The Superpowered Forensic Doctor of the Conan World

If you like to make jokes, but you have to add parentheses after making jokes, then you might as well not make jokes. This is like explaining the punchline of a joke, which completely loses the fun. And, who asked you? The readers haven't said anything yet, so why did they put it in advance? If some readers misunderstood, please explain. Can the author also prevent readers from having different interpretations and only allow readers to have the interpretation the author wants?

It's very annoying to have to mention something about China in every chapter.

Honesty Asai, is the protagonist a transvestite?

If the protagonist loves to eat, write about how he carefully considers what he wants to eat that day. The taste is well described and makes people feel that he is satisfied with the food. If the story can give the feeling of a lonely gourmet, readers will not say anything at all. But don't think about it every time you eat, Chinese food is better, Chinese food is better. It makes people feel that the protagonist is very active in cooking, but in the end he is always dissatisfied when eating. It feels like this person is very awkward inside. Especially because the protagonist is an incompetent cook who only knows how to make pancakes and is usually too lazy to cook and always makes do with food. This makes him feel even more awkward inside. Moreover, the protagonist obviously loves to eat, but he is not attentive at all when eating. Every time he eats, he is thinking while thinking, thinking about it and returning to China, which is a bunch of meaningless words. Why can't the protagonist be properly described as eating seriously when he is eating? Since the author lets eating take up so much space, he should write about how the protagonist eats. I sincerely suggest the author to read some food articles and learn how to write about eating. Even if you don't refer to food articles, just refer to Moto Kojima to improve your description of eating.

I think choosing a supporting character from the original work as the protagonist is not as easy to write as the original protagonist. I also picked one in women's clothing. . . Somewhat diaphragmatic

He is required to do the work of several people for one forensic doctor's salary. He is required to do reasoning, he is required to snipe, he is required to do explosions, and no one is killed. Are all dead people in the Metropolitan Police Department? He needs to do everything? The more I watch, the more speechless I am 😒, he is so easy to bully and does so many things, and he is so desperate to seduce the protagonist. It's so frustrating, I can't stand it anymore.

Seventy percent of the words are self-talk in voice-over. What kind of book should I write? Instead of talking about stand-up comedy here, why not start a live broadcast and chat with people?

Does the author have any obsession with men and women or women's clothing?

Housheng, are you also qualified to write Conan?

There are too many long-winded digressions.