
Star Sea Wizard: Player Panel, Liver Becomes Truth
星海巫师:玩家面板,肝成真理
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 156k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
0Monthly votes
4.7kRecommends
83Fans
65Chapters
Tags
Synopsis
Reader comments
Readers also read
Heaven Devouring Holy Demon
Immortal Martial Arts Began with the Great Sui War God
I Just Collected a Corpse, Why Did I Become a Demon?
I Just Traveled Through Time and Became a Superman. Do You Think This Is the World of Immortality?
Siheyuan: Start by Picking up Attributes
Unlimited Employment Starting from Sheriff
Genius Wizard
Beastmaster: I Can See the Evolutionary Path
Immortal Who Seizes the Body
Comprehensive Network of Beast Control: the Way of All Dharma
On Top of the Tower!
Comprehensive Physical Training: Starting from Endless Expertise
I Projected the Lord God Reincarnation
Wizards Chase the Truth
Is the eunuch addicted? To be honest, the author's books are definitely good, both in terms of plot and writing, but if you get used to giving up, you won't achieve great results. Those top authors will finish one book before starting the next one.
I really don't understand, wasn't the previous book written very well, and it was about to reach a small climax, just in time for it to be released, and it was cut again
Let's keep it for a month this time. If the author doesn't supervise it, I'll read it later.
When to cut?
A 100 chapters B 200 chapters C 300 chapters
It's incompatible with normal wizarding style.
Strangely enough, it is a collection of ethical quarrels between relatives, belittling by classic audiences, and quotations from middle school students. Why use the style of ancient fantasy novels to write wizard novels? Calmness, rationality, and interests are the normal wizard writing style. But it can be regarded as an exploration. It is a pretentious fantasy + wizard setting in ancient times. If you are interested, you can check it out.
How many books have you cut? And you only fine-tuned the settings of each book. They are all Star Sea Wizards and the protagonists have similar personalities. If you don't insist on finishing the book, who will read it?
It's too confusing. I wrote a story about my sister at the beginning. I haven't done it yet until Chapter 6. I inserted a bunch of other plots in the middle. It feels unhurried.
As you can tell from the title of this book, the core lies in the panel and player identity.
There are some flaws in the plot you wrote, but we don't care about it. However, the panel data can be written incorrectly, and the mistakes remain uncorrected. If you can't write the beauty of numerical values, just hurry up and open the next book, don't waste time here.
At the beginning, it was said that the elemental wizard was the answer to the version, but then he suddenly changed Cthulhu, and then set Cthulhu as a plug-in for the protagonist. This is equivalent to the plot line of the wizard flow that was previously foreshadowed. The author's mentality of trying to quickly cut leeks with a formula is too straightforward. Take it, if you want to monetize your traffic quickly, you must first have traffic. You don't care about running your novel properly, but always think about monetizing it quickly. You can't do it with such utilitarianism. Today's authors are only thinking about cashing out and quick monetization. The environment is too bad.
The author, to be honest, after reading the first three chapters, I really have no desire to continue reading. I don't think a master can control the writing method of the contradiction in the opening of the sky. The situation is so bad at the beginning, and it gets even worse at the end.
How to say it? Not a bit like wizarding novels
It's awesome. It's still on the ship when I wrote it, and it's just over halfway through getting off the ship.
There are too few updates, and the writing is not attractive enough. Why do you keep people reading it? To put it bluntly, if this book was written by someone else, would you be able to pursue it yourself as it is now? From now on, if you update 10,000 words every day, your reading will naturally improve
The most disgusting thing about wizarding novels is that they are stitched together with those of cultivating immortals. They are completely different. If you see this kind of thing, you can just abandon it. The system is confusing and you can't write anything well. There is no need for the integration of civilizations, so you have to cobble it together.
Thoughts on wizard novels
There are so many wizarding novels, the famous Wizarding Journey, and the Wizarding World (which I think laid the foundation), etc. The novels are basically in this style. The stronger one is Wen Chaogong's The Wizard of the World. The routines all start with knights, breathing techniques, riding in a boat, and being captured by a dark wizard 😅. So it's really difficult to write this kind of novel. However, this kind of novel also has a background, which is "calmness", "equivalent exchange" and "scholar". The novel you wrote, I think, strays away from this. First, he came into contact with the past so early, and his behavior and chat content were so strange that he felt like a jerk. Second, your equivalent exchange is just talk, and what you write is too much like fantasy novels, competitions, giving resources and being cultivated by others 😅. The third and most serious problem is that there is no sense of being a scholar (you just go out and show off, then level up, and then go out and show off). Others do research and then learn witchcraft (to give readers a sense of participation). So I don't think highly of this book you wrote, it's even worse than the previous one 😅, and you are really a eunuch, it ruins the popularity of passers-by Of course this is all personal opinion, if you have any questions, you can discuss it
I thought it was a game called The Witcher from Another World, but it turned out to be Cthulhu. So, so many wizards were written in advance, so it was like writing a bunch of plots that were wasted, and it became boring all of a sudden.
No just write unlimited streams in the scientific research category
Psychological activities should be the finishing touch, not a long chapter
It's too watery. Take a spaceship and take 30 pictures.
Has anyone taken over this idea and written it down? I really think his previous books were very good, and the previous few eunuchs were pretty much the same...