
Dou Po: Practice Fakes and Become Real, Start with a Disaster and a Poisonous Body
斗破:练假成真,开局厄难毒体
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- Ongoing
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- 811k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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370Chapters
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It would be better if the conversational language could be carefully thought out and studied. It is enough to say expressions such as "younger generation" and "this sect" once.
The writing is broken, and the more I write, the more rubbish it becomes!
It is appropriate for you to make a transition to the Fighting Saint inheritance. It would be strange if the Sword Emperor inheritance does not collapse. It is difficult to recover after overturning the water! The Sword Emperor inheritance has to face the high-level fighting saints of the seven ancient tribes, Gu Yuan, and the Soul Emperor. How many lives does the protagonist have to dare to jump repeatedly? In the end, I could only turn into a mouse and hide, even walking on thin ice while wearing a vest. How can Gu Yuan have such courage? Just hard water! I can only say that the characters are now written in a nondescript manner.
Falling in love with a vest is too toxic
After the vest of the ancestor of the Xiao family came out, the main body was basically fishing in the water. The plot was all driven by the vest. It was a bit of a trap to deceive people. The most difficult thing is to fall in love with the vest. What will Qinglin do then? Does she like the great ancestor of the Xiao family of the human race or the poisonous body of Annan? The Hokage who has no heroine next door only did a dirty job in making the fake become real. The rest is all about the main body. What you write like this is a little bit like a tiger and not an anti-dog.
It's just that when the Dou Emperor inheritance begins, the author can't control it. It's okay if he wants to do a big job, but it's a problem if the income from doing a big job is not big enough. What the author wrote is actually okay. After the Dou Emperor inheritance or the Dou Emperor relics come out, the eight tribes will definitely come over. There won't be such a good thing if the eight tribes come over. It's normal to clear the scene, but as the protagonist, he should have thought of this from the beginning. As a result, he ignored the beginning and ended up trapping himself. Normally, the first step is done well, that is, borrowing other people's things to do your own thing. The combination of Eunnan Poison Body and Nether Poison Fire plus perfectly solves the hidden dangers. Adding a little medical fairy as a disciple is a great design and layout, but for a Dou Zong to plan the Dou Emperor and related matters, it is too big a step. Normally, it is just to pretend to be cool, and then plan a second identity, and find a way to get a Dou Zun in Zhongzhou. The left foot of the Dou Zong and the Nether Poison Fire are stepping on the right foot. God, it is reasonable to quickly get into the Dou Zun, and then go to stud a second identity, whether it is the descendant of the Sword Emperor or the son of the Dragon and Phoenix, you can start preparing, but at this time, disguise the Dou Emperor inheritance as a Dou Sage inheritance, trap a group of Dou Zun or even Dou Sage, and then start a Xiao Clan Dou When the Holy Spirit comes out, it will be normal for Xiao Yan to start suffering like the plot of this book. Because there is a Dou Saint with the identity of the Xiao clan, the next thing will not be the same as in this book. He can keep hiding and being aggrieved, he can play games with back and forth, and then he can The purpose is to collect residual pictures, dig out the relics of the Pure Lotus Demon Saint, and become the Pure Lotus Demon Saint. In this process, you can accumulate a few more points in the system, and then try again to turn the previous Dou Saint relics into the Dou Emperor relics. Create two layers of yin and yang, or two layers, and then you can enter the main story of this book. The descendant of the Sword Emperor and the son of Dragon and Phoenix, one of the lines, then cut the eight tribes like leeks. The two descendants of the one-star and two-star Dou Sage, relying on the Dou Emperor Sword Intent and the dragon and phoenix bloodline, it is reasonable to pin those nine-star Dou Sage to the ground and beat them. Normally speaking, doing this kind of thing is a big lie, and it will make the world Dancing in the palm of your hand, one very important point is not to play with fire, not to get burned, and not to lose your temper. As a result, the protagonist had to go to the Douzong to plan the Dou Emperor, and as soon as he came out, he directly killed the small fish and shrimps along with the protagonist. He was all the small fish and shrimps and all the fish ponds were blown up to death.
Gu Yuan is about to be written as a hero 😅 If Gu Yuan was so cruel, he would not have had the opportunity to have the Soul Emperor dominate after being arrogant for so many years. He would have killed the Soul Emperor long ago when he was severely injured by Xiao Xuan.
