Wanfa Taoist Lord: Start with Companion Spirit Beasts

It has become a companion spirit beast, and it still needs to be controlled by the Beast Control Art. It is too low. And as the protagonist said in the article, you bought it from the Beast Control Sect, so you are not afraid that others will have a back-up?

Does the protagonist position himself as a good person? A normal person would preconceptionally label themselves, and their brains may have been parasitized. There is no need to read the rest of it. I guess the rest of the content will be full of weird things.

There are currently more than 30 chapters in which I don't see any leisurely farming. I only see enemies popping up from time to time.

If the protagonist of this novel was a Sanxian, then it would be okay, but if he is a disciple of the sect, I can only say that he is a piece of shit as always.

The total Qi training period is only 9 levels. You have gone from the 3rd level to the 7th level in less than two years. Isn't it too fast? You can't do this even if you have a golden finger. It's a bit unreasonable and I wrote it too hastily! ! 🙄🙄

From what we read, your novel is mainly about farming. Is the author's ideas inconsistent with those of the readers? ? Either cutting off repairs or on the way to fight.

The beginning is very strong, the eyes are clear, and the following routine Opening elements Downward flow, a grain of sand in the times Working spirit beast I dare not lend you a loan if you dare to

After reading some, the protagonist is also a monk who knows a little bit about cultivation. No matter how bad he is, he will be much better off than a mortal who can't cultivate! In other words, if the low-level monks are living such a miserable life, it is conceivable that ordinary people who cannot cultivate immortals will have an even more difficult time surviving. Or should we say that in the world where the protagonist lives, everyone is cultivating immortals and there are no mortals 🤔

The look and feel is quite good. Apart from farming and amusing, the fighting skills are also well written. It won't be boring to read. I hope I can write more and it won't be as cut-off as the previous book.

The pace is a little slower. Content farming and beast control. The tone is mainly relaxed.

In fairy tale novels, Kunxiu is used to refer to Taiying, right?

The writing is really good. I see that the golden finger system is not broken now. According to this trend, you can write 4 to 500 pictures and it will not break. The plot progresses smoothly and is beautiful. Come on, author.

OK? The third spiritual insect has already reached level 7, so are 6 opportunities wasted? Then do we have to start cultivating it again for the best ratio in the future?

Signed, welcome to collect and read.

The title and label chosen by the author do not match the content! Do you want to think about it and change it? ! The story gives readers a good feeling at the beginning, but after writing about the sect, I feel that the author has great ambitions, many plans, a messy outline, jumps in content, and the reading content becomes messy ~ the protagonist's behavior becomes illogical? Is this because of the content or because the world has become so big that I can't grasp it? Come on, author! It's rare to see a story that doesn't deliberately overwhelm the main character, don't be disappointed😊

It's well written in some aspects, but it's lacking in some aspects.

I wish the poster a good sale of the book, and I would like to recommend a new book: Jade Spirit Sword Immortal. A traditional fairy tale, not a family story. Millions of manuscripts are deposited, investment, attention and suggestions are welcome.

There are too few updates. The quality is average, but not outstanding. The number of updates is so small that it is difficult to keep up with updates.

Write a new book in February next year. You can still write 1 million words within a year.

It's very well written, and it would be even better if the world view is well constructed.

I think the writing is pretty good, why are my grades so bad 🤐