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The writing is okay, but I can write more carefully. I will subscribe again. Come on.
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Changing Tianxian's surname to Liu was a real failure!
Although I also like Sissi's single-female protagonist, these 31 chapters seem like a licking dog among licking dogs. You are a unilateral system and have no desire to continue reading.
The settings are a bit off.
You, the plug-in Xiao Liu, should know that if Xiao Liu is bound to you because he is a unilateral plug-in, this will be interesting. Now the protagonist is just playing soy sauce. Xiao Liu doesn't know that the plug-in is bound to you How she achieves will feel that it has nothing to do with you. It's like the protagonist now is just a soy sauce character. It's not outstanding enough. The plug-in Xiao Liu needs to know that it is bound to one side and can gain experience points on you. Only for the last two continuous communication and interactive sessions, The subsequent plot is good. The opening will not appear sudden and abrupt when inserted. Otherwise, if you appear to be the protagonist like this, some details of Xiao Liu's plot will be very stiff when you write them later. If you insert them forcefully, the most fatal
The title of the book should be changed to: Licking the dog works hard, Sissi wins by lying down...
87 After reading Chapter 88, I can only say 88 to the author... A bit naive...
Will I be sentenced to prison if I write my surname Liu directly? How many years will the sentence be?
I'm currently reading Chapter 23. Let's talk about the issue of dog licking. Although some of the protagonist's behaviors are very immature and slightly conflict with the character of the reborn + people in the circle, they are still within the acceptable range. After all, it is normal for a new author. What really makes the protagonist look like a bitch is actually the system plug-in setting. The most important thing is that when he is initially bound to the female protagonist, all the rewards given by the system are for the female protagonist. As the owner of the system, the male protagonist gets nothing. If this was a book in other categories, it would basically be a death sentence. The rewards given to the heroine are one for acting skills and the other for musical voice talent. This is obviously to pave the way for the heroine to produce musical works in the future. At the same time, if you give the male protagonist a screenwriter, a talent of arranging music and lyrics, wouldn't it be able to better promote the plot? Then the male protagonist will comment on the dog-licking system by the way, which is not only interesting, but also enriches the character image. It is not that readers cannot accept this situation where the protagonist is the system owner, but the early beneficiary is the female protagonist. However, the least you can do is make a bowl of water even, and you still have to give what is due. Also, when you introduce the system in the early stage, the price list is directly pulled out, and how much popularity is a skill worth? Wouldn't it be clear at a glance why you wrote that the male protagonist helps the female protagonist? As a result, you just casually mentioned that the female protagonist needs to post works to gain popularity points, so that the male protagonist can redeem her skills. Readers need to see the price list more intuitively to understand it. Finally, there is a question about the cool points of the system text. Isn't the most intuitive fun point of reading the system text the "Ding, congratulations to the host for gaining xxxx popularity"? As a result, when gaining popularity in Chapter 20, he used the sentence "The popularity has increased rapidly, and now it exceeds 500,000." It was supposed to be a foreshadowing for twenty chapters, but there was a small breaking point, but it ended in one sentence. . . As long as the author looks at how other system articles write about gains, Chapter 20 will not be so unpleasant.
I suggest that the author should not take it for granted when writing about China Entertainment, especially when it comes to single women. You must understand the feuding relationships among those stars in detail. Although there are not many good people in the entertainment industry, some of them really do not want to be deceived by marketing. In addition, they need to increase their viewing volume and write streamlined articles. They do not require the author to adapt scripts and plots, but they still need to have a wider range of choices, and the reading experience will be much better.
The author is a loser
My head hurts when I see the name😣. The male protagonist's name is hard to pronounce. He might as well be called Li Yunlong. At least the name can make us smile. The female protagonist changed her surname to Liu. I don't know what the author is afraid of.
It's quite secondary. Shouldn't it be better to make money from the little devils and spend it in the mainland? If you don't sell it to footbath chickens, what's the alternative to letting the pirates take the money? Also, don't keep making fun of Aunt Liu, she is not here to protect Sissi from disaster. You have written so many songs but you have written a few popular and professional songs. After registering with the top, the little shrimp below still dares to blatantly throw dirty water?
Tasteless
It's boring. The rest of the plot is all about quarrels with others. It feels like lowering your head and getting hit in the face. What's the use of getting it back later?
I don't know how you feel about it, but I think the protagonist is too licking and I can't stand it.
There are too many poisonous points in the system settings, and they are still very poisonous and unbearable. It is written as a pure licking of dogs, and the settings are very unreasonable. What you pay is far less than what you get.
Why write about an American? There are no beauties in China?
Seriously, not great. Too licking.
The setting is not very good. Whether it is acting or singing, it would be better for the protagonist to learn it faster instead of using it and mastering it herself.
The writing is quite good. The male protagonist is upright and does not wrong himself. It is really enjoyable to watch. I support it by voting for it
Sure enough, the text must be contrary to the protagonist's behavior
If Liu Yifei can't play a Marvel hero, then let's arrange some original heroes to join Marvel. It shouldn't be difficult to create some original characters, since Marvel has 100% authority. For example, swordsmen, monsters, nine-tailed foxes, etc., Or the male protagonist can play a live-action version of One Punch Man. The author can come up with some new ideas and it depends on how you make it up.
Disillusioned, I'm almost forty.