From 49 Cities to the Stock-Hoarding Era of Young Educated Youths in the Snowy Plains

In 1961, I went hunting, hahaha, I laughed to death. People in ancient times couldn't eat enough, so why didn't they eat meat? Hahahahahahahaha

It just felt wrong. The protagonist has such a golden finger and knowledge, which is both a high school textbook and a barefoot doctor's manual. I thought you were going to take the engineer route. Turns out you're really hunting. Dude. Be realistic. In 1961, if you could find some grass near Beijing, I would see if there were wild boars. Being a technician is better than hunting. Also, what you write seems to be fantasy or science fiction. You just go to blacksmithing. Just a real hand fight.

It's just a few chapters. Read your article yourself. It's filled with all kinds of adjectives and there's no main storyline. It's so annoying that I almost had to rewrite it. Don't use hundreds of adjectives for every object and thing. You're not writing a homework composition, you're writing a novel.

What the hell are you writing? It's totally wrong.

It's written in a tomato frame again. You can write without logic there, but you can't write it here. It won't stand up to scrutiny at all.

The starting point was crazy, now there are a lot of courtyards, and writing about hunting in courtyards is crazy. Say goodbye to rubbish.

The writing is indeed disorganized and has no beginning or end.

It was probably written with AI. It looks like a complete idiot at first glance.

The whole thing is disgusting, a piece of shitty stuff created by modern bad people.

Ai piles up crappy books that don't make sense