A Harmless Soul Eater

It's good-looking, in the same genre as Never Get Off, and has a rational style of writing that is dull and informative.

The setting is novel, but the overall writing style is hard to swallow.

I roughly summed up the reasons why I couldn't understand the first copy 1. The world view is so powerful. I thought that as long as the setting was interesting, I could just write it, but actually it didn't work. It still had to be plotted, and it couldn't bring out too much. 2. I didn't write down some settings clearly. I don't seem to understand the underlying logical setting of the medulla. Some people understand it and some don't. I haven't explained the setting of cognitive rationalization as the name implies at all, thinking that readers can understand it as the name implies. 3. Name problem. The body belongs to Yang Mo, and the spirit belongs to Chen Xuan. Later, Yang Mo's consciousness also came out, which was a bit confusing. This problem is easy to correct. You can correct it if you pay attention when writing. 4: The protagonist's purpose. The protagonist doesn't move forward to do anything... Although the protagonist is a Buddhist, whatever he does depends on his mood, but it doesn't look good if he doesn't move forward. 5: There are a lot of omitted things. Some people say that as long as I catch a setting and write the content carefully, it will be brilliant, but I ignore it all. I have watched too many movies and like to leave blank spaces when writing. In the next copy, I will try to write something in more detail to lower the reading threshold. Omniscient World I arranged for two medulla to fight back and forth. Originally, I wanted to explain the concept of medulla in units of volumes, but in the end, it explained loneliness. The next dungeon is a world in a painting. The level of Marrow Killing is low, there are no similar characters, and the main plot will not be so out of the ordinary. I have made fancy things in the world of paintings. If readers can understand them, it is a victory. I wish I could write a book worthy of the setting.

There is a feeling that looks good and looks bad at the same time

Have you ever been a Soul Eater? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Just barely look good. All I can say is that it was fine at the beginning. The further back I look, the harder I can stand it.

On the first day after posting, it would be reviewed and a few hundred words would be deleted. The plot of the world in the painting can be understood even without reading the first volume. By the way, give me a follow-up reading.

Protagonist: There is a difference in information from me every day, right? Now there is a certain information gap between you and me, why don't you explode?

I think it's okay, it's quite enjoyable to watch, and sometimes it's quite interesting to find out later that this is the case 🙂

Interesting but dull and weird

No, dude, why is it that the writing and plot are good, but it's a bit boring to watch?

The author's writing is so exciting that the reader's head hurts from reading it. Let's look at the world later

It's a good book, but I feel that after reading it over and over again, few people understand it, and I'm a little worried about whether this book can survive. Good luck to the author. I guarantee normal subscription unless something happens during that time.

There are many settings, it is novel and a bit confusing to read, but at the same time the article is bland (maybe it's because I personally don't like this way of writing) and lacks an explanation to the reader about the source of the protagonist's motivation, that is, I don't know why the protagonist does what he does. It makes me feel that the author is a bit "self-righteous" and understands his own article but lacks explanation to the readers.

There is nothing wrong with the writing. In fact, most novices feel that this is the way they write, and the second book will be much better.

Why do you always write Song Qin as Xiang Zhen? This mistake started from the practical exam. Isn't this Xiang Zhen a demon from the previous world?

It has been talking about the world view, and the world view is not the plot but the world view. The world view is interesting, but the more you read without the plot, the less interesting you become. The plot of this book seems to be just to show the world view. The worldview is very important, but the plot is the foundation, right? The world view is to better present the plot, right? It should serve as a backdrop, the plot is what matters. Also, personal pronouns are not used very much. When a character appears, give their full name and then describe what they did. There are too many paragraphs. It's almost one sentence, but it feels like it doesn't contain much information, nor does it promote the plot or show the characters. The plot is simple. Except for the protagonist and the people around him, the plot of the supporting characters is briefly passed. There is even little description of all the characters, so the plot seems to be very flat and lack of excitement. There are few character descriptions, basic dialogues, and very little descriptions of facial expressions, actions, psychological environments, etc. I have no impression of the characters. I only know that there is a person here, and then he moved and said something. I want to watch the plot. Can the worldview serve the plot? ! ! It's boring to just have a dry worldview mixed with a little plot.