
Late Ming Dynasty: the Fourth Natural Disaster Travels a Thousand Miles
明末:第四天灾千里行
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- Completed
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- 1.4M Words
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- Historical
- Audience
- Male
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- Song-Yuan-Ming Dynasties
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I'm a bit of a noob, and the first few chapters are completely unattractive.
Is this protagonist really a time traveler? You are not sure of your status at the beginning, and you really introduce yourself like an ordinary NPC. The first image is very important. The identity introduction at the beginning of the game can allow players to confirm the importance of this NPC, which will lead to how much they value you. Your indigenous NPC introduction will make people think that you are not important. I also want to think about whether I can chop down unimportant NPCs. I give them my identity when I go out. Also, after being teased by the players (snowballs thrown in the face, being touched here and there like a monkey, trying to see if the NPC is immune to injury), the protagonist does not want to counterattack, and just sits still and lets them play with them (really treating himself as an NPC)? Did they seek death to stop them? ? Don't want to set the rules of the game at the beginning? ? ? Still want to use discipline to restrict their player behavior afterwards? ? ? ? Those who are really time travelers should know that the Fourth Natural Disaster is lawless and unrestrained. Others are so depressed in reality. They play virtual mode and think that they can make them obedient through discipline. Just dream, reality can use discipline because it has to be done right, there is no other way. The only thing that can restrain players is punishment rules. When players behave excessively, especially towards the protagonist, they should immediately use the system to formulate strict rules. In this way, players can be slightly restrained and players can understand the importance of the protagonist (not an ordinary NPC). Players can be resurrected wirelessly, but for the protagonist, you only have one life. At first, instead of removing the uncertain factors, you thought that you could use discipline to restrain yourself. Are you so ambitious? Your character design is unremarkable. I even think it's not a time traveler character, but an indigenous character design. . .
Well-Defined Historical Fourth Scourge Novel
This novel is very clear about its positioning. It is a novel based on player portraits and guided by historical events. It does not write too much about the players' real-world affairs, but focuses on the game world. The protagonist also plays a role in guiding the plot, and the focus is still on the players. In my opinion, it is quite good so far. I hope the author can maintain his own rhythm and writing style. Make more use of the interaction between small characters or historical celebrities and players to develop more exciting plots.
It's not the fourth natural disaster, it's the fourth fool. Does the author think that everyone who plays the game is a fool?
In the article on the fourth day of disaster, please do not portray female gamers in words.
The tail of the Knights of the White Bear, the cement seal, etc. The mentally retarded female gamer is really a loser. It would be better to write more idiotic comments to netizens.
My evaluation is that if you just copy him, it will be over. Your arrangement of the plot is really bad
The plot of a horse gun is fine once, but if it is too many, it will just feel stupid... And so many players have never thought of stabbing the horse's butt or setting it on fire to make it run towards the fortress, regardless of whether it can be caught or not. But if you run ten batches in that direction, there will always be a few batches of runway or Liu can pick it up, right?
At the end of the Ming Dynasty, it was still a journey of a thousand miles. Is there such a character?
Speechless
Modern people's souls have traveled through the 23rd year of the late Ming Dynasty, and nothing has changed. They really think of themselves as ancients.
You chose between domestic pigs and wild boars to extend the lives of the Ming Dynasty. You have a family of eight, sold two, lost one, and left three. You really have no blood at all and you still want to extend the lives of the Ming Dynasty.
Trash, if you don't clean up the aristocratic family, just wait for it to be ignored later. Your regime is bullshit. There are already players, so you're scared. Abandoned.
What I wrote before is fine
Being persuaded to quit in Chapter 103, it's so disgusting. The military rations were robbed and I couldn't shoot. I sat on the ground crying 😒
As I look at it, I always feel something is wrong.
Will we use the name of family and country to stir up emotions later? Too many sensational scenes always feel awkward, especially when they are done in the name of family and country. It always feels like you have been fed shit and have to wrap it with a layer of gold foil and put a red flag on it to make you dare not say it, and then force you to eat it. It's embarrassing to look at the unintelligent exaggeration, and the balance of the scenes feels like one leg is long and the other is short.
So far, this book is generally very good. The reason why it is not popular is probably because the author is not famous.
Give a suggestion
First of all, we need to figure out one thing: Is writing a novel for pleasure or to make money?
I couldn't help but complain after reading the beginning. It's a miracle that the protagonist with such a worrying IQ can live in his twenties. He's a normal person who knows how to set the rules. If you blame the players for not following the rules, it's because you didn't set the rules yourself.
This natural disaster is not a disaster at all. If there is such a game, the people in it should be in the style of Battle on the Beach or GTA5. When I play this game, my first thought is whether I can take off all my clothes when I enter.
Are there any other Fourth Disaster novels?
It's the kind of game where thousands of players come online right from the start. Alas, the natural disaster novels over the years always start with just a few players. Tired of watching 😰
I feel like there is still no future for me to be involved with the Ming Dynasty in the end. Let's destroy the Ming and Qing Dynasties and start a new dynasty.
I can't stand it anymore when I see the 300th picture. It describes the Ming Dynasty and the fourth natural disaster. It's fish and bear's paw. You want them all.
It's just uncomfortable to watch, and it feels like a tomato is holding back the text. It's so frustrating. It feels like a knife fight in the snow. You can obviously run rampant in the world, but you have to suffer this and that. The fourth natural disaster has become a joke.
Why are there no craftsmen who can make their own guns, cannons, and explosives?
When I saw 249, I didn't want to watch it. There was a lot of water, and there was a natural disaster on the fourth day. If you didn't become the boss yourself, let the emperor continue to be the boss.
Too fast
The book next door cost more than two million yuan and is still unfinished. I think the resurrection point in your book is a huge poisonous point, the creation of the void, which makes the fun point disappear. The fourth sky next door has to collect its own body in order to be resurrected.
I couldn't stand it at the beginning of the first chapter. What a useless protagonist. His brothers died in battle, his sisters became child brides for others, and he was robbed of military honors. I dare not give a shit.
Let me ask, is it because I don't have enough education? What the hell is Dong Nu? Or is it that the current reviewers are not human beings, and even Donglu Jiannu is not allowed to write?
The water has been terrible in the past few days, and it's completely unattractive. If this continues, I'm going to give up the book.
What are these pictures saying? . .
I'm here to watch you conquer the world as a player, introducing new technologies and arts to give the ancients a little shock. Are you going to end up solving crimes here?
The writing is quite good, but I still like the content where players kill everyone on the battlefield.
Brave and unafraid of death, 800 breaks through 100,000, making enemies fearful and doubtful about life
Why are female gamers so silly? Is it because the author only has access to spirited girls who only know how to play games? There are a lot of female students in the graduate school who are handing out thesis papers, and some of them are also good at playing games.
The protagonists have changed dynasties, and the Han Dynasty was established. Are there any players who will become officials in the dynasty?
The seeds were there in the Ming Dynasty. The reason why they will sprout in the future is because the people can no longer survive. They are watered with blood. There has been enough blood now. It might as well be a little more and directly promote the birth in advance. However, the current trend is divorced from the author, the creator god. The protagonist's descendants are Puyi if they are lucky, and Chongzhen if they are more backbone. If they are not, they can only be two-legged sheep, but the worst is the people.