We Agreed This Was Just to Experience Life, So Why Did You Become Real, Immortal Maiden?

The first life was terrible, and the most poisonous point of the book was the first life, but the second life kept the book alive, and I haven't read the rest yet. Overall, the male protagonist is a great medicine that can ascend once every three thousand years 🤭

The book review I wrote before was based on my thoughts when I read about 400,000 words. Now that I have read more than 700,000 words, I will write another one. (The following content contains spoilers) Before the end of the Western Region chapter, my impression of this article changed from "an instant noodle article suitable for filling my stomach" to "the author treats readers as good sons." The reason is that there are too many noodles and seasoning packets. Five or six packets of bread and condiments will make most people feel nauseous. In my opinion, the noodles and seasoning packets in this book are the contents of the previous life. After writing nearly a million words, the author's past life routine is actually very obvious: the protagonist finally sacrifices his life to change the future of the heroines. You said that Goldfinger has distributed relevant task requirements and the protagonist has to complete them. I understand. But every time, the protagonist dies, leaving the heroine a widow for thousands of years. What's the difference between this and adding noodles one by one? They all taste pretty much the same. As for the emotional part, it's the seasoning packet. It's in line with the public's taste, but if you add too much, it won't be that delicious. But The author put a pack of beef cubes at the junction of the Western Regions chapter and the Qin Kingdom chapter, and the taste was much better. What are beef cubes? In my opinion, it is the emotional part of this life. For example, Shura Field, for example, handing out some candies. I read this book just for Shura Field, just like eating braised beef, you have to have beef. Eating beef nuggets for nothing may not be so amazing. But in instant noodles, beef cubes are a delicacy. That's pretty much it. Here are some of my thoughts on the plot of the subsequent novel. One is that the prize pool is almost over. Currently there are eight: Apprentice, White Dragon, Western Region Trio, King Qin, Nine-tailed Fox, Samsara God (Sister). In Qidian's harem novels, many authors are very good at writing three or four female protagonists clearly, but even if they write five or six, they may not be able to follow up. There are eight of you now. If you add more, I think you will either turn into a stallion, or you will be unfinished and the pot of instant noodles will be soaked to pieces. Also, I think it's okay to do business in this world. In this book, I think the combat power, population, and technological development are relatively broken. Millions of monks have been fighting at every turn, and for thousands of years they have not seen any small problems such as social development. It is actually irrelevant in this article. After all, I'm not here to see this. But I'm afraid that the author wants to dominate the whole world and compete with the emotional part for proportion, and even take the lead. At present, it seems that in this world, the law of heaven has been almost taken care of, and the harem and the male protagonist can live a life without shame.

Let's talk about the two female protagonists in advance The first one to appear is Sword Fairy. The writing is okay but a little cliché. The characters are not fleshed out. You can guess what the protagonist will do in the end, but you can still watch it; The second one to appear is White Snake. , The characters are full-bodied, and the interactive descriptions are real and touching. I really want the male protagonist to immediately become a real person with her and be entangled until death. The regrets of the two people who have devoted everything to each other but cannot officially get married are vividly described. After watching it, I feel that White Snake can be the single female protagonist. The third one to appear in the main storyline is the Buddha Girl with Seven Apertures and Exquisite Heart. After reading a few chapters, I didn't feel touched at all. Because White Snake's writing is so good and difficult to surpass, I will keep it for now. Anyway, it's definitely worth a look! ! ! 😭😭

