Wandering America: My Kill Line Is Far Ahead

It's all for you, don't go into the palace

I feel that the current author regards the United States as a different world, with chaos and no order. Going to the United States is like trying to survive in the wilderness. There are dangers everywhere, the law of the jungle is everywhere, and people will die at every turn.

What's so strong about the country's system in the United States? It's always badmouthing it and still claims to be number one in the world. I wonder how the local general public can avoid these wealth harvests. Most of us Chinese people will not go bankrupt. As far as I am concerned, although it is difficult to get rich, a well-off life in the local area can still be achieved with an average salary. With my salary of two to three thousand (more than 40% is paid in medical and social security), I can still eat meat tomorrow.

After reading this book, I found three problems. The previous one copied the intelligence system, but the system is better than that one and the writing is more enjoyable. The second one is fighting to draw Bruce Lee, which is ridiculously embarrassing. The third one is that he is too holy to the little girl who snatches things.

I can only say that because of its popularity, I clicked on this book and was disappointed. At least no one died before it was put on the shelves. The minced meat was all homeless people and beggars, but overall it was going well. Of course, the protagonist is living a good life, has a system, and the system itself is not weak, but it is written in the direction of a high-level tramp. Although I can understand that this is the main tone of the book, and it is written for this, but it is really difficult to think about it a little more. After all, someone who can stop for nine seconds dares to rule the world.

S-level entries Frosted apples Gundam futures What kind of American are you? A-level entries Tibetan biography 502 The document defaults to donor B-level entries Ice that cannot be stopped by the castle law

Three stars for imagination Three stars for writing Four stars for plot It can be called excellent food. The rhythm and plot are very good. This is an advantage. The disadvantage is that you don't want to include private goods, okay? Don't bother with the nigga talking about whether abstract plots in classical Chinese are okay. It's so poisonous that I almost gave up. It doesn't matter if you don't know how to write the kind of dialogue that suits people's daily lives. But don't just let those native Americans and Mo Mo speak idioms and comments, and don't let pig's feet promote positive energy every day. Now everyone doesn't accept this, okay? That's all I ask, put more thought into describing daily life in America and check out more information. The book will be even better.

Last week I went to New York for a business trip and encountered a heavy snowfall as soon as I arrived. When I went out early in the morning, everything I saw was silvery white. But strangely, there was no roar of snow plows on the streets, and no sanitation workers were seen cleaning up. Pedestrians staggered through the snow, and vehicles moved at a snail's pace. This made me puzzled: Are the municipal departments so slack? This scene reminds me of China. On snowy days, the streets in the early morning are full of busy people. Snow plows and snow melting agents are on duty. After dawn, the roads are clear and smooth. We have long been accustomed to such efficiency and convenience, and we have assumed that this is what a city should be like. Just as I was muttering to myself, my foreign friend who was traveling with me smiled and patted my shoulder: "Don't worry, you don't need to sweep this snow." He said that snow is a gift from winter. Pedestrians slowed down, children built snowmen, and strangers reached out to help each other because of slippery roads. This is the warmth that winter should have. Deliberate cleaning only removes the calmness of embracing nature. I froze on the spot and suddenly realized that we always think about using human power to transform nature and pursue the ultimate convenience, but we have invisibly severed the connection with the world and all things. Not plowing snow in New York is not a sign of laziness, it is clearly a form of wisdom that follows nature.

After watching Prison A's video, my spiritual vision was greatly expanded. It's very interesting to read this book.

I'm reading this novel after watching Lao A's video. I can only say that the protagonist is still too fanciful.

Speaking of homeless people, I suggest you go to station B and search. There is a story about the situation of the people at the bottom in the book Bingyu in Seattle (probably this one).

The chapter opens with picking up girls. How horny is this? The main plot is either a tramp or a loser.

I watched the live clip of Lao A talking about collecting Gundam, and now I feel really emotional when I look at the main character.

Good guy, you are keeping up with current events. You changed the title of your book to something like this.

Why is this book so similar to the one I've read before? They both start with a homeless man, have a "charming" male novice guide, and have a beautiful woman who distributes relief food. The writing in that book is smoother, but it's a pity that it's unfinished later.

It's obviously a GTA system, but the author is crazy about treasure chests. . .

Fortunately it's not tomatoes, otherwise it would be 2 stars. The golden finger basically chooses the worst one to keep the progress.

I couldn't figure it out before. How could American horror movies be scary if they were all about blood? But now that I watch "The Turn" as a documentary, I understand why those people are so scared 😁

Relying on his own money, he repeatedly sexually harassed his same-sex roommate. Please, if you want to be gay, can't you find it among your gay friends? First of all, Jimmy was molested when he was a child. The protagonist harassed Jimmy in the name of a joke when he had the chance. This is very disrespectful and he doesn't regard Jimmy as a friend at all. Secondly, Jimmy is still a teenager and has immature views. The protagonist consciously wants to cultivate Jimmy into a little boy, which is disgusting. I heard that there was a chapter where the protagonist stole. The book was okay, but his character was completely ruined.

I was quite happy watching it at first, but suddenly I felt like nothing had changed, and I was a bit tired of it. It should be the author's control over the progress of the plot, not my problem.

I had been reading it well and the content was quite interesting. Today I suddenly saw a high-priced comic stolen from a stall. It was neither because I wanted to starve to death nor because I really liked it, but because I just didn't want to miss the opportunity to pick it up. There is really no moral bottom line. The arc of the character was lost in one day. It's a pity that such a good book...

Is it really that messy? So people with a little bit of money don't run away? It's very strange. With the theme of killing people now, I feel that it is very difficult for the average middle-class people in the United States to survive. They can be killed immediately once they get sick. This is a bit too unreasonable. How can anyone survive without getting sick since childhood (common colds are not counted)? Isn't this a certain death situation?

The male protagonist sleeps with the bus. Are you having pure love with the heroine? I'm just kidding. More than three hundred chapters and I haven't slept yet. How can you pretend to be pure love when you already write about America? Too smart. I don't even eat beef anymore and still do this. There is also the plot of Silly Bo Yi giving money. I didn't even sleep and got everything as a gift. The heroine Lao Mo has such a hard time sleeping

The protagonist and supporting characters are quite likable and interesting I was quite surprised when Xiao Fu appeared on the stage, especially the plot is quite funny As for whether I should always be a tramp, as long as it is interesting and the plot is reasonable, I can't not be a tramp. The protagonist sb should always be a tramp, that would be too stupid

I'm an old bookworm. I finished reading them all during my one-day holiday yesterday.

For someone with a homeless background, is it funny that the author repeatedly designed the plot of Max wasting food? Thinking about the members who are still living in tents in the camp, won't the protagonist's conscience hurt? Why isn't this another kind of "the wine and meat of the wealthy family smells bad, and the roads are frozen to death". If the author wants to write this work with a game mentality and treat everyone else as an intelligent NPC, then it doesn't matter if Max is set like this. The price is that the author needs to focus mainly on describing the game experience, treat other people as NPCs instead of emotions, work professionally, and have fun with everyone. Since the author has anchored the protagonist's background knowledge in a real parallel world and treats other people as real individuals, then wasting food repeatedly, in large quantities, and for a long time is a very depressing setting. A real white woman with normal intelligence who has been cooking for several years may not make delicious food due to cultural inheritance and talent, but she will not make such imbecile mistakes as adding more than ten spoons of salt or undercooking things. The material selection of this work is already a top choice due to the popularity of the killing line. In addition, the author's own writing style is also very good, which is enough to make this work an excellent novel. There is no need to add small details such as the dark cooking plot, but it has the effect of superfluous. The suggestion I have in mind is to directly remove the plot of Max cooking dark dishes, because it has nothing to do with the main plot and conflicts with his character setting.

This book is getting more and more interesting Come on! Keep!

The prototype of Forrest Gump was that the United States recruited a large number of mentally retarded people who were poisoned by lead-containing tap water during World War II. Li Ada was rejected by the US military recruitment office when such people could go to the battlefield.

The story from the beginning of this book to the middle of the wilderness survival program may be said to be the best. The subsequent stories are all kinds of wit and pain. The system is offline as soon as you join the program. The daily task release system only appears when the author remembers that the protagonist needs to add some points. The skills of the protagonist depend on whether the author has remembered them or not. It is strongly recommended that the author sort out the protagonist's panel and learn from the authors of those system flows: Even if you do not publish a free chapter of the protagonist's panel regularly, you can open a separate file and sort out and summarize the protagonist's panel according to the timeline. It is convenient for reference when writing backwards, building the plot, and when you need to modify the previous plot.

Is this a bad ending? It ended so suddenly.