The Superpowered Forensic Doctor of the Conan World

You might enjoy using internet memes, but if you then add unnecessary details afterward, it's pointless to use them at all. It's like explaining the joke's punchline yourself—it completely loses its appeal. Besides, who asked you? The reader hasn't even said anything yet, so why are you adding unnecessary details beforehand? If a reader misunderstands, then you can explain.

It's annoying that every chapter has to mention China.

Makoto Asai, did the protagonist become a crossdresser?

If the protagonist loves to eat, write about how he carefully considers what he wants to eat that day, describe the taste well, and make the reader feel that he is satisfied with his meal. If you can write about the feeling of a solitary gourmet, even if it's a little padded, the readers won't say anything. But don't think "Chinese cuisine is so good" every time you eat.

I think it's easier to write a story with an original protagonist than a supporting character from the original work. And to make matters worse, they chose someone in drag... It's a bit off-putting.

He gets paid the salary of a forensic pathologist but does the work of several people. He's expected to do the deductions, the sniping, the explosions, and even things that don't result in death. Are all the people in the Metropolitan Police Department dead? Why does he have to do everything? It's getting more and more ridiculous. He's so easy to bully, yet he does so much, relentlessly exploiting the protagonist. It's so frustrating, I can't watch anymore.

Seventy percent of the text is just the author talking to himself. What's the point of writing a book? He might as well go live and chat with people instead of performing stand-up comedy.

Does the author have some obsession with male characters or cross-dressing?

You think you're qualified to write Conan, young man?

There's been too much rambling and digression.