Usually when I get to the latest chapter of a book, I will write some personal feelings about it. This is to give new book friends an idea to try. Of course, I can't force others to read it. After all, everyone has their own favorite style. I have been reading it in that life, but the impression was a little worse. I have been reading it for a month in this life. Catch the latest chapter today First of all, let me talk about my thoughts on reading this book at the time, because I have read books with this theme before, such as "My Exclusive Dream Game" and "They All Want to Kill Me". Some knowledgeable book friends may say, aren't these all eunuchs? Pertinent, completely correct, the above are all eunuchs, so I know that it is rare for books with this kind of subject to be completed. The main reason is that as the number of female protagonists increases, how to write the relationship between the heroines and how the protagonist handles the real story will become increasingly difficult to write. Once you can't write it, it will become more and more difficult to write. If it is good, it will easily fall apart. I hope the author will think carefully about what to write next Then let's talk about my feelings after reading this book I like to read light novels and romance genres. The subject matter really moved me when I read this book. Younger people like this kind of literature more. Then in terms of plot Everyone agrees that Ruxue's plot is much better, and I am no exception. I think there are many reasons. For example, Ruxue's relationship with the protagonist is more obvious. Ruxue's chapter is longer, and the relationship between Ruxue and the protagonist is described in more detail. Of course, Ruxue has a gentle personality and is well portrayed in the story. In comparison, the direct relationship between Qingyi and the protagonist is more of a master-disciple relationship in the story. The protagonist's feelings for Qingyi are not deeply expressed in terms of love, and Qingyi's style in the real world is cold and arrogant, which is quite different from that in reincarnation, although it can be used "Growing older", "The master died in front of my eyes"... These are the reasons, and the reasons are considered sufficient, but the perception is still a bit fragmented, giving me the feeling that a cold female swordswoman has appeared out of nowhere. However, if I can read the first life, it will not be a problem to finish this book. Then there is the line of Wang Xin. In the reincarnation story of Wang Xin, I read it little by little. The feeling of reading at that time was "water". I read a little every day, but I didn't feel that I had read it, and then waited for the next day. The viewing experience was so bad that I kept reading the new reincarnation. And after reading the story of Wang Xin, I felt that the protagonist practiced cultivation and appeared as a saint in front of others. I am currently on the Siyao line. After reading the part I just finished stocking up on, I feel a lot better. It should be because I have stocked up a lot, and I feel less watery. Moreover, the emotional line between Siyao and the protagonist is much more obvious than the Wangxin line. There is an additional mother character in this life. In my opinion, it is not a deduction, but there is one more character to describe, and the author's grasp of the length is more tested. Finally, let me mention the reality line. There is no big problem at the moment, but I am quite afraid that the author will write the problem. In reality, the opening chapter is a puppet emperor. I don't feel the role of this identity. It is to show that the protagonist is an emperor but can cultivate immortality in a stable manner without having to deal with political affairs. The reason is that I still want to portray a villain who seizes power. I don't understand how the author will infer the real line. I am currently reading many books on the list. The ranking of this book is relatively pertinent in my opinion. One is that the audience is not that wide, and the other is that the writing style has changed significantly. The top 50 in the monthly vote list is not a big problem, but the top 10 is unlikely. I recommend that book lovers who want to try new flavors give it a try. If you can read the first life, you can continue to read it. After reading the first life, it is really difficult to accept and it is not recommended to read it again. The second life is indeed a highlight, but the last two lives did not reach the height of the second life.

To be honest, I didn't want to read this book at first, because this type of book is easy to start high and then go low. But if the book is out of stock, just click in and take a look, and then you won't be able to leave! ! The characters are created so well, especially Bai Ruxue. They all made me cry! ! ! 😢 The author knows very well what we old bookworms like to read! I hope the author can write such good plots later on, and don't start too high and start too low. Is there any report below that moved you to tears

Love must be simulated. The first three female protagonists are so well portrayed.

It's time to give it up. You don't really want to write about a hundred lives, do you? It's okay to watch Shura Field after receiving the main timeline. There are still two lives left to see the foreshadowing.

Your face has grown old, but your concubine is still with you

Romance of a happy female channel who wears a fairy skin

It's almost enough to just watch the second life. The second life is just about pure intelligence. Especially the forced amnesia later made me laugh. It has to be this way, right? 😒

Speed

This book is really well written. It is already ranked third on the new book list. Among the books I have read, this is the rare book that makes me feel heartbroken. I support the author very much. I hope the author can write a few million words. I will always be with you and support you (and it would be better if the update frequency is higher)

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The single mother-to-child author has revealed her identity! Because only singles can write such pure love. Those who have endured hardships are bad girls, so don't waste it! 😆😆😆

This book is so weird. Others are covered with a layer of chocolate on the outside and 💩 on the inside. This one is wrapped with a layer of chocolate on the outside and chocolate on the inside. It's rare in the world

White Snake's writing is a bit too good, and I can't stand watching other female protagonists😭

I wanted to jump after reading more than 100 chapters. They were all filled with sour scenes, doing whatever I wanted to do for you, being an enemy of the world, etc. I even suspected that the author was a female.

