Dream Master, Your Mission Is to Save the World?

Although it is the world of Dream Realizer, the core of the book is completely different. From fulfilling some nonsensical dreams to saving the world, from funny articles to refreshing articles. Both books are about playing with the brain, but this book is more about playing with the brain. The setting of skills is relatively complicated. This conflicts with Shuangwen. At least it is difficult for me as a lazy person to watch.

The first copy of this book is great. Let me see how it can be exempted. Reading a copy in one sitting is the correct way to open it. If you continue to read it, it will feel useless. In fact, the author's control over the plot and rhythm is still the same as in the first copy.

The current content of this novel can be regarded as food. It depends on the author's subsequent imagination and description whether he can turn it into fairy grass. There is still a lot of potential, and I look forward to the author's follow-up content.

The sea is all fucking water. In one sentence, a horse can turn over the water several times. Authentic large fountain pen

I booked everything and found out I had been cheated. I don't like watching the behind-the-scenes stories 😭

In fact, there is innovation and new ideas, and the development of those skills and whimsical ideas are all OK. But sometimes you get excited about writing, or you are particularly satisfied with a certain paragraph of description, and you don't need to repeat it many times. Just like this paragraph of mine, it is really too watery. The same sentence appears repeatedly, and the description of the same thing is mentioned repeatedly, and the words are not very big without major changes. It's so stupid. It will cost us money to read the book after you put it on the shelf, brother.

You! Go kill the Dream Master of All Realms!

The stupidest thing is, I don't know if your repeated paragraphs are due to the AI ​​generation not being done well or because you want to play out of chapters and can't play. But it hasn't been improved in the second volume, which only means that you can't even understand the AI.

The plot is okay, you can see the PUA dummy after the tsunami is solved, but the style is a bit biased toward a novice, with all kinds of exclamations, explanations of settings, talk about the wheel, and straightforward jokes (I can get all the jokes, and I have also played Ring World, but the author just feels a bit embarrassed when writing it). That's not to say that I don't recommend it to people. The writing is still acceptable, but I don't recommend that people who like The Dream Master read this book with the intention of reading similar books.

The book is okay. Well, it's considered plump food. It just has a little too much moisture.

It's not funny. People who come to the Dream Realization Agency basically want to see the whole show. It seems that the writing is more traditional, and it incorporates too many ghosts and monsters to make it more difficult to understand. I will wait until I change to the next world before subscribing.

Now that it's already gaining popularity, why not keep it up to the end? You've already written about Dream Master, so why not try to get a client to write fan fiction?

I immediately checked out Dream Master again.

Too much commentary, okay? I came to read novels, not to listen to your popular science. I fell asleep reading the whole science fiction. The more I wrote, the less I wanted to read it.

There are no rubbish skills, only rubbish usage. As long as the skills are extraordinary and not rubbish. Welcome to debate! Any skill can be interpreted as a magical skill for you

You are a new author yourself, and it is difficult to follow up with too few updates You are afraid of being unfinished. Also, in terms of your worldview, there are four worlds in the novice period alone, at least almost 300 chapters, or if you shorten it in the future, it will be more than 200 chapters. In addition, when it is official, your updates are too slow, making people think that it is easy to eunuch.

I feel like some places are too watery, and the same thing is described too many times 🙄

When I started writing Mo Li, I suddenly tuned into the youth love channel.

Young author, you really have the shadow of the Dream Master of the Ten Thousand Realms, which makes me so happy!

Can the author condense his words? It's too watery. Your 300 chapters can be compressed into about 120 chapters. Concise the text, don't repeat it all the time, and get rid of your shock and surprise. It's difficult to stretch. Delete everything you think can be deleted. If we didn't pay attention, we can go back and read it again. We don't need to remind you all the time. Leave the rest to others to fill in...

I dare not imagine how effective this kind of worldview explanation plus ability explanation plus behind-the-scenes commentary plus a book of centuries can be.

Personal suggestion 😪 Now that you have concept skills, you can't use them to create a strong person with a funny style, instead of fighting hard and having fun behind the scenes. The monster chapter in the first chapter is a bit funny, and Cthulhu in the second and now the behind-the-scenes in the third act feel so boring😞

It's very interesting to write, and it's very imaginative.

Format Name+Effect It looks useless at best, a bit funny, and has great usage restrictions, but in fact it is a magical skill, and the skill effect can create a concrete and big scene

From the third golden chapter onwards, it's all about water, and he also likes to show off in all kinds of ways.

666, Very imaginative, you have to take a look😋

Yes, yes, but isn't the dream master the one who makes wishes come true? How can he save the world?

Format reference: (or you can just write it, I will read it, just write the name of the world) World background: introduction to the basic world view, it can be about fandom, extraordinary system, power distribution, geography, specialties, you can write anything you think of... Source of doomsday: the source of the doomsday, the process of the disaster (whether it breaks out, whether it is late, what is the difference), what are the unique disasters, how does the world deal with it... Heroes and villains: similar character collection... Others...

There are too many psychological descriptions in some places. Readers can scan them at a glance, but listeners like me feel that this kind of psychological description is too bloated.

Everything in the original work is meaningless, all the masters are powerless, and the protagonist is left to show off. This way of writing First, those who are interested in the original work must like a certain character, but in the end, they have become supporting characters with no shining points to set off despair. For example, Huang Yaoshi's song awakened Huang Rong for a moment, and then she was able to escape, at the cost of her sinking deeper into consciousness. Second, those who are not interested in the original work, you wrote something that they are not interested in. The result is not pleasing to both sides.