Zhetian: Starting from the Enlightenment of Ghosts and Immortals

Covering the sky is the creation of heavenly calamity. Like other cultivation methods in other worlds, you have to go through tribulations to practice in the world of Zhetian.

Author, can you change the setting of the protagonist at the beginning? This is not like the reincarnation of ghosts and immortals at all, but the kind of roadside gangster rebirth routine in online articles 20 years ago. You have no extraordinary character and wisdom of ghosts and immortals. This brain and thoughts are better than those of junior high school students in reality. They are all rubbish, just like the kind of trash who only complains about society without learning any skills. Once he becomes a nouveau riche, he then looks down upon others, bows his head and flatters the protagonist in the original novel Zhetian, and belittles and despises the passers-by. You wrote this typical villain image very well! 👍👍👍 What do you think about using this kind of character as the protagonist? I originally came here for the labels Yangshen and Zhetian, but it turns out that they are completely irrelevant. I suggest you, the author, read Yangshen and Zhetian carefully a few more times. Don't blame me for being harsh, because in recent years I have rarely seen such outrageous protagonists and bizarre settings in fantasy online articles. Whenever you write "How a Scoundrel Was Made", "The Struggle of a Little Man", "The Immortal Dragon King's Urban Reincarnation", I have to praise you.

The early combat power of Yangshen's fist is average. The Ghost Immortal and the Martial Saint may not even be able to defeat the Long Hai Jin warriors. But once Guixian reaches 7 thunder tribulations, he can fight against Zhan San. As for the 9 thunder tribulations, they basically clashed with the Holy King. But when he reaches the realm of Yangshen, he is comparable to the emperor. After all, 9 thunder tribulations are only 129,600 thoughts. Keyang God has a total of 480 million thoughts. This strength gap is too big. Yangshen is basically the entire universe of Hedao. Equivalent to the Great Emperor's fusion of the Tianxin Seal It's just average in the early stage of human immortality. But once you reach the ever-changing realm, enough to evolve into a chaotic body, I will ask you whether you are numb or not.

This protagonist seems unlikable to me and is full of calculations. . . . Eight hundred thoughts

There is no saying in my book that the Yang Shen Kung Fu or system can overwhelm the sky. Just like what I said in the reply to my book friend above. In my eyes, many Yangshen exercises are more suitable as supplements, auxiliaries, and foundations for the Zhetian cultivation system, as well as as the core concepts of a new cultivation path. As for who the book friends said should be punished, I don't think there is any need to argue. We won't talk about the later stages, but in the early stages of cultivation, it is indeed much stronger than covering the sky. There is no doubt about this. All, the core of several explosions on Mars by the protagonist in my book are on several artifacts obtained by Da Leiyin Temple. And Yang Shen's technique is just an introduction to activating skills. Because this is my first time writing a fanfic, there must be many unreasonable and problematic aspects. I also ask all book friends to bear with me, and also ask for your corrections. Just a small suggestion. When I make an unreasonable comment, I hope to write down the reason. This will make me understand clearly and avoid making the same mistake in the future. Although I am a newbie, I really want to write a book that everyone will like, so your corrections are really, really important. Thank you again for your great support🙏🙏🙏🙏

Let me say that Meng Ruishenji's system is too exaggerated. Yang Shen is relatively normal. Yang Shen is equivalent to the cosmic Hedao. The other side is equivalent to transcending the universe. In the time of eternal life, the Gate of Eternal Life is equivalent to Pangu Hongjun. The Holy King, in the end, simply sucked up the entire chaos. Dragon Talisman, alas, is beyond human imagination. At least I can't think of anyone more awesome than Gu Chensha.

Even in the Yangshen world, there is special thunder only in the Great Thousand World. Taoism cannot be practiced in other places. There are a lot of human immortals, but there are no ghost immortals.

In the early stage, it was too bad. Lun Hai of Zhe Tian could go up to the sky and the earth to fight the Yang God. Pure cultivation and martial arts training. As for the later stage, the system exploded and was directly broken. Countless people planned for generations. In the end, the protagonist Hong Yi did not reach the other side. At least the difficulty of the Red Dust Immortal is much lower than that of the other side.

Is this what it looks like after practicing in Yangshen? The deception on Mars was very dangerous and full of life, but when the threat came, he just ran away with his head down and asked, "Will you die if you are with a Buddhist vessel?"

Author, the fanfic you wrote is so inconsistent with Zhetian's style of painting. Everything about cause and effect, destiny, etc., Are all the style of Shushan Swordsman. For Zhetian's Tou Tiewa, there is nothing that cannot be solved with fists. If there is, then please send out the imperial soldiers to defeat Shen Donghuang and Shen Beidou.