When I saw Chapter 25, I really thought it looked better. Then I made a few illustrations. The heroine transformed for the first time, and then rode a bull down the mountain with the hero. It was inexplicably sweet, 🙂

Tmd is written so little that no one can read it. Do you think we look down on it?

What everyone is here to see is not just the Shura Field in the Harem, it's okay to highlight the key points👌 This will save you from the uneven distribution of resources for different female protagonists after dozens or hundreds of chapters or the skipping of single female protagonists.

I feel like this one is already one of the more popular ones. I haven't read many novels with the same theme. I searched a lot about eunuchs.

To prevent the first female protagonist from being too long in previous simulations, I just wrote two female protagonists in the early stage, Haji, you guy.

Hey, sir, why can't the author be tied up and coded all the time?😐😐😐

Hidden Kill, my girlfriend is from the future and my wife is from a thousand years ago. I watched it 😌

After reading the latest chapter, why do I feel that the male protagonist's love life is plagiarized from my life? These female protagonists are clearly mine, so why were they included in the book? I hope the author can explain it carefully?

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Let me talk about my personal evaluation. Except that the first life of this book is not very good, the subsequent plots are very good, especially the White Snake chapter. This book can be regarded as better food. But at the same time, I think this book has big problems (only my personal opinion) The first is the plot arrangement. This book is divided into two aspects: the copy and the current world. Most books of the same type have two main axes or the copy is the secondary axis, serving the current world. This book is a copy to serve the modern world, but the text of the copy is much larger than that of the current world. This will lead to a problem, that is, the center of gravity of the plot is unstable. In my opinion, 90% of the highlights of this book are provided by the dungeon, but the dungeon cannot directly affect the main plot, which leads to a problem. The dungeon is a strong point, but the dungeon has little direct effect on promoting the plot, so the development of the story becomes a dungeon. After the dungeon is completed, a new heroine is added, and a new dungeon is opened. However, this book is not infinitely streamable, and adding a new protagonist to each copy will make the book appear more cumbersome and make readers easily fatigued. Therefore, the biggest problem with this book comes out, that is, the plot is not very powerful and is relatively complicated; each copy is independent and connected by the main world, but the main line is too weak, so it appears to be fragmented. So this book looks and feels more like a collection of stories than a novel The second problem is also caused by the first one, which is the problem of characters and combat power. How many heroines are mentioned in this book? Apprentice, White Snake, Buddha Girl and Empress, of course there are many harem books, and there are more than a dozen other books. However, the narrative logic of this book dictates that each heroine must be vigorously described, so this book is not suitable for too many heroines, but the story requires a new heroine. This is all because the main line is too weak. Let's talk about the issue of combat power. In fact, it's not the combat power system that has a problem, but the combat power distribution. Every female protagonist appears with a perfect match, which objectively results in too little or even no pressure on the male protagonist. The main plot point will be greatly reduced, which will further weaken the main plot, and then trigger the previous problems, forming a vicious circle. Finally, there is another issue that is not a problem, that is, some supporting characters are written more or less. To put it bluntly, I hope to accept female supporting characters whose characters are not as plump as the heroine. I really like Senior Sister Shang and New Junior Sister. Finally, I hope the author can write better and better. I will give you a monthly ticket in this world.

Is it difficult to write 100 chapters a day?

The first paragraph was like fast food. I originally wanted to run away, but in the second paragraph, the snake started to retain me, a man like a lion, like a super evolution. I was in tears in the middle of the night.

In this book, I don't talk about other settings, just the emotional line, Ruxue's character design (from appearance and figure to personality), the progress of the characters' relationship, the male protagonist's attraction to her, and this feeling of jealousy, arrogance and coquettishness. You are completely plagiarizing my diary and imitating my daily life . I advise the author to do his own thing and not to put my personal experience into your book