The Chinese Succubus in Kamen Rider Kyokushin

If you really want to write about the protagonist's transformation into a person who truly possesses the spirit of chivalry, you should not have this leadership aura. Instead, you should write about his inner transformation and his growth to truly infect the people around him, rather than having a systematic halo. In this way, the change and growth of the people around you are entirely due to the system. It feels like the system is polluting others. It is like the protagonist using mind control to control others. The subsequent changes in the people around him are a complete joke. It doesn't feel very consistent with the spirit of chivalry, and it doesn't feel consistent with the core point of what you want to write. It's a failure. After reading the first twenty chapters, I felt that something was not right. After upgrading the halo, I completely understood what was wrong and felt extremely uncomfortable. I felt that Chun Chun had turned on the charm of the protagonist, and I felt that I could do it even with me. With the setting of this leader's halo, I really feel that it is completely unacceptable and hinders the shaping of the protagonist.

From the beginning, it feels like a Japanese Asashi male protagonist, but there is a feeling of being forced to go to Asashi. It feels like I went to Asahi for the system mission, and it was not Asahi himself who got the reward. And Chinese succubi are generally not that gentle. Instead, use an idea to attract others and follow him. If you don't use Asasi to gain the trust of others and promote your own ideas, it feels like a cult. Use your gentleness to induce others to believe what you say. 😭😭😭 I didn't see it and wanted to see the Chinese-style succubus. The author's writing skills are not good .(=ＴェＴ=)Get scoldedz

Don't you think it's strange? I added some original characters for the sake of chivalry, which is good for them. Even the goldfish and the demon panda can understand it, but they don't have a good look at the protagonists other than Jinghe. I'm not talking about the protagonist's face towards them, and the author's face towards them is full of prejudice. If it's just a fan, I don't have any objection, but if you want to write about chivalry, shouldn't you erase the highlights that originally belong to Ji Fox because of your own prejudice? What you have written so far After the boss was eliminated, Jihu silently donated money, and Jinghe took Miyin to donate. When Miyin was infected, Jinghe was the only one to comfort him That's all you have written so far, but if you look carefully, does it become a pull and a step? It infinitely increases Jinghe's reputation as a good person, and lowers Yingshou's reputation as a good person To be honest, in my opinion, everyone in Jihu is a crazy person, including Jinghe. In the front, he is a good old person, but in the back, his sister started to take revenge after being accidentally solved by Niu, and even went to the dark side for revenge. He cooperated with his hands, but after gaining strength, he did not seek revenge from the mastermind behind the scenes. He just stared at Niu, the four-eyes and Jihu. After the Jihu was recast, he asked the four-eyes to save his sister and then joined the Jihu again. It was in line with what Hidetoshi said at the beginning of this drama: As long as your sister is okay, you can do whatever you want, right? You are the most arrogant one. I forgot the original text. Anyway, it was Jing He who said Ji Hu was too arrogant and Ji Hu responded with this sentence. Don't tell me that the people Jinghe resurrected were pushed back by Jihu. He set happiness to be conserved, so Jinghe resurrected these people, and then what? They burned, killed and looted, and even brought Jinghe's parents and sister in. How many people were killed? Although the current chapters have not expressed much prejudice against Niu and Miyin, they definitely have some prejudice against Jihu. Contrary to most people, my best impression of the drama Jihu is Yingshou. You can say that he is crazy in the play, and you can say that he is Just to find his mother and save the world is just incidental, but he is really capable, not to mention he himself is not bad. In the episode when he was eliminated, evil demons attacked his filming location. He could save people first, then go to Niu and others to restore his memory, and then in Even though he knew that he couldn't fulfill his wish even if he killed the boss, he still went to kill the boss alone. This proves that his saving the world is not directly related to finding his mother. Maybe Jihu deceives other characters and cheats on you by the way. We were also fooled Finally, I would like to say: Personally, I think Jihu is a very crazy drama, whether it is the plot or the main cast, but my ranking of the four main characters is Jihu, Jinghe, Maomao, and Niuniu. This may be different from most people. The above content is only my personal opinion. Because it was so long ago, I can't remember many things in the original drama. You can add or debate, but don't be too irritating. If you irritate, you are right.