The latest chapters are simply rubbish. What the Soul Emperor said is true. Why didn't he just reveal it in the later stages of the original work? Even during the battle between the two emperors, he could have said it to disturb Xiao Yan's mind. This kind of creation has no logic at all. It's just for the sake of being dark. You can do it before these chapters come out. It's just water. After these chapters come out, it really rubs the readers' IQs to the ground. It's completely illogical. If you really feel that the fighting power has increased too fast and you can't continue writing, you can write about the Great Overlord later. If you don't want to write about the Overlord, you can always get a time-travel function and go to a world with a higher combat power level. You have written this book, and many people will support your new book. You are playing a good hand of cards.
After watching the copy of Sword Emperor's Relics, that's about it. The quality of the plot after that was too bad and the level plummeted.
How to block the author? It's so watery that I feel nauseated. When will a function be released?
The idea is not bad. There is no need to grab too many opportunities from Xiao Yan. It would be better if we can maintain the Three Emperors War with Xiao Yan and Hun Tian Emperor. By the way, the protagonist has already robbed Xiao Yan of two big opportunities. Is he still going to grab the Three Thousand Flames and Canaan Academy's strange fire? I think it would be better to grab Han Feng's Hai Xinyan and create a few different fires that don't exist before, such as the dry blue water flame in Mortal. The protagonist can combine it with Hai Xinyan and the two different fires he currently has. It looks quite powerful, and the colors are almost the same. In the end, it is estimated that a new blue or purple flame can be fused.
I think the plot of this Dou Di plot has been scrapped.
I felt uncomfortable when the Dou Emperor Legacy came out. I immediately called on all the imperial clans to come out to suppress the little Kalami protagonist. That's fine. The protagonist still has to play operations and ask the supporting characters to come out to take care of the trouble. The protagonist is often missing, and there is no point in showing off. After all, you have to play with a fake identity. Nowadays, the plot of the ancient tribe is so cliché and 💩, I don't know where I learned the techniques from female videos.
The author believes me, if I update ten chapters a day, it will definitely become popular.
The ancient imperial clan in this book must be severely humiliated, otherwise they will be destroyed by the soul clan again.
He was scolded as a eunuch🤭
My personal emotions are too heavy, and all kinds of character breakdowns follow.
Putting the cart before the horse, forgetting the core and essence of this book
Can you write a book? I haven't seen the protagonist poop until now. Doesn't the protagonist not poop?
The plot of the Ancient Clan is at least 10 times too good to be true.
Really water
The water has flooded the golden mountain, and he is still quarreling with women and pouring dirty water on them. I have given up.
Start talking nonsense, how has the character design of Gu Yuan collapsed... The plot of the ancient clan is really poorly written...
If I add another dollar to this book, I will be a dog.
As the title says, it would be a pity that the author didn't write the article.
What can I say, it was really fun to watch at the beginning, but the plot after the Jade Slips of the Sword Emperor felt a bit like a man who has exhausted his talents. It would be better to continue with the son of the Dragon and Phoenix versus the successor of the Sword Emperor, dragging the entire continent into the flames of war, and the various forces dealing with it, rising and falling.
Don't be a eunuch, brother, I've already written this, just finish it for him.
All kinds of OOC, can't grasp it
I came back to sweep the tomb, but it was too serious later. I wrote it based entirely on personal subjective opinions. Those who knew it was a fan, and those who didn't knew it thought it was someone with the same name and surname. The plot advancement and emotional rendering were a complete mess.
Haha, finally I can't write anymore, and I still can't get anything out of it.
I've read more than 300 chapters, but the rest of it is basically full of water. One thing can drag on for ten chapters. The first part is okay, but the second part is unbearable. It's a waste.
It started well. After reading more than 200 chapters, I felt like I didn't want it to end. One scene required several chapters of long words and crazy narration. After Chapter 250, an event will take 10 chapters, a transition will take 2 chapters, and a battle will start in 5 chapters. It's so long-winded that I can only skip and read.
I'm going to cut it off. I'll change my waistcoat and write a new one.
Why don't you just speed up the ending? Instead, it seems like you want to be nostalgic or something.
Absolutely, it actually stopped at the climax, Cun Zhi said yes