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Sigh, I don't know what to say. Is Broken Sword's book really that bad? I think it's absolutely impossible. Why is the data always bad? It's really hard to hold back. May the legendary swordsman rise again! I suggest writing "Kendo" instead.

The protagonist dies after only a few chapters! Are the enemies still as cunning and ruthless as ever? Isn't this leap too drastic, making it hard to believe they can win? Even if the protagonist is incredibly powerful, he's still just one person. Even with future helpers, the sheer number and level of enemies is just too much!

The author of this new chapter seems to be saying that every inch of land is paved with blood, and countless bones pave the way. Beneath the surface of victory lies a foundation of blood and bone. The future victory of humanity in the Celestial Court is built upon these soul bones, paved with a magnificent exterior. The world only sees the glamorous exterior of the Celestial Court, but they do not know that sin is the essence, and consuming soul bones is destroying the very foundation.

Yu Ya fan art

The plot is truly excellent, especially the character development. The realistic storyline is a bit cumbersome, but once you get into the fantasy world, you're hooked. The realistic world feels a bit disjointed. The character and plot design are exceptionally strong. Most authors rely on dialogue, but this one relies entirely on the plot to drive the story forward.

Broken Sword Brother is definitely talented, but the beginnings of his recent books are completely unengaging. He throws your world-building and settings right at the start, which is overwhelming. Readers don't buy into that anymore. You need some suspenseful and exciting little stories.

Broken Sword is a creative and well-written author, not a novice, but he seems to have lost his touch with web novel writing lately. He had a very difficult time following "Heavenly Calculation," as the plot and story development were poorly written. However, his individual short stories are quite engaging.

It was written quite well, why was it cut again? Looking forward to the new book!

Yesterday, while browsing Baidu, I read some articles about the upcoming ChatGTP5 launch. I wanted to ask @reader, is the outline of your book based on reality? Normally, some things aren't problematic if you don't delve too deeply, but ever since "The Divine Calculation," I've tended to view human nature as dark and profound.