Hunting Demons Alone in a World Without Demons

The beginning is quite exciting, but there are too many sensationalisms at the end that dissipate the excitement. Moreover, the sensationalism is too urgent and there is too little foreshadowing. The author could have just let the protagonist just go on and on without asking for any explanation, and then doubt himself later. Now it is just not exciting enough, the sensationalism is not that strong, and it is neither good nor bad.

The plot of the story is monotonous and the theme is not obvious. What do you want to give the readers? Is it a feeling of pleasure? Or a sense of reasoning? Or a sense of suspense? None. In terms of enjoyment alone, the first point is: the upgrades for killing monsters are not written in place, there is no numerical or hierarchical general expression of combat power, and there is no reference data. Second: The fighting scenes are sparse and not enjoyable at all. Not to mention the sense of reasoning, the protagonist is led along throughout the whole process, and the psychological description of the whole process is "Why is this happening?" "How could this happen?" "What is happening to this world?" What do you want to do? Do you want to write the reaction of an ordinary person? An ordinary person would struggle desperately when faced with a life-threatening danger, instead of being led along slowly without any sense of crisis. The protagonist's slowness destroys the sense of suspense, because the most important thing in suspense is the struggle of the protagonist's subjective initiative. I won't write about other bad points, for fear of wasting my words. You will never make progress if you only pick good things to say. Suggestions from readers are valuable and need to be selected. The reader has no conflict of interest with you. He doesn't make money from you, but you want to make money from him.

There are many advantages, so I won't go into details. Let's just talk about the disadvantages First of all, there is no space ring for a wandering vagabond like the protagonist. Without the space ring, 60% of the load must be carried with water, and 40% of the load must be carried with food. If you are too tired to walk, you will not have the strength to fight monsters. Secondly, the protagonist is too weak, and is said to be powerful, but a random monster is stronger than him, so it doesn't work at all. It is said that the bullets are very powerful, and they can kill monsters as soon as they hit the weak point, but when you encounter a random monster, the bullets are useless and you can only breathe flames from the mouth. All the advantages of the protagonist can be easily erased by any random fish monster, and they cannot be fully utilized. They are simply weak. Finally, the protagonist deliberately suppresses the level and abuses the master. The protagonist kills hundreds or thousands of people before he can advance to the first level. If there is no exponential growth later, the protagonist kills 3,000 people to advance to the second level, and kills 9,000 people to advance to the third level. Then to advance to the fourth level, he needs to kill 30,000 people. The fifth level is 100,000 people, the seventh level is 1 million people, and the ninth level is 10 million people. The protagonist can simply kill all the living people in the world, so what kind of demons are there to kill? Anyway, all living people are demon reserves.

After reading twenty chapters, the plot is dragging and the story is confusing (a demon hunter meets a serious cultist with extraordinary power and doesn't know how to kill him. He describes it in his mind and is confused about what is and what is not. The author tried to put himself in the perspective of the reader and read it again. Do you have the desire to read on?) The story is told in a long and verbose way 🥱

The writing is okay, better than I expected. Why the popularity is not high (I guess), the protagonist's stakes are not big enough, or the previous writing is not exciting enough, and there is not enough emotional plot to drive the rhythm. There is a writing technique that is to foreshadow the novel 2 to 3 times before coming out. This can make the novel more moving. I think if I learn more skills, my income can be significantly increased.

After reading the first few chapters, the author's basic skills are pretty good and the descriptions are solid. I give it a recommendation. But to be honest, the characters and plot are too weak, making it difficult to read. First, the character design is too flat. As a "demon hunter", the protagonist's initiative is too weak. Obsession, motivation and desire are all vague, like a robot completing a task. In a world where everyone is abnormal, a protagonist with a bit of epilepsy, calm madness and ruthlessness will make a more prominent impression. The current protagonist is too normal, acting like an insensitive social animal. The character design was not well established at the beginning, and it does not match the tone of the world, which also affects the rhythm of the narrative. The second is the problem of golden fingers. As a person who penetrates into the plot, the protagonist is faced with a changing plot line, which does not reflect any advantage in information gap. Unexpectedly, it is unexpected to actively use key characters and key events to accumulate advantages. This setting is directly abolished in half. Or don't write it at all. Since you've written it, it's best to use it at the beginning. This way of writing is purely to add debuff to yourself, and the sense of satisfaction will be lost immediately. In addition, the setting of directly rewarding abilities is actually a failure in the long run, weakening the narrative space, because this kind of reward is one-time, too many and too complex abilities will quickly lead to aesthetic fatigue, and it is difficult to provide positive feedback. It is better to add attribute points to the protagonist, add information gap, or deduced the knowledge of spells. Specific skills can be learned slowly or made up for by extraordinary items. You can refer to how the popular wizard novels design the system.

