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Sigh, I don't know what to say Is Can Jian's book really that bad? I think it's absolutely impossible Why are the data always bad? It's really hard to bear I hope the God of Broken Sword will rise I suggest you write "Swordsmanship"

The pig's feet are dead in the first few chapters. Is the enemy still so old and cruel? Is this span too huge, leading to lack of confidence in winning? No matter how awesome Pig Knuckle is, there is only one person. Even if some helpers can be used in the future, the number of enemy levels will be too high, right? Isn't it too much of a tightrope to walk in this situation where everyone is the enemy? Where is the chance for the pig's feet to make a comeback? We can't just have future information. To improve our strength, we need resources. Where do they come from? You can't always strengthen the enemy, right? The improvement of your teammates also depends on taking the enemy's strength?

The author of the new chapter wants to say that every inch of mountains and rivers is filled with blood, and the road is paved with piles of bones. Beneath the surface of victory is always the foundation of blood and bones. The foundation of human race's future victory in the Immortal Palace is paved with soul bones, and then put on a gorgeous coat. The world, including the world, only knows the gorgeous appearance of the Immortal Palace, but they don't know that sin is the essence. To eat away at the soul bones is to destroy the foundation.

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The plot is really good, especially the characters. The real-life plot is a bit cumbersome, but the fantasy world can be absorbed as soon as you see it. The real world is a bit jumpy, the character design is really strong, and the plot design. Generally, the author relies on dialogue, and you rely entirely on the plot to advance. But indeed, there are many places where the fantasy world cannot enter the plot, but the old author's writing style is too sophisticated.

Brother Canjian is definitely still good, but the beginnings of the last few books are not attractive at all. Your world view and setting are thrown away at the beginning, which is very confusing. Readers don't like this now, and they need some exciting short stories. You even deleted the first two or three, fast-forwarded to being tortured by the master's wife, and then slowly lost the setting. It would be better than now. Then the introduction is all about settings. You have to make the introduction attractive. You can either write some interesting plot or put cheats on it. Such a lot of "sci-fi" settings really don't seem interesting at all. Let's take a look at the recent trend of the market. This kind of opening introduction is really not popular now. Don't work behind closed doors. I believe that Brother Canjian is good enough, so he has to compromise with the market.

Can Jian is not a novice author with his imagination and writing style, but now he is not good at writing online articles. It was very difficult for Tian Ji Shen Shuan to pursue it at the beginning, and the plot and story direction were poorly written. But it is very exciting to break it down into short stories one by one. You can take advantage of this and try to write as exciting a story as possible in the early stage. Change the old habits and set up ideas. Don't stuff too much in the early stage at the beginning. It is recommended that you give the AI ​​an outline of what you have done before and try to figure out where you went wrong.

The writing is pretty good, why did I cut it again? I'm looking forward to the new book.

I was browsing Baidu yesterday and read some news about articles before the release of chatGTP5. I want to say {"NickName":"Canjian㊣","UserId":197643921} Canjian, is the outline of your book adapted from reality? Originally there was no problem if I didn't think deeply about some things, but after the fortune-telling, I tend to think of human nature in a dark and far-reaching way. Sometimes I feel that the author describes the future too realistically. The same goes for this book. The beautiful country is currently fully promoting the development of super artificial intelligence. The power of capital and national power are converging.