Great Tang: A Cook's Journey as a Palace Guard Soldier

The author's choice of words and sentence structure feels a bit off.

It's quite interesting, but the protagonist can never truly resolve his background and lack of education throughout his life. Don't abandon the story! Keep it up! ✊

The writing is good, but it's a bit bland and lacks dramatic tension. The daily life is written in a fragmented and unplanned way. Everyone in the village is very busy, but the protagonist can order people around and treat them like NPCs with just a word about work points. The plot progresses slowly, and the protagonist keeps hiding his talents and doesn't seem to have any ambitions.

I've read up to chapter 382. The characters, such as Inspector Sun, Xu Weiwei, and Xu Erhu, are vividly portrayed. However, to be honest, it's quite frustrating to read. You're an anomaly in the Tang Dynasty. When you have no power to protect yourself, you mindlessly pull out those groundbreaking things. You wouldn't survive that long in that place with your actions.

The character of Magistrate Zhou is written like a pile of crap. They try to create difficulty artificially, but completely ignore the protagonist's current treatment. The plot is utterly absurd; these chapters are just a rip-off.

It's all over the place, a jumble of trivialities and random details. Let's cut it.

Thank you for your criticism and corrections. I am a new author, and my writing style does have some issues. I am also learning from other excellent authors. This is not something that can be completed in a day or two. I am also working hard to adjust and correct it, and strive to write better and better. We sincerely apologize for any inconvenience this may cause to your reading. To all the friends who supported this book, I sincerely thank you for your understanding.

I'm not trying to criticize, just sharing my opinion. I watched it on and off, mainly because I would get a little angry from time to time. I hadn't figured it out before, but I suddenly realized the reason just now. Most people in this story are extremely self-centered and will proactively do things that others may disapprove of, but they themselves feel, "Oh, I'm doing this for your own good."

It's so frustrating. They give you whatever you want without taking any precautions. They're just taking advantage of honest people like you.

Did the author read it after finishing writing? Do you see the context flowing smoothly? Does it feel awkward? Is the plot disjointed? There are no transitions, and it seems nonsensical. Often, only one character is mentioned when they appear, and then another character inexplicably appears in the next sentence. Does he/she just appear out of nowhere?