The Prodigy of Red Mansion

Purely enjoyable novel, not boring, not appetizing, the more you read, the better it gets, one episode every day, simple happiness 🤭

. . . It's outrageous from the first chapter, so this book can't be read with your brain in mind. I just watched two and couldn't stand it anymore. First of all, in ancient times, just because you had a photographic memory did not guarantee you would be the top scorer. Secondly, wouldn't it look silly for you to speak ill of Baoyu directly? Do you think you, a bastard with no status, actually orchestrated Jia Baoyu's behind his back? How crazy can a person be to do such a thing? Thirdly, Daiyu's production was also poorly written. If you have studied Chinese in middle and high school (there is an article "Lin Daiyu Enters Jia's Mansion"), you will know after reading it that Lin Daiyu is not like what you wrote. . . How to say it? Too naive and childish. What you wrote doesn't look like Lin Daiyu at all, and I don't want to see how the images of other women in Red Mansions have been distorted.

Just watch the fun, it doesn't matter if it's reasonable or not, it doesn't matter

It reads like a running novel, but it is inexplicably enjoyable. It is much more enjoyable than those books with better writing skills and grander story ideas at the beginning (the scope of comparison is the Red Mansions novel that is currently being updated). Although there are some parts of the plot that are a bit strange, such as the awkward part of reminding Lin Daiyu at the beginning, the overall pace is fast and enjoyable. I hope the word count won't be too high when it's released later, then I think I can continue to pursue it. In terms of concept, I also like Lin Daiyu, a lively and cute character.

The situation is bigger. There are intrigues and fights in the Jia Mansion every day. What is the biggest reason for the decline of the Jia Mansion? It has no real power. Ever since the deaths of Wang Ziteng and Yuan Chun, their decline was doomed, and Wu De only accelerated the process. If you want to save the Jia family, you have to take power. Readers want to see the golden hairpin. It won't work if you travel too early or if you are too old or too young. You can only dress like a king. In terms of age, Jia Lan starts at 7 years old and Jia Zhu died at 20. It is conceivable that he will start at 27 alive. You can't surpass him. In ancient times, there were three unfilial piety. Too slow. Therefore, if you want to rise to power quickly, you can either become a military commander, follow the route of champion prince, or become a close minister of the emperor. These are all routes that can be considered. If you succeed in rising to power, you will naturally be able to save the Jia family, but be careful not to mess with Sichun, Wang Xifeng, and the sister-in-law, who will lose your reputation. , Your official position is not big, your target can only be chosen among Baochai, Daiyu, and Xiangyun. Daiyu, although you are true-tempered, you basically left for your future between 10 and 20, and you have no time to flirt with her. She and Baoyu have been deeply in love since they were childhood sweethearts. Xiangyun, you are too young. It is not appropriate for you to be 20 years old and suppress a 12-year-old girl. I think the ideal type of wife in ancient times is Baochai, and she is of the right age. For military commanders, a wife with a high family background can easily cause jealousy. The Xue family is rich, and the Xue family just needs your power If you travel beyond the four major families, you can take them all, but there is no need to force the plot. You only need to wait for the Jia family to fall and recruit people.

There is no problem in affecting Jia Baoyu's image in Lin Daiyu's mind. But the author's method is to speak ill of Jia Baoyu in front of Mrs. Xing and Lin Daiyu. Are you shocked? Not to mention the background of Dream of Red Mansions, even in this day and age, there are only a few people who can do things with such IQ and EQ. The threshold for writing novels is really low

There are so many beauties in the Red Mansion that it attracts countless men to bow their waists; the four springs of the Jia Mansion compete for beauty, and the beautiful jade from Xiangyun competes with the romantic; Welcome all book friends to walk into the world of Red Mansions with me and experience different dreams.

It is recommended that if you want to write a fan novel, you should read more original works. At the beginning, Daiyu was told to be careful about "Jia Baoyu". You have to know that in ancient times, unless you were swearing, it was very rude to address people by their first name and surname. Of course, it can be explained that the protagonist has low education and does not understand when he first arrived at the Red Mansion, but at least Mrs. Xing who was present must have given him a few words of instruction.

