Immortal Martial Arts Begins with the Demon Slayer Division

With all due respect, many readers can't even stand the poisonous point of the first chapter. Let's not talk about the writing style. Either the author is screening readers, or he has a brain that is different from ordinary people and is simply lacking in perspective.

After reading the previous chapters, I can see that the protagonist has no ambition at all. He is just like how others trained him to fish, from beginning to end, but in real life, he just doesn't work, doesn't study, wins a lottery, and relies on this to live his whole life! The supporting role is better than the protagonist, putting the cart before the horse and not prioritizing.

To be honest, the medium-rare pork in the first chapter has dissuaded a lot of people. You might as well write ordinary big fish and big meat, fine noodles and steamed buns. At least there will be no success or fault.

What's the point of letting people eat medium-rare pork when their heads are tied up?

I feel like I can just write romance novels about cultivating immortals, this kind of fantasy.

This book is a bit underestimated. When I read books, I always look for books with a lot of monthly tickets. This book doesn't have a lot of monthly tickets. I just read it casually at first. I didn't expect that the more I read, the more I was a little surprised. The plot of this book is smooth and the author has good writing skills. Although the book is also a good book, the protagonist is also moving up step by step. It is not an empty feeling. At the same time, the author also writes the plot with ups and downs. All in all, this book is really a bit underrated. I think this book should be at least a month old, and a monthly subscription of more than 1,000 is needed to be considered of the quality of this book.

The writing is beautiful, but there is too little writing

The writing is very vicious, the system of exercises is in a mess, and the 9 exercises are still not perfect. I am speechless. Then others should stop living.

I haven't read the book, but after reading the comments, I also want to write a review. There are too many books about Qidian showing off and slapping people in the face. It can be said that readers are very disgusted with this kind of embarrassing plot. I am going to give it a try. If I can read it, I will leave a comment.

The plot is getting more and more boring, the same plot every day is a slap in the face

What's the point of the Demon Slayer Division's existence in this situation?

Although I can only read more than twenty chapters of this book, the people who hate the first chapter are completely unscrupulous. Even if the officer asked people to carry a pot of completely raw pork and forced everyone to eat it, it would not be poisonous.

If you are in the fog, you might as well add some proficiency, and write it using the Ming Dynasty's generational registration system, and you are convinced. Killing the most rubbish monster will kill you. Is this reasonable? The punctuation marks and system interface are not separated, so I don't even know what I'm writing.

Are there any benefits? Is it nutritious or what?

With only 500,000 words, entry is limited and free? Does the author promise?

The character of this protagonist is not as good as the roadside.

It's well written, but it's a pity that the author is a 💩young man

The sentences in this book are too short, the depth is limited, and it's awkward to read.

Forgive me for being unreasonable, I would like to recommend "A Fall in the Beginning Can Unify Thousand Realms". If you are interested, you can read it.