Spirit Cage: I Am a DNF Mentor, and I Will Become Stronger by Accepting Disciples

It's too watery. If you have too much water, you'll feel dumb and embarrassed.

Think about it later, summon the DNF character, preferably the one with a time limit, which will look more enjoyable.

I have so many heroines! 😍😍😍

You have to open up the attack, suppress the combat power, and forcefully install B. The plot has no ups and downs.

Obviously, you can try to take Bai Yuekui as your disciple in Chapter 7. It can be said that he has a portable intelligence and can test his qualifications. If you don't believe it, you can just start it, but the result is endless. Why, you still want to go into people's hearts and transfer people's jobs? Or do you have to die before you can change jobs? If it were me, I would be able to use it as a career change tool in the early stage.

No wonder your first book was a hit. The Dragon Bone Village you described is so friendly, how troublesome would it be for them to cooperate with you in experimenting? It took more than 20 chapters, but it only needed one drop of blood anyway, so it was so good.

It can be scattered, it is tasteless to eat, and it would be a pity to throw it away.

Quickly jump to chapter 18 and read a few chapters back, because the protagonist is starting to show off. The first 17 chapters are about daily comedy, and the post-18 chapters are pretentious and slap-in-the-face. It would be very disconnected to read from the beginning, so it is recommended to start from chapter 18 directly.

I have a question. In Chapter 19, someone suddenly said that there was a novice gift pack and a low-level life potion. I have a question. What is going on? As I said before, there is no novice gift pack, but I suddenly started to read books. It's not even 20 chapters yet, and there is such an outrageous conflict. It's really frustrating. I was getting better at first, but suddenly I started to read books, and my style of painting changed drastically. From being okay to being showy, it's really outrageous.

The author must have thought that he was so good at using the routine he used twenty years ago. For one episode, the Dragon King had to fuck twenty times, and the climax was not allowed to be seen by the audience, so he ejaculated all over the place.

The first ten chapters are relatively daily. Although the protagonist is not very smart, he is still within the range of normal people. Chapter 19 The sudden change in the style of painting begins to make the protagonist show off. And Chapter 14 clearly states that there is no novice gift pack and points. In Chapter 19, a novice potion given in the novice gift pack suddenly appears

Change the previous text.

👎The writing is as boring as the short play, thin and watery

It's already chapter 14, and the transition is enough. Now, the slower the protagonist takes in his first apprentice, the stupider the protagonist will look. If you can't take in your first apprentice before chapter 20, you probably won't be able to retain readers. If you can't retain readers in the early stage, there's no need to talk about the later part. . .

Author, if you haven't sorted out your ideas, don't write. If you're inconsistent, you'll be fooled. It's so embarrassing to play, it's better to just give a novice a gift package for the entire career from the beginning

The subject matter is very attractive, but it is a pity that the author cannot control it. The protagonist is trying to show off, but the key point is that he doesn't show off at all, and instead looks very embarrassed😓. I won't talk about the cheating earlier, but I insisted on watching it for the first breaking point of recruiting a disciple, but the result was very disappointing. The main focus of this apprenticeship flow should be on the apprentice. A mediocre character learns skills after becoming a disciple, and then explodes to turn the tide in an emergency. The protagonist's character is highlighted through the apprentice.                                                                                         The protagonist can't wait to show off as soon as he gets the ability. The apprentice is just a material to complete the task and unlock the skills. It is very important, but you can lose it once you get it. 🖊 In the beginning, the protagonist has finished pretending, and there is no point to watch how the apprentice explodes.                                                                                                                                                               It is impossible to teach them all at once, and there are so many professions that it is impossible to teach them all, but you still have to write so many chapters to show readers the cards behind you, giving everyone the impression of trying to make a big pie. Who after opening this book will not know how awesome the poisonous milk powder profession is. There are also sub-professions. Before the apprentice can teach him, he can make up various settings and imagine how awesome various potions will be in the future. You've almost lost all your cards before you start, and if you write it down later, it won't be worth reading. You're really afraid that readers won't know what you're going to write next.

The first ten or so pictures are so watery, and even if you have diarrhea, you won't be able to eat them if you have diarrhea like this.

Summer beans

Although the writing is good, if it is too watery, I may soon abandon it.

It looks okay, but a little embarrassing. Not going well!

Starting from chapter 18, my style changed from normal to crooked-mouthed dragon king. It was so disconnected that I felt so embarrassed after reading it after chapter 18.

The slow pace is good, and the interaction with the characters is also good. There are currently no OOC changes. If you want to travel through the world, it is best to finish writing the spirit cage before wearing it so that there will be no big sense of fragmentation. There are at least two updates a day to have the desire to catch up. You can have daily conversations, but you can't have them in the ocean. This update will leave you with less content and less content Finally, don't be a eunuch! I want to be the first author of the Spirit Cage fanfic 😡

You are a eunuch, and I am a eunuch from Jiuchuan. Did your family agree?

The writing is quite good, and the pacing and writing are good. At least I, a bookworm of more than 20 years and a DNF adventurer of more than ten years, can understand it. I hope the author has an outline, has his own complement to the world view of the spirit cage, and has ideas to keep writing.

Just by looking at the title of the book, you can tell that there is no way to compare the combat power. If it is limited to the 60 version, it would be fine, but no matter how high it is, it can only increase the combat power of Linglong, and cannot overpower the poisonous milk powder. Otherwise, the small skills in front of the poisonous milk powder will greatly stretch the combat power.

It doesn't feel as good-looking as the previous one😭

It's okay to skip the first 22 chapters You can read it within 100 chapters, it's a waste of money from now on You just need to know the plot behind it and you'll be drowsy while watching it

"Name. " Colin. J "Do you agree with the concept of Dragon Bone Village? "Yes. He answered quickly. On the screen of the instrument next to him, a curve representing emotional fluctuations jumped violently, and the red light flashed. "What is your opinion on Charles, Morgan, and the three laws?" Colin's body tensed unconsciously. "They are... Deceivers, and the three laws destroy human nature... This time, the instrument sounded a sharp alarm. The technician operating the instrument didn't even look up, he just calmly crossed out a name on the list in front of him, and then said to the soldier next to him: "Bring it to area B, number 13." The two soldiers stepped forward, picked up Colin without hesitation, and dragged Colin to the side regardless of Colin's struggle and panic shouting. A closed passage. In Area B, an all-metal room, there was no interrogation or torture. Colin was fixed on an instrument. With a slight energy fluctuation, his consciousness quickly dissipated and his body functions stopped. Then the life essence in his body was extracted and purified. , And eventually merged into the energy reserves of Huifu Pond. Dragon Bone Village needs people, but will never accept threats. <1 In this life-and-death migration, any hidden dangers that may shake the foundation must be eliminated as efficiently as possible, and everyone who has passed the strict screening will finally receive their new identity. They received an ID card engraved with their name, number and photo. They were assigned to the newly built dormitory. Although it is simple, it is clean and tidy, and the green fields can be seen outside the window. In my opinion, it is the most promising Lingcong fandom now, surpassing Jiuchuan's one.

I have been raising it for a long time, why is it Dragon Ball and Saitama, not DNF?

Your painting style has changed a lot since then. Is this still the theme of DNF plus the spirit cage?