Attract Evil

Newcomer, new book, supernatural zone? You are very brave, come on

I came across this book as a refresher, and it is quite interesting. It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into conceiving the plot. At present, these plots are written without drama, which makes people want to continue watching. But I would like to make a small suggestion. I hope that the protagonist's words can be adjusted. It is not very life-like. It is difficult to feel the characteristics of the protagonist from the language, especially knowledge. Logically speaking, a person's knowledge should be clearly reflected in the words he speaks. The current dialogue will make you feel that the protagonist is a rough man, and then you will feel that he has some education. Also, I personally don't really like the kind of fake foreshadowing in the book, "Later he found out..." Generally speaking, this kind of thing has nothing to do with the plot, and it has no foreshadowing effect and also interrupts the mood. Overall, I think this book is very promising. Kudos to the author.

I am not timid and dare to use the first person pronoun