Let's Not Speak of the Paranormal

It's good to watch, I hope it won't turn into a fantasy novel disguised as horror in the future.

Looking at it so far, although the scary atmosphere is still slightly inferior to Twilight Partition, the other storylines, suspense, and small details are no worse than the first part of Twilight Partition. The author keeps it up, keep it up

After reading Chapter 85, I was poisoned and had to leave.

This is the number of deaths from the Black Death that I found. It was 75 million. That's why I chose a value of 40 million. I actually don't think it's an exaggeration. Because this is a virus that a whole country is trying to spread. I even think this value is a bit low. But recently many people have complained about this point, which makes me a little confused. Is this value really wrong?

I haven't read it yet, but it seems that the atmosphere in the comment area is pretty good so far. I looked for the new book rankings and found it, and it was pretty low in the rankings. However, since the comment area doesn't require people to pay to speak, it's rare to see good reviews in the comment area. I'll give it a try and come back to comment.

When writing about animals, write about animals. When writing about people, write about people. When writing about animals, write about people and people like animals. As a result, humans are not like humans and animals are not like animals. The same is true for the main text. If you want to write about food, then write about food. Inexplicably, there is a paragraph missing. There is no cause or effect and there is still more than half a paragraph.

It's a very good novel, but the writing pace was too slow, which dragged down my grades. I wrote more than 300,000 words to resist the village god of a novice village. I was given everything from golden finger opportunities to elixirs and money. The result was not that satisfying. The protagonist was tortured. If I continue writing like this, it will only become useless.

The unit of items is often referred to as the economic system. In the first few chapters, the protagonist went to the mountain to collect medicine, and it was mentioned that red hair grass costs 25 copper coins per pound. The author obviously has never bought Chinese medicine. Because there are not many herbs that can be used, even in the mountains. Moreover, a grass is very light. If you want to pick one kilogram, you may need to pick it all from a large area, which consumes a lot of energy and time. It is difficult to measure. My suggestion is that when it comes to medicines in the future, count them in one or two dollars.

It looks good, it doesn't feel like a newbie, but you can change the area. There is not much traffic in this area, and it will be better if you go to fantasy.

In the first few chapters, the pig's foot is portrayed as a waste + a broom star + an oil bottle. Is it the same later?