completely forgotten. The protagonist has a great supporter after the third level of blood energy refinement. He can completely rely on the golden finger to improve his spirit to the fourth level of soul refinement as quickly as possible. The protagonist does not need it, and then he can practice like ordinary people. Isn't this funny? !

Generally speaking, it's okay, but there are inconsistencies in the logic of numbers. It's a big taboo. The author makes this kind of mistake. For example, at the beginning of Condensing Qi and Blood, he mentioned the strength of a few hundred kilograms. So even if he doesn't have Condensing Qi and Blood, he is still practicing martial arts. Three adults who are still practicing martial arts are sweating profusely after lifting a gun of more than 100 kilograms. It is also speechless. The author really needs to think through it before writing to see if it is logical.

The design of Da Xuan Wu Sheng is too small at the front, and I can't write on the back. The back is too watery.

No, in fact, a brief summary of Qigong practice will be enough, it's too boring.

Forcibly finding enemies for the protagonist is a bit too deliberate and the writing is not very good.

I hope your golden finger is high-end, and you are one of the Five Innate Emperors, and don't write yourself as a rubbish incense god like Zhenwu. It's very dramatic and has no real character.

Actually... It's a bit like a novel from ten years ago

It's bland, nothing interesting, like chewing wax and tasteless!

You don't tell your family or the village chief about your breakthrough, for fear of causing uproar, but you must show it in front of everyone after the tax official comes to the village. Does this mean that you think the villagers are not strong enough to bear your breakthrough? It can only be said that there are differences in IQ. Others are pretending to be the king of sex, and you are pretending to be a bitch.

It's really cool. Some authors burst out with updates after the New Year. You are different. On the contrary, you have reduced the volume. You write like a flowing stream and update two thousand words a day. Tomato is really suitable for you. No one cares about you after ten or eight years of writing.