Great idea, but poorly written

If the upper limit of the Yang Shen system is expanded to about the Immortal King, there will still be no problem. The Yang Shen Immortal Way is also called the Way of Qian Tian. The thoughts of the Yang God realm participate in the cycle of the universe. The Human Immortal Martial Arts is also called the Way of Kun and Earth. The last 99 acupoints of Shattered Vacuum are the origin of the earth. Shattered The vacuum brings power into the origin of the earth. One of them is the way of heaven, which represents heaven, and the other is the way of earth, which represents earth. Both of them are somewhat similar to the imprint of the heart of heaven that covers the sky. The former's thoughts participate in the cycle of the universe and belong to the deepest unity of heaven and man. The latter's power is imprinted into the earth. And the most origin of all the universe and planets, it is completely another state that is not weaker than the Tianxin Seal. If another spiritual system cultivation method similar to the Galaxy Emperor is created, it will be a trinity that leads directly to the Immortal King. The Yang Shen system after the upper limit of a single expansion may be the same as The Great Emperor is almost the same. With the addition of Human Immortal Martial Arts, it may also be the second battle strength of the Red Dust Immortal. However, if the spiritual system is added, it can transform into the original Immortal King of the Other Side. Why can one system jump from the second battle strength of the Red Dust Immortal to the ninth generation of the Immortal King directly? The main thing is to look at the expansion of the system. The thoughts of the Yang Shen Immortal Dao, the Heavenly Dao, participate in the cycle of the universe, the power of the Dao of Shattering the Vacuum, Kun, and Earth participates in the earth and planets. The highest state of the Spiritual Dao represents all sentient beings in the human realm, which is equivalent to controlling the entire heaven, earth, and people (universe). When you completely control and penetrate the heaven, earth, and people (universe), you become the Immortal King. At that time, you become a big universe.

It's hard to go far with the protagonist's character! Is it enough to practice hugging the thighs?

The writing doesn't look like it comes from Yang Shen.

The gap between Yang Shen's late stage and early stage is too serious, and the comparison of combat power in the early stage is too overwhelming. Some ghosts, immortals, and saints will lose their energy and blood as soon as they rush out.

Where does this protagonist come from? Is the immortal roadside villain reborn?

Erbi Guixian is not as powerful as the Guixian system of Yi Nian Xiaoyao Game

The protagonist's name is a bit illegible, it feels like he came from Douluo through time.

Is the Yangshen system cultivating the sky? How to fix it? How to survive the thunder tribulation by cultivating the soul? Don't tell me that the Thunder Tribulation that covers the sky is useful. It's not even a thing. If you don't have the world to practice martial arts, how can you cultivate your last acupoint?

It feels like I am not traveling through the Yangshen, but I am walking along the road to eternal life.

Wasn't it promised that the ghosts and immortals would be reincarnated? Why do you smell like a gangster? Damn, damn, the reincarnation of your ghost fairy will talk like this?

Since this is my first time writing a fanfic, there are some poisonous points that I only discovered later. I am revising it now and it will be ready tonight. For those of you who are about to watch it, you can add it to your favorites and watch it tomorrow. I'm so sorry! Finally, thank you again for your great support! 🙏

Can you please stop calling me Master? It feels a bit awkward 🤤

Why is the future master you wrote different from the future master in Yangshen novel?

I feel that the destructive power of the Yangshen system is too weak compared to that of Zhetian. The Yangshen realm feels about the same destructive power as that of a saint, and Zhetian cannot withstand thunder tribulations.

The sage who covers the sky can easily refine thousands of stars into a bead, just to make a bead that replenishes yang energy 🙂, what the hell is going on?

I don't even have the heart to be invincible, I still want to hang around in Zhetian, just kidding, those emperors and emperors in Zhetian don't have the heart to be invincible, the protagonist is afraid of this one and that one dares to plot behind his back.

Hong Yi, Fang Han, Yang Qi, Gu Chensha, it has to be said that even if you write about Infinite Flow or Lord God, it is difficult to see Gu Chensha being killed. They all draw on Wulong's heart method.

? A little more. In the world of Zhetian, anyone who creates a new system will be punished by Lei Jie,⺀

The Emperor should be the one who shatters the vacuum. Yang Shen is also the great emperor, Shattering Vacuum + Yang Shen, invincible under the Red Dust Immortal, the book next door is the great emperor, after all, some characters in the original works, Shattering Vacuum and Yang Shen are very different