Starting from the Insight into the Fire, You Can Start to Develop Your Liver-Exploding Talent

I was dawdling with Luo Liba Suo, writing scenes all the time, rambling about whether I had watched too many movies.

A small family in the county had a plaque that read Zhenbei Palace, and then it was attacked by bandits. How funny.

Literary and artistic youths have a lot of fun, but they play too abstractly. You are not writing a book, you just want to show off your skills and haven't understood it yet. The artistic conception you write is almost out of line, and you don't know what you want to express. It's like you don't have the ability to show off, so you just stop and pretend.

I feel like it will be a good story, but there are too many and complicated characters, and the fragmented narrative is incoherent. Readers who don't have the ability to see clearly will not be able to understand it.

Read Chapter 2. The dogs don't even look. Before reaching the dead end, I went up and became a slave. It's easy to get in but hard to get out. Take a look at Lao Wang next door. It's completely a springboard

What the hell? Is the prince's palace at the beginning a big family or a prince's palace? It's a mess.

Stumbling and stumbling, the pig's foot was caught in the door?

Why hasn't it been published yet with 450,000 words?

Just cut it off. Look at the beginning. I don't even know what I'm looking at.

Isn't it 300,000 words at the latest? What's going on?

The writing is too messy and the plot has no connection at all.

Don't be proactive with cheats, just have one or two passive talents.