As for the way the protagonist came up with to drive a wedge between Daiyu and Baoyu, he spoke ill of Baoyu in front of Mrs.

When I saw the chapter angrily criticizing Baoyu, I couldn't stand it anymore. Has the author ever seen Red Mansions? Baoyu is the eyeball of Jia Mu and the treasure of Mrs. Wang. You are an unloved concubine of a wealthy family. You are not very old and have no real power. If you go to attack Baoyu, you really don't want to live peacefully...

It's like a silly comparison, and it's very ridiculous. Look at the protagonist's appearance when he met Lin Daiyu for the first time. The dialogue was simply speechless. How can an eight-nine-year-old and a six-seven-year-old child have such a dialogue? Author, weren't you embarrassed when you wrote it?

Nine-year-old Daiyu falls in love with the 11-year-old protagonist. At this age, the protagonist takes a concubine and runs errands for the emperor. I always feel so inconsistent. I am in the third grade of elementary school.

Jia Tanchun has been put to death. I really can't stand it anymore. I can't accept this kind of plot that goes against modern science and ethics. . . .

It's hard for you to imagine that a person who is strategizing and decisive in killing will just turn around and laugh and play in a friendly manner with the maids and ladies.

When I saw some small businessmen or bastards who had made soap and perfume in ancient times, I was immediately persuaded to quit, because I knew that even if you could make it, it would be useless, and even if you gave the formula, it would be the life of a workshop leader at most 😁

Characteristics of this hour. First, the male protagonist has been loyal to the emperor for so many years, and the emperor has been kind to him. In the end, the male protagonist even plotted to usurp the throne. To be honest, I find it quite unacceptable, even if you seize the throne of the next generation of emperor. Secondly, the male protagonist is already the Duke of the country and proposes marriage to Xue Baochai, but Aunt Xue firmly refuses, saying that she cannot be a legitimate wife. Please, you are just a businessman's daughter, and you are not the legitimate daughter of Prince Zhongshun. How can you be qualified to say such a thing?

The author who writes historical articles must have gone to college, right? Why do you keep emphasizing the age of 18? This was unfilial and irresponsible in ancient times. People aged quickly in ancient times. When writing about ancient times, don't refer to the current legal requirements. If nothing else, just push it back 100 years. Half of girls become mothers at the age of 13, and those who are not married at 16 are a minority.

This book... Is full of traps, all the characters have no intelligence at all, they are a bunch of fools...

A maid dared to secretly reveal the secret message from the Five Cities Soldiers and Horses. The protagonist didn't take it seriously. Before, she thought it was just a subjugation. Seeing this, it is purely a poisonous article.

How do you persist? Chapter 6 I can't stand looking for Xiangling anymore

This is a very poisonous book. I feel that the author has not understood the Red Mansion at all, nor the environment in the Red Mansion. The protagonist is so out of touch, and it is so embarrassing to watch. Such a protagonist can live for hundreds of chapters, but he has no ability. He wants to bully someone every day, or find the twelve golden hairpins 😥. At this level, let's write Red Mansions fan fiction. There's a reason why it's not popular.

From the very beginning, you show your uncertainty to others. He revealed things in advance before they happened, which was so awesome.

I really don't understand. Many authors are like this. They arrange for the protagonist to travel before Daiyu enters Jia's house, shouts to save Daiyu, and inexplicably copies a plot from the original work where Jia Baoyu gives Daiyu a character. You set Daiyu to be the heroine, and then let Jia Baoyu molest Daiyu at the beginning? As long as Daiyu did not marry Jia Baoyu, the word "frowning" would be a stain on her reputation for the rest of her life.

Go get a job, you don't have the intelligence to write a novel. Go ahead and drive the screws.

How did you see the back?

😁 Read it in one go. The beginning is really good. Keep up the good work!

Against the odds, it's written in no Red Mansions style.

After reading the first few chapters, I can only say that the person who has traveled through time has only a little brain, so let him go back through time. After all, there are not so many rules in modern times.

It would be better if you are a little older, but it is easy to get into trouble if you are too young. Although the average life span in ancient times was relatively short, not many people started to fight against the sky and the earth at the age of 9. In addition, does Daiyu have one less maid, Xueyan?

Not bad, looks really cool! More updates, no more eunuchs