Then I got confused, why can shit get recommended, but a book like this doesn't get recommended. In my opinion, this book can only be said to have a slightly poisonous character, but the other problems are really not big. The writing is really enjoyable, but it doesn't get recommended.

The protagonist is a bit too passive. Although the character is written as if he can grasp everything, he is not.

After reading a few chapters, I actually felt that it was okay. The characters were written with flesh and blood, but the results were not very satisfactory. After thinking about it, the reason why it still didn't feel good enough was that after the protagonist killed the demon, the demon turned back into a human. Then the protagonist was misunderstood by others. The landlord of the protagonist directly regarded the protagonist as a psychopath who kills people at will.

As far as I'm concerned, you might as well just write it as hunting. They are dead elite monsters, bosses, and mobs. Those made into trophies have special abilities. For example, what you wrote before can become that kind of thing.

When hunting monsters, don't engage in evil stuff.

Didn't the protagonist kill the villagers in Chapter 1? The Sheriff could actually let him go? Is there a section missing in the middle? Why was he interrogated by the Sheriff and then allowed to walk away without saying anything or doing anything?

I've read the book, but what about the adult devil?

In fact, I think the last sentence of the introduction is more appropriate if the double quotation marks are removed, and it has a more silent perseverance, silent guarding, and apocalyptic whispering feeling. Of course it's just a personal opinion. By the way, I always feel that there are some other action descriptions missing after drawing the gun, such as the clichéd but classic step and slamming of the door.

Do you want to find a way to change the introduction to make it more attractive? The essence of Qidian's book promotion is to sell books. The quality of the book is the main factor, but it is not the only factor.

You want to kill a demon, but you will be misunderstood if you kill, so why do you do it in advance? In the opening scene of the sacrifice, you can't wait for him to finish the sacrifice? The protagonist and the woman have nothing to do with each other. As long as the woman dies and others see that it was the man who killed the woman, isn't it justifiable for the protagonist to take action?

I didn't understand Carter's part. The first time I met Carter, he basically went to harm the protagonist. If the protagonist hadn't already restarted The second time he stole the gun may have been unintentional. His hand may have been stretched out uncontrollably, so why didn't you wait for him to take your gun away and play with it for half an hour to see if your attitude would change Third, where did the bond and friendship come from letting Carter go again and again? It seems that the orphans who were raised as slaves in ancient times were abused for more than ten years. The main plot begins to meet normal people. When asked if the protagonist hates them, he slowly shakes his head. No, this is a mean bone, and it has reached a certain level. How kind? Is this kindness? This is stupid Although it is hard to believe, there are indeed such people in real life. When I first gained a foothold, I held an umbrella for them out of kindness. But after helping, I found that there was something wrong with some people's bones. They obviously relied on their own efforts, but they imagined that they treated themselves like shit. There would be "goodwill" in making friends out of nothing Later I learned my lesson. These cheap bones should stay in the trash can. Some people should get the treatment they deserve. I think it is a tragedy for normal human society that she can get up I will even give the perpetrator certain preferential treatment as appropriate. It's okay to treat it like a donkey's liver and lungs with good intentions. I kneel down and lick the bitch's bones with a warm heart. It feels as disgusting as drinking a pound of oil.

It's very well written, why doesn't anyone read it?

After reading Chapter 19, I feel nothing. It's tasteless. It might have been popular ten years ago.

The title is not bad, the introduction is not bad, but the content cannot support it.

Isn't it too old-fashioned and far-fetched for women to dress up as men?

Very good🤓

I have thousands of reservations, and I think it looks pretty good.