Why Did Your Husband Run Away?

I read it in one night. The first part was good, but the zombie plot got worse and worse later on. The title of the book is a scam.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​I lost an afternoon, twenty yuan, and gained a loneliness. It can be seen that the author has prepared a lot, and the plot line has been developing. But I just feel that the plot seems to be developed for the sake of development. The thread is chaotic, but there is obviously another thread, but it is not chaotic. It also seems that every node on the line is rushed, as if it is always rushing to catch up with the plot. Especially when I was writing about the exciting little climax, I obviously took a long time to push it to this point, but it was over in one go, and the rhythm felt quite strange.                                                                            The transformation of the leader seems to be quite abrupt. A sister who was mentioned as very important at the beginning is worse than a walk-on later on. She neither appears to be ridiculously strong, nor does she show how important the two people are in each other's heart. The author's plan is to finish the million-dollar project, and it's already halfway through. I feel that since the results have been like this and the author wants to continue writing, there is no need to dig holes all the time. Slow down and slowly fill the holes

This Xinyi reminds me of Eriyi😭

Please remember the promises made by the author.

I saw that there were only 13 people investing, so I wanted to invest early. After reading three chapters, I didn't know why I suddenly went to mentor. After mentoring, 60 people came back, and after making up the time, I became 62nd.

So many authors recommend it, I don't believe it's not a trumpet →_→

The author seems to be the vest of an old eunuch. The cultivation setting is copied from the first two books. I have a lot of resurrection coins, which is the last one... Let me complain about the setting. Since it is a cultivator, the male protagonist is an ordinary person and so many bosses can't tell that he is a man. I can only say that I am a bit speechless.

In order to set off the protagonist, the sister is made so weak. The protagonist has been practicing for less than a year and is stronger than his sister. The sister is the head disciple of the Sword Sect and has been practicing for more than ten years and is still not as strong as the protagonist. It's outrageous that the more than 10,000 genius disciples behind him are not as good as the 100,000 ordinary disciples.

Emmm, it's basically the salted fish trumpet. Although many people complained about the reviews of Xianyu's first two books, I just read them and there are a lot of good opinions that can be adopted. For example, the protagonist's character is soft and obsessed, and the heroine's appearance time is allocated, she is too obsessed with the Shura field, the system's daily gods are hidden, the gods in the early and late stages are abolished, the outline and plot are repeated, and the foreshadowing of love and hatred in the ending is not filled in... Old salted fish, you have so many problems! And of course water. . . . But this bird food is an objective reason. (You'd better be 🙂) Why don't you explain it in a single chapter first, and spend a day thinking about the direction of the two books. If you can have a good reading experience later, it is still worth it. Finally, where is the group? ! I want a Kangkang extra! Come on, as long as you are not in charge, you will definitely order 😍 {"NickName":"Book Friends 20170902122701957","UserId":307876536}

The interaction between the male and female protagonists was well written, but the plot of Chunfeng Tower became very boring. The fantasy world of cultivation, falling in love and starting a business... Is not impossible. If the length is too long, it will have a strange smell.

Looks familiar, whose trumpet is it?

Comments on this book: First of all, this book has a very good beginning, which is very attractive to people like me who have never read this type of novel. For example, the protagonist disguises herself as a woman for more than ten years and marries a female devil. But since it starts like this, the focus of writing the book must be on the emotional development of the protagonist and the heroine group. With every incident, the protagonist must have a change in the heroines, right? Instead of developing like a ruthless and desireless person for a lifetime. The heroines' feelings for the protagonist must be supported by some events. There is almost no psychological description of the heroines in this book, which shocked me. Secondly, almost all the settings in the early stage are borrowed from other novels, so there must be some integration of their own. Everything written earlier, such as the protagonist's cheats, will have no sense of existence after a hundred chapters, so there is no need to mention these settings in the front. It gives people the feeling that the front and back are not written by the same person. Finally, for a light novel, it does not require a big world view. The purpose of reading this book is to see the protagonist's love and love, not to see the protagonist overtake in corners. Not to mention that the following chapters are completely account-style explanations of events. To put it bluntly, it is pure textual garbage. I hope the author will not make these mistakes in future writing.

This book is still worth listening to. The author's broad outline of the idea is still worthy of recognition, but it is only an outline. If you don't know how to write a story outline, you can refer to it.

The protagonist of this book won't keep dressing up as a woman until the finale, right?

There are over a hundred chapters, why don't you come up with a character brand?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha, Bodhi stirs up dust and it's still being released. There are so many classic Buddhist quotes, why do you want to catch this sentence? But if it is well written, there is really nothing to say. But this plot was forcibly inserted without any foreshadowing. Suddenly a monk was there, he was suddenly confused, and you suddenly uttered a classic quotation. It felt very stiff to me, as if it was just for the sake of showing off. Sorry, I can't stand it anymore. If the plot in the back is very good and does not match the beginning, then please don't miss this book. If there are still poisonous points in the back, then please don't try this book.

Is this the trend recently of a casual male protagonist paired with a cool female protagonist? Many authors are writing about this kind of subject matter, but I really don't feel the pleasure.

I feel like the protagonist has a bit of a masochistic tendency, but the woman takes the initiative not to step on his face with her feet, and she seems to be enjoying her inner activities.

Is this your trumpet? {"NickName":"I just love eating honey chicken","UserId":339119469}I broke the body of the devil's leader? Good guy, it's really double-open, isn't it?

I kept subscribing, but it got worse and worse later on, and it felt like it was unfinished. I wanted to watch Luo Xinyi, but there were no scenes until episode 6. I didn't want to see how Lin Bei's son and daughter were doing, and writing about his son and daughter felt like I was just for water's sake.

Xinyi is the perfect form of a girl, right?

That's it, I'm here for Lin Bei's women's clothing. If you can't do it, I won't do it.

Is this over? I remember when I said I wanted to write 1 million words.

Can you write about daily life? Can you tell me whether the latter ones look good when compared with the underworld or something like that?

I shouldn't have ordered it all. I've seen 120. There's no development at all and I haven't touched it. I'm convinced. After reading the table of contents, more than half of the 200 chapters have passed. I can guess the content after reading the title of the table of contents. I have no desire to read on.

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