Evolving from a Stray Cat Clone

Wang Jing emerged from the filthy sewers, traversed countless piles of garbage, and exterminated rats in his path. His aura erupted like a volcano, his eyes were bloodshot, and he exuded a chillingly fierce aura. He has just completed the evolution of his talent "Tiger's Roar," and now his mental power has reached an unprecedented new height, as if he can see through everything and control every…

You're clearly very good at writing light novels, yet you insist on diving headfirst into dark fantasy. Take my advice: your talent lies in light novels, not dark ones. Think about the divination master—his original self is trash, but his other identity is incredibly satisfying! You could totally abandon his original self and write a separate book with that other identity, and people would be eagerly following along.

This worldview feels so dark! There's no one to stand out from the crowd. 😰

It's written like a typical sadomasochistic novel. In the first forty-odd chapters, everyone even remotely connected to the protagonist suffers terribly—either dead or maimed. Are you trying to write a "Cat Clan" novel? The emotional descriptions are indeed quite delicate, but you can't just make everything feel like knives. It leaves the reader feeling suffocated. People read books mainly to relax, and this kind of writing makes it hard to keep reading.

It was a tiny little thing meowing in the grass. My dog ​​found it while I was walking him, and I felt it was fate, so I took it home to raise.

Seriously, this kind of overly frustrating writing won't become popular! It's too oppressive! The current environment isn't suitable for writing this kind of thing. Life is already frustrating enough; nobody wants to read a novel that's even more frustrating.

They enjoy washing stray cats and even emphasize that cat lovers shouldn't mind. Many stray cats are a result of people who like cats but then abandon them.

The scope is too narrow. For dozens of chapters, you're still dealing with cats and dogs, stuck in the same little alley. You're constantly busy with trivial matters. Even with the system's power, you're only so-so now; you can't even support a king among cats and dogs.

Even watching a cat is thrilling! 😂 It's unimaginable how the protagonist grows up in human society after the initial events.

The new book has a very novel world view and the content is very attractive. The protagonist's suffering is also not too bad, considering that Su Renhuang was suppressed for a full 100,000 years. But I was a bit confused when I saw the latest chapter. Although Zhao Xuan's efforts were touching, her motivation was hard to understand.