The author is not very good at writing. The Chinese succubus is not that easy to write.

I understand chivalry, and I hope to see that the protagonist's chivalry is exclusive to the protagonist, because every knight's chivalry is different, but in summary, it can be said in one sentence: Kamen Rider Kuuga protects everyone's smiles, Yajida protects the possibilities of human beings, 555 protects the dreams of others, W, protects the city where he is, and the old driver protects the citizens, Ai Kesaide is the ultimate rescuer and protects patients. Kamen Rider Soki protects love and peace. Even Wang Xiaoming, who walks in the gray area, has something to protect, which is the world of his girlfriend. In order to protect his girlfriend's world, he will not hesitate to become enemies of all the knights. During the Kamen Rider period, the king protected history. If history runs normally, no one will remember him? Including himself, but once someone interferes with the correct direction of history, the Knight King will appear and correct this mistake. Therefore, every Kamen Rider has chivalry. What is chivalry? It is the belief that you persist in. No matter it is good or bad, as long as you protect you, you are a Kamen Rider. Regardless of whether your guardian is someone else or yourself, chivalry is the only difference between a weirdo and a knight. Knights with chivalry are called masks. Knights without chivalry can only be called weirdos, or alien knights. The reason why alien knights look so ugly is because they use this power to satisfy their own selfish desires and their evil hearts. This kind of appearance comes from the heart. This is a strange knight. Because he has no knight's heart and spirit, that's why his appearance is so ugly. I suggest you find your predecessor, the Mask, Knight, and Rider who lives in the DC world. His name is Ke Wen. Learn from him and develop your own Kamen Rider form. You always use other people's discriminatory forms. When you go to the show in the future, you will meet two identical ones. Wouldn't you feel embarrassed? Therefore, it is best to create a knight form that is exclusive to you. Only this knight form that is exclusive to you can exert 100% of your original power, or even reach 1000%, to exert your strength. Specifically speaking, chivalry means that when you hear the cry for help, you cannot ignore it. When they meet people in trouble, they will lend a helping hand. The Kamen Riders are not gods, they are also human beings, and they will also fail, but for the hope in the children's hearts and the dreams in their hearts, no matter how many times they fail, they will stand up, even if many people in the world are against the Kamen Riders. To have a person, you need a Kamen Rider to call the name of the Kamen Rider, and they will appear, because they are warriors who protect the weak. Children, move forward, believe in the justice in your heart, and we will always protect you, because we are the heroes of the children, Kamen Rider, What is the heart of a knight? Isn't it just idealism? What is idealism? Some people do it for the hope of others, some people do it to protect smiles, some people do it for love and peace, some people do it for the health of patients, some people fulfill their obligations, some people do it for food, some people do it for the community, no matter what they do, knights are a group of lovely guys who have a reason to fight. Just like Xiao Ming said in the last chapter of Master Fa, knights never fight for justice. There is always a reason to fight. The reason why knights are knights is because of their heart. Otherwise, what is the difference between it and supernatural novels? In addition, don't ignore the essence of chivalry. Don't make the protagonist miserable like most knight novels. The essence of chivalry's heart is not that the protagonist wants to protect others no matter how miserable he is, but that he never forgets the heart of protecting others no matter when and where. This is The true appearance of Kamen Rider, the hero of children, I am the most essential form of Kamen Rider. To put it simply, chivalry is to use a mask to hide tears, use anger to crush the darkness, use the fists in your hands to protect the weak, and use this body to create a future for the world. This is the hero of children.

Can't seem to look like a Chinese succubus

But apart from being written in Chinese characters, how is the content in your book Chinese?

My suggestion is that the author should read more of Mao's Selections

The author writes that the protagonist and a 37-year-old daughter form a cp with an old aunt like the protagonist, and then asks the protagonist to match up the male lead and the female lead... I'm not a buddy, I'd rather you write without a female lead, and if you have to have an old aunt, don't write a story where the protagonist gives away girls to others.

Miyin and Jinghe are not worthy at all. Together, these two will sooner or later use up all the money Kurama Guangsheng earns. The best partner for Miyin is a social elite who can carry the Kurama Group.

I don't understand, what is a Chinese succubus? The word succubus itself is negative and derogatory. The author wants to express that the protagonist is very charming, but it is really inexplicable and it is enough to use a derogatory word to describe it. Look at the author's description of the protagonist. It can only be said that he has a very charming personality and a leadership temperament. A person with firm and lofty ideals. But this kind of character design can't be considered Chinese, right? This kind of people are not only found in China. Let's not mention history for now. You can just grab a lot of various novels, animations, or literary works. How can it be called Chinese style? It's not unique to China.

The beginning is Asasi, a taste of small life

Die Jia: Some people may be unhappy when I say this, so just block me if you see that I'm unhappy, don't be too lazy. . . . . . I am very curious whether the author wrote the story based on the appearance of Jihu, or whether he wrote the story based on the core after deconstructing Takahashi. It is the saddest thing to write about Jihu but not understand Takahashi. To change the world, you must first understand the world. The book "Jihu" was created by Takahashi in order to take revenge on the audience, relying on a carefully disguised reply. The positions of the four protagonists are: Fox God: Protagonist, Evil God (similar to Tanli Dou, Xumajia) Jinghe: Evil God's sacrifice, true heroine, true male protagonist (similar to Oren, Yongmeng) Miyin: Mouth substitute of the Evil God (the trumpet prepared by Takahashi for the Fox God, Fox God If there is any inconvenience, Takahashi will arrange for Miyin to come on) Niu: Takebu's mission, because Takahashi was broken by Takebu's elbow outside the play, so Takahashi wrote Niu into a mess The fox god is a real evil god, and his goal is to find his mother, but it is not MCM. MCM is just a cover designed by Takahashi. The fox god is looking for a mother who can fully tolerate him. As for Jinghe, it just happens that he is this existence. Before Miyin was infected, the Fox God had not observed Jinghe, so his attitude towards Jinghe was average. After that, the Fox God, who observed Jinghe, started a series of coin minting operations. First I tried to replicate the operation of the first meeting, but it failed. Then he reopened the world and began to disguise himself as the hero in Jinghe's eyes. Takahashi was very good at this, but he was very good at information. In the end, he successfully adjusted the Raccoon Power Station. The audience outside the play were also successfully trained by the Fox God because of their perspective and the good reputation accumulated by the senior knights over the decades. In the comics written by Takahashi, the villain is the predecessor of the Fox God. This tough guy said: If you believe in me, I will save the world. If you betray me, I will destroy the world. Fox God also exists like this. So in the end Jinghe "voluntarily" became a sacrifice to the evil god, and the Fox God happily gave Jinghe the world he wanted. (Because he didn't want to deal with the relationship between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law, the fox god chose to bury his father-in-law and mother-in-law back.)

Emmm, I don't know if this is the first time for the author to write a book, but it always gives me the feeling of a novice. It's like you wrote the outline and then used AI to polish it. Many places are written strangely, which gives me a feeling that it doesn't flow smoothly. Some places are too stiff.

Have you seen Kamen Rider? Some things were written randomly, so I took it for granted.

Although, you, the protagonist, won't mess with why you don't strike when you should strike, don't kill the enemy, mother-in-law, let the enemy run away or fight back, right?

You are right, but hate the sin but not the person! There is no need for a reason to believe it! So believe it! Just like me who believes in you! (Don't worry, I don't believe it myself)

The introduction just smells like a weirdo holding a knight's belt.

I'll be honest, I was very unhappy watching it, and I didn't see any use for the protagonist. It just filled the plot with a protagonist and some passers-by to create some unpleasant plots These people you forced in have no positive impact on the plot, but are constantly lowering the perception.

It's so stupid. You've been a good person for so long and you've achieved nothing.

Tokusatsu - two-dimensional niche literature, Kamen Rider - tokusatsu niche literature, Jihu - Kamen Rider niche literature. After several screenings, I don't know how many target readers there are, so I would like to give the author a thumbs up, it's purely out of love.

For Chinese succubi, what I want is to have a firm goal that can resonate with others and be achieved together. And the protagonist has certain abilities to achieve it. Otherwise, he will become like a civet cat.