Versatile Mage: Starting Contract with Huangheilong

As the book was written, Tang Yue was written as the heroine. They got together because they were drugged at first, but the two of them had no contact after that. When it came to the plot of Xuan She, Tang Yue called and said, what the hell, tool man, she was cold on the phone. When they met, Aba and Aba said a few words and went to bed again, and then they got together. Damn it, why are you pretending to be cool and funny in front of you, and then you go to various places to make fun of the plot. Speechless.

The full-time mage explodes the country, Huanghei and Mingchi meet in a planet-level battle, Mingchi can nuclear level the new continent, Huanghei continent to the surface, in the card game mobile card game Huanghei and Black Dragon can leave the world of Monster Hunter, have the ability to travel through space, the black dragon Huanghei is on the same level as the goddess of creation in the card game.

Anyway, they are Huanghei's relatives on the border. Huanghei's ice and fire battles can be directly copied from Chifrog. Chifrog's battle scenes are large and difficult to write. When Chifrog is angry and exhales, the clouds in the border sky will be blown away and a blood moon will appear.

It's a mess of emotional scenes, Ding Yumian's chapter was too funny, will it still be like this later?

The emotional line is the same as that of Shi, and the characters are not well developed. I also like to randomly change the settings. Jiang Yu has reached the middle level at the age of 16. You are so awesome Aww, the government is still the middle level after almost 5 years. Is he a waste? Chapter 16 is extremely sb. If you like to abuse the master and make people disgusting Don't write about Huang Heilong, it looks disgusting.

The emotional scenes are too messy. You can write about the brotherhood with Mo Fan. The plot between Ding Yumian and Gu Long Dalu is too confusing.

Can the heroine not want Tang Yue? She really can't do it.

I don't know why there are always people who feel that they understand very well and think that light systems have been able to take advantage of the ancient times. Whether it is to put a light bulb in the dark to attract undead moths to the fire and commit suicide, or to put a large light bulb to blind teammates, or to face the undead and use purification to kill only one undead in the end, attracting firepower and buying time for teammates to escape. (Simply refers to the situation where ordinary people do not have the talent to awaken the light system)

It's already on the shelves after just twenty chapters, and for me, the plot of Monster Hunter is completely unnecessary.

After reading almost 60 chapters, I can only say that the characters and plot are not very good. What makes me speechless about the protagonist is that basically all the battles are based on being reckless and then abusing the master. It seems that it is not a battle unless the whole body is injured. It is basically a state of being tortured or abused. Without doing intelligence work, experiments, etc., I rely on my own experience in playing games to fight against the Lord Silver Dragon, and then After that, he was played around by the opponent, almost dying, and even shed tears in a sensational way. Huang Heilong was also forced to "self-destruct" and couldn't take the opponent away The strength of other characters is also very strange. Lu Zhenghe and Jiang Yu were already mid-level when Mo Fan was 16 or 7 years old, so they can't advance to high-level in the next few years? It takes 3 or 4 years for the dignified chief disciple to break through from intermediate to high level? I saw something unclear about Tang Yue in the comments section. After all, I haven't seen it yet. It was the part where the protagonist started school at the Imperial Academy that gave me a sense of seeing the little Zha San and Shrek. I don't know if other people have this feeling. The result of the verbal dispute was that he used the space system to break almost all of his body in front of everyone, and even crushed his fingers in front of him when his backer came. Then Song He and Pang Lai felt that the protagonist did the right thing, as if they were going to kill the little Zha San who had a dispute with the guard. Then Flanders said that he was mediocre for not daring to cause trouble. . . .

The hunter world that belongs to you is actually accessible to natives, 🙂🙂

I tried poison. I'm a novice. I'll give him a six out of ten. Hey, I can barely watch it, but it's very uncomfortable to watch.

I can't figure out the setting of Contract Summoning or Dimension Summoning.

Isn't it going to be released in chapter 20? I think all eunuchs are like this

Plagiarize the book Yu Tianlong Emperor

I've read twenty or thirty chapters. The ideas are great, but it's a pity that the writing and plot control are not very good.

Damn it, if the author hasn't read the original work, he shouldn't write a fanfic.

You can have a random Godzilla or Ghidorah

It's just a piece of cake, and changing the settings means nothing.