Everyday Cultivation in a Martial Arts World

Well, it's okay, I can watch it. Somewhat cool. But you can almost do it, but it won't look good if you suppress the protagonist. Because there was no cognition in the past, it was not necessary to recognize one's own power. If you continue to do this later, you will be overpowering the protagonist, which will not look good. And you also said in your article that the emperor has opinions about this place. In this case, there is no way to deal with a powerless child of destiny.

The writing is good, and the first few chapters don't seem to have major problems. However, as the plot unfolds and more and more characters appear on the scene, something very bad appears. The protagonist is like a silly son of a landlord. He lives in the bustling city with money, and everyone has to come to kidnap or prostitute him for free. The protagonist has too little knowledge. His sister claims to want him to live a normal life, but she is so big-hearted that she still comes to this place of right and wrong to play games. It is illogical. Even if she insists on taking her with her for the great opportunity in this city, she cannot look down on the protagonist every time. Don't say that everyone is afraid that killing the protagonist will lead to a violent death. There are always people who are not afraid of death who can do it. It is not difficult to catch him and run away and put him under house arrest. What's also frustrating is that his sister has raised the protagonist too poor, and can pull him around with just a few grains of silver at a time. This way of writing is really unpleasant. The protagonist of Xia Ke Xing is silly, but it is fun. The protagonist has had bad luck for so many years, but he has not promoted his loved ones around him to become super masters. It is unreasonable. I read Chapter 20 directly without reading other comments. It can be said that I did not read and write comments under the influence of the comment area.

If you want to make money, you should make more by suing the production team than you can by writing novels now.

I really accepted it.

The protagonist, who has been through two lifetimes, is also troubled and looks like a native idiot. It's really not my cup of tea, so I slipped away. . . . . .

Looks weird, female author?

There's not much else except that the main character is also a time traveler. His character is too childish, like an ignorant child.

It's so toxic that the comment section is filled with humans and machines, right?

Sword coming? If the protagonist is a native, I won't say anything, but if the protagonist is a time traveler, it would be a bit poisonous.

As mentioned above, the protagonist transforms into a mortal. He comes to the old dragon city to hang a dragon, and after catching it, he returns to the sect, settles the matter with his sister, and quickly introduces him to the sect. I think it looks better. Is it a chivalrous person or a martial artist? Damn it, if you can't read a novel and enjoy it, why bother? Right? Reality is boring enough in the first place, but reading novels is even more annoying. Those useless things are all useless things, with nothing new at all. Